NaraK

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I have some questions to ask about your character. I'm no co-GM, but there were several things that caught my attention.

First things first, Shadow Step.

How long does this last? It sounds as if it lasts for a pretty long time ad can be used freely, seeing how he can technically hide behind anything that is a solid image. I don't know what the last phrase in particular means (pardon me, English is honestly not my first language ;_;).

Shadowform: So you can pass by anything? How often can he do this? I don't think it'll provide any counterplay to those who actually want to hit him if he simply keeps that form on, and seeing how this is his travelling method (dunno if this is only for combat travel or not), it sounds as if he can remain invulnerable for a fairly long time without losing a massive amount of energy.

Spectral Torture: This is a pretty cool ability. I dunno, I just wanted to point that out lol

Demonic Purge: This particular ability is what I'm worried about the most. While it is a fairly simple ability with a consequence fully present, there's are no consequences for Bael utilizing this ability.

Demon Form: That's a freaking awesome transformation. Again, I just wanted to point that out.

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I don't know if it's just me, but the ability kit he carries currently contradicts the fact that constant use of his abilities weakens him. Listing out the side-effects would certainly help balance out some things, because I'm sure you did not intentionally make him slightly overpowered. ^^

Basically, I think you should add in notes on what happens to Bael when he uses each ability. But maybe I'm just nitpicking way too much, I dunno. His personality seems fitting of his character, and his background is different from most of the C.Sheets and pretty awesome. :D

btw, I love dat appearance, though I don't know who that exactly is. o_o

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Gonna go eat some stuff. Updating this post with something important soon.

EDIT: Nvm, this post isn't that important after all.

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ReaptheMusic said
Actually, I'm a lady thanks. .3. When are we starting?

Sorry, my mind was blown for thirty minutes for making such a mistake.

It's gonna start either tomorrow or tomorrow's tomorrow. In the mean time, you may add in more features to your CS and stuff. Or ask questions. :D

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And then I make Ryuu accidentally drop a bowl of demon soup on her from a mile away trolololololol (just kidding, he's too dense to even eat soup properly anyway)

ARGHH!!! You know what, I'm gonna take a deep breath and hope that my motivation in creating a new character returns. I'll come up with something original. I promise.

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So I was working on my CS, and then I accidentally pressed my the "First" button at the bottom of the page.

I'm gonna go dump my head into a fridge for a sec

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ReaptheMusic said
:D

Young man, are you happy now that you're fired accepted? If so, awesome. Welcome to the friend zone Piratebay club.

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...I probably should've crossed Piratebay club instead of "friend zone."

Anyway, feel free to fire away with question! Frizan got his question answered, though I certainly won't mind if more were asked. :D

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YOU'RE DEFINITELY FIRED ACCEPTED. Everyone, let us embrace this manly Ray with thermopacked arms.

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Holy crap she has a gun

Great character, I'd say! That's one detailed background, and probably one of the deeper ones. As expected of our GM. ;_;

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Driving Park said
NarayanK, we already have awkward, go for perverted.The image works fine for me on Chrome and Opera Mobile.

Time to pervert.

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Yay! Ryuu's living with a ghost.

Honestly, even I don't know how things would turn out lol

EDIT: NEW TITLE SO SMOOTH ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH *nosebleeds a waterfall carrying Noah's ark*

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Theobromine said
By the way, is anyone else getting this?:

That's the same thing I mentioned a few pages back. So I presume it's not only happening to me. TextCraft itself stated that hotlinking causes issues, and it's generally not recommended.

Also, I do like the idea of a battle tourney, though I'm not gonna go ape-crackers over it. I do, however, have MANY methods in condensing lengthy fights, one of them being a cooperative posting method, so feel free to ask me for help if something like that pops up.

On another note, would you guys rather have a silent, awkward woman, or a frequently active, perverted woman? I want to see which one people would prefer at this point of the RP because... well, I dunno. To boost up the fun factor. o_O