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0AngeldeviL0 said
Updating my last CS will require going back 23 pages, so i will post my answer here. Considering that it is early in the morning here, I haven't taken my breakfast yet and it is affecting my brain. Thus, affecting my answers. I will reread this post after I eat :>-I think I've explained this part. She can only go back to the memories she knows. She cannot travel to one of your past (except if you've encountered her) because she cannot perceive them. And, anyway, she chooses not to time-travel, knowing she could change her life again if she does. What happened to her uncle was enough of a problem already, because she disturbed the scales in the past.-I just wanted that to be hidden in her "history". Not all of us reveals everything that has happened to their characters in the past, right? I hoped to reveal the reason during the game... that is how I play :)-Yup, it is. Again, this was supposed to be revealed in the game, but I will write it down now for you. Keath wasn't supposed to have powers---she was supposed to be a normal person. The accident awakened her powers inside her, it made her want to change the events, to bring her parents back to life. She couldn't, however, because she wasn't there at the accident. Even if she brought back time before that, her parents would no longer exist anymore. (Hold on, I got confused with my own explanation. Let me clarify things a bit: The accident only consisted of the car and her parents, right? They died, and bringing them back to life if considered a taboo. One of Keath's abilities doesn't involve bringing dead people back to life, so if she returned through time, they wouldn't be there anymore. Or, if they were, they would die the same death and Keath won't be able to do anything about it. OKAY?) Also, she was still a novice. If she used her ability, she could make horrible mistakes. The memory with her uncle only fueled her power, summoning up courage for her to travel back and make new choices. But that was the last time she had ever used her ability. And anyway, her power's no use most of the time. -My characters always reveal a small part of me. Keath is one of those parts. I guess I created her so I could really the character and be the game.

That explains a lot, actually. I accept this character now! I'm looking forward to seeing this character in the roleplay.

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I'm as patient as a bartender would ever be.

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FaithsRose said
Don't worry I got this...

Oh

A moon loses to an ocarina. No wonder Armstrong managed to walk on it.

On another note, I'm glad to be typing on a freakin' keyboard again.

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FaithsRose said
phew, glad about that xD Personally, my inspiration was starting to dwindle...-.- Action is going to awesome, especially with this many powers swirling about xD I shall keep an eye out for the time skip then ^^

First day of a roleplay.

The moon from Majora's Mask comes closer.

Sh-t just got real. Two days remain.

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On another note, I highly guarantee that you will enjoy the action. HylianRose's been working hard even with a busy schedule, so it's not a risk to expect a lot out of this roleplay in general!

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Theobromine said
I have another character. I haven't written his background yet because I want to see if the rest of him can get approved first. 174 cm (5’ 7”) 55 kg (121.3 lbs) <- Don’t try this at home kids. Not a good weight to be in at this height.His hair color is orange (dyed). Leroy Yew 20 Male Human – Leroy is, without a doubt, a genius. Paintings, wooden carvings, pottery, etc… If it’s art-related, he’s done it. Among the many countless creations he’s made so far, his ink paintings receive the most attention. Using only black, red, blue, and yellow ink he creates works of art that captivates the eye and send shudders down people’s spines. Sometimes literally.Using ink as his medium, Leroy can make people feel certain emotions by painting pictures, or leaving a mark on the person with his hand. If he paints something with a specific emotion in mind, whoever looks at the painting will experience that emotion. Generally looking away from the painting will allow the emotion to dissipate, but similar to the suspension bridge effect sometimes the illusory feeling he has the person feel can end up triggering their real emotions which tends to linger.If he leaves a fingerprint on someone after dipping his finger in ink, he can leave them a vague sense of the emotion he wants them to feel. A mere fingerprint is not very strong and it may just leave the person more confused than anything else really, wondering why they suddenly felt a certain way. A complete handprint, however, is much stronger. For he instills ‘fear’ into someone with an ink handprint, they can go into a panic attack or even go insane if the mark is left on the person for several days. Washing the mark away (or removing the piece of clothing the mark is on) will remove his effect on the person, but the emotion the person feels won’t disappear right away. He can’t use his ability without ink. He can create a very weak substitute with his blood, but the potency of his power is essentially halved.Leroy’s sense of touch seems rather ‘dull’ compared to most people. This can sometimes be a source of strength (e.g. he can ignore a lot of pain and keep moving), however usually this causes a lot of trouble for him. It takes him longer to notice he’s injured, meaning he can move that area and make the injury worse. He can go outside in scorching heat and not realize the ‘discomfort’ he feels is actually a sign he’s getting heat stroke until he eventually falls onto the ground.Perhaps as a result of his dulled touch, he does not handle impairments to his sight very well. For example, darkness. He needs to be able to see properly. Covering his eyes, being in complete darkness, or basically anything that makes him feel ‘blinded’ will make him panic and lash out. He smiles warmly, keeps his words and actions polite, and always goes out of his way to reach out to help people. How scary. Leroy’s kindness is not an act, however, the warmth is a lie. He is pointlessly kind, and can be pointlessly cruel in return. A child can selflessly rescue a butterfly from a spider’s web just because they felt it should be done, but another can rip off the butterfly’s wings without feeling a single tinge of remorse or guilt. He is a child without guidance. Innocent, yet cruel. - TO BE COMPLETED - Study: History: Art, Philosophy3, just 1 left for me if this gets approved. :P

jenkins

So now we have the painter. Awesomesauce!

Let's get to some feedback.

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-The ink idea is pretty much the bread & butter highlight of this guy, and I like it!

If the handprint's initial power is toned down a LITTLE (and make it grow in power gradually), then I'll gladly accept this Mario paint mastah! ;D (however, if you do not want this modification, I'll still accept him as he is)

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...Yeah. There isn't much to say about him. Good job!

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0AngeldeviL0 said
Uhm, I don't ALWAYS go online. On summer vacation, I go online alternately, or sometimes even twice a week. On school days, I go online once a week, because of certain academic reasons. Is my schedule reasonable and excusable enough so you won't "accidentally" erase my character?

Very, very, very strange. This CS was buried underneath our crazy antics, and I'd like to finally go over this one. (ty HylianRose for begging telling me about this CS)

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The way you described time-travelling is, by far, one of the stranger abilities I've seen in this roleplay. Of course, feedback is a drug that helps anyone.

-I... am not sure what to think about her changing her past. Sure, I think it's acceptable for her to do so a few times in her life, but if she is able to change her own past fairly frequently (even around present time), then that means she is somewhat capable of changing the pasts of others, making her pretty overpowered in a way. This is one of the few sketchy things I see in this CS. It's not specific enough- at least, not yet.

-How is it revealed that the uncle knows about Keath's powers? Actually, does he still meet Keath when her father's friend takes her in?

-Is time-travelling the only power she has? Powers are not limited to only supernatural abilities. Just pointing that out.

-Her personality may not get many people to have their characters interact with Keath in some way, but judging by your schedule, it might seem to be a logical thing to give her that persona. This one's personally up to you for modifications if you want to.

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She's looking good! I just want more details, as well as some clarifications.

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Ebil Bunny said
Snakes devouring crocodiles is way better then drama anyway :P

Anaconda OP master

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Posted at the IC. Expect Nathaniel to go to the student center soon, and Ryuu at the garden.

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Ryuu grinned.

"I'll be there before the friggin' part'ay begins! I hope there are a lot of jerks there... Cause I could show you how awesome my powers are with some training dummies!...

...I'm kidding. Sort of."

When Serena stated that she was leaving, Ryuu called out, "Hey, wait- I didn't even get your phone number yet!"

The otaku blinked, watching the havoc she made. He decided not to worry about it; after all, she seemed to demonstrate how easy it was to spot her. Preventing himself from laughing at the kitsune, he immediately turned to David, standing up as he took out a notepad and a pencil.

"Alright, Dave," he said, his first and last biscuit in his mouth. "I'll be givin' ya my email. Remember, when you type in '0taku,' the letter O is actually a zero. Catch ya at the party!"

Ryuu hurriedly ran, looking as if he were chasing after a fox. In truth, however, he was going somewhere else. In fact, he had begun to panic when he realized that his back had felt light for the entirety of the day.

Out of all things, I leave my f-ing BACKPACK at the AUDITORIUM! Way to go, Ryuu! You'll grow up to be a fine dumbass someday!

The sunglasses-wearing student flew by many students, fully intent on reclaiming his bag. And he forgot that he needed to make a call to his sister soon. A quieter place would be a good choice.

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Terotrax scratched his head, confused by... something.

"That's really strange," he thought aloud. "I coulda sworn I felt somethin' supah'-awesome here..."

He was sure that his necklace was working, but alas, it seemed the source of pain had vanished. Had there been the source, then he would have been singing and dancing already. People told him that his music brought life, even if he was not aware of it. Even the man who gave him the necklace seemed to enjoy the hyperactive soundtracks he showcased. Terotrax was confident in at least helping others feel better if that really was the case.

"Well, I better get goin'," he said, putting down his boombox with a wide smile. "But first: practice time!"

Turning the boombox on at a low volume, the man warmed his skills up a bit. He heard on his way here that a party would begin, though he had no idea in where it was going to take place in. The student, however, trusted nature, and he believed that he would somehow find the party by himself. He could bring even more life into other people's hearts! That alone was enough for his dream to become a mighty fine, spiritual healer of music.

He tried out several breakdances, his hands planted firmly on the boombox sitting on the ground. He sure was still a flexible giant.

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Ebil Bunny said
I never actually watched that movie. I just sort of popped on YouTube, randomly searched for something, and boom, perfect theme song. That's how I usually come up with theme songs for my characters XD

It's actually a mini-drama. In other words, I just saw it airing an episode before watching snakes devouring crocodiles.

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FaithsRose said red panda

Is it weird that I laughed because of this? ryuu shipping all the way

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Time to search for my headphones.