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Sukui said
Waitin' for Anedine to be listed before i make her first move, and Isse's next move.Oh, and also, Anedine's more moemoe than Lily, since judging from how Lily looks in the pics, she's somewhat more serious.Also more similarity: Anedine and Lily both has more than two pictures of the same character.


Moe?

Moe is an understatement lol

Good variety of characters. <_> I can't wait to see her in action.
Ebil Bunny said
Wow, Anedine is almost exactly like little Lily was. Kind of. A little bit. XDI need to find good themes for my characters .-.


Well, their backstories are completely different, so I'm okay with that. Anedine is more based on peaceful nature with naturistic, while Lily is a fallen angel who has angelic powers. If we put more focus on combat and weaknesses, then I can list out a lot of things.
(Plus (+) signs mean that the two both have these abilities)
Lily Brightendale

+Can heal
-Can cast compressed light energy
-Can generate angelic auras
-Can talk to water (o_O)
-Weak VS. dark magic
+Afraid of death
+Afraid to stand up without allies/friends by her side

Anedine Anceril

+Can heal
-Has a form of Crowd Control (ie. Vine Entanglement)
-Can control 2 lesser animals
-Mana-dependant
-Unable to multi-cast when using certain abilities
-Open to attacks while casting spells
+Afraid of death
+Afraid to stand up without allies/friends by her side
So, yeah/ They feel similar, but are certainly not like each other in every single way. I can still tell between the two, which is why I gladly accepted Anedine. (We need more kind characters. <_>)

Strikethrough because I'm stupid
On another note, I will be posting at the IC again soon.
EDIT: Oh hai thar, hylian

EDIT 2: What did you even say lol, I don't even
Sukui said
Do most second sheets applied here been commonly given feedback, by the way?


Usually, the first ones get feedback more than the second ones do. I can certainly say that the reason is probably because people get the gist of the roleplay after their first CS, along with their first few IC Posts. I tend to just look deeper into 2nd character sheets for just more improvement in general, but I usually do not find that many problems. Yours in particular was just balanced and well-made. :D

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0AngeldeviL0 said
ARIGATOU GOZAIMAS~! Anyway, you weren't pestering. :)


We like to pester, though. o_o
Theobromine said
'Morning everyone (in my time zone anyway)! :) Also, my characters' theme songs:


Yooooo morning.

Nice themes! I'm particularly interested in that PsychoPass thing. o.o
Noob, seeing that riding a Ford was a totally Noobish thing to do, hesded toward the Barthelus. He concluded that Edmodo was only going to be useful for those who did not want to ride the old Ford model. Without any hesitation present in his face (though, he was quite confused with technology in general), the black ninja acknowledge Barthelus' advice and went over to the trunk. He opened it.

A Counter-Terrorist huddled inside with a gun looked up at Noob. Noob looked back at the Counter-Terrorist with a blank expression.

"..."

"..."

Needless to say, he beat the living days out of the unfortunate soul before entering the trunk, bursting out of the passenger seats after shutting the trunk door closed.

27 Counter-Terrorists Remain!
Sukui said
Height: 5'1''Weight: 122 lbs.Name: Anedine Anceril>Title: Little DruidAge: 17 Gender: FemaleRace: ElfPowers: Anedine generally incorporates nature-type magic in her abilities, and is thus reliant on any lifeform around whether plant or animal, as long as that life is not sentient.>Extended Life Expectancy: Whereas a human lives to be at an average age of 85 years old, elves has a naturally longer lifespan of over 130 years old. Alongside with that, she ages slightly slower, which explains her looking fourteen while actually being seventeen.>Vine Entanglement: Anedine can sprout up vines from the ground to trap someone. Because the vines aren't thorned, they deal little damage except for strangling, and the vines being sprouted are often weak that it just takes the force of opening a door to get out. Thus, this is more of slowing someone rather than actually stopping them to a full halt.>Healing: Anedine uses natural magical energies around her to tend to wounds and increase their healing speed. A normal 2 in. cut takes 20 seconds to heal. >Pet: Anedine can near-instantly convince an animal to stay with her and assist in something, whether it be chores or combat. She can only pet two, however, as when a third animal is attempted, one of the original animals will leave her control.Weaknesses:Because most of her spells are highly dependent on mana, Anedine risks being open to attack when her magical essences run out, thus requiring a potion to be carried at most times. In addition, healing, whether be to herself or to other allies' wounds, leaves her unable to cast other spells since her magic is being purely focused on a single spell, thus also making her unable to multi-cast. Her timid nature results in some cowardice, which, along with her abilities, results in her being more of a team player rather than a solo.Personality:Anedine is quite a naive, meek person often flustered on any remark about her. She can be easily bored, which frequently leads her to do productive things, mainly household chores. As a result, she has developed a strong sense of duty, insisting on helping out on a matter often despite being assured that someone else will do it. Due to this, she have been regarded as an "adorable annoyance" in her earlier years.Background:It was all for unknown reasons why Anedine came into the world; her first memory was only the sight of the forest canopy, with birds and insects flying their way from tree to tree. Being found by a hunter looking for food, she carried the strange girl into his village in his arms, where he raised her as a nameless girl in her first three years. With the hunter being unable to raise her anymore in his profit, she was then put in the orphanage, where she earned the name of Anedine Kerie. She was quite a hardworking girl within the orphanage, being favored upon by the grown-ups. She had also received the most love letters on her desk back at that time. Eventually, she was adopted by the Anceril couple.It was at this point when she had discovered her talent to connect with nature. Her parents appreciated her ability, and her elementary classmates, just like her fellows back at the orphanage, admired her. She was even at one point became the student government president during her later years of high school. She enrolled into Athalia Academy in her beginning college years, after her parents heard about it after it has become the subject of news within her neighborhood.Studies:>Core: English, Science>Elective: CookingTheme Music:Title may not fit, but the music's mood is great.


I think this is one of those few Character Sheets that do not necessarily require feedback. It's balanced dang well!

And finally we have a mana-consuming character (and she's an elf, too)! :D The only question I'd like to ask about this is how much each ability consumes mana, but other than that, I personally think she's a-okay.
Sukui said
Enjoy your serving.




That's cute. Cute. Cute. Cute. Cute. Cute. Cute.

Argh, I'm becoming more like my own otaku character. X_x
HylianRose said
A younger Lily. Lol.


That'd be adorable, actually. insta-accepting dat nature girl, sukui (jk, still needs approval :D)

Hurrrgghhhhhh. I'm gonna shut my stupid mouth next time. HMGGGHHHHHHHHHH

*transforms into my signature*
Sukui said
No more guns and anti-magic, just nature and healing and cuteness~


That... does sound cute. Pretty similar to Lily Brightendale, I guess. o.o
HylianRose said
Hmmm... I agree that it seems Isse is over reacting to something that may or may not be there but I'm up for the challange of trying to get my plot off and running with little ole Isse. In the garden. Just know that I smell the scent of god modding and I don't appreciate it. Its fine for now but try not to use your outside knowledge to guide your characters.Rose has GM eyes. 


Thank you so much, Rose. ;_; (I'm trying really hard not to reveal lots of stuff, and it kinda stresses me out. It's good to hear that you're willing to let ppl in omg wifiejbsuejebiduu)

Again, the GM is one of the reasons why I do not go insane when co-GMing. Long live the queen Rose.

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FaithsRose said
O.o....I slept through everything again T_T so much to read...Morning all btw ^^


Hullo thar. I might die soon of exhaustion of staying awake.
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