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Scallop said
'Taste the rainbow'

I love you.

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Anyway, I will immediately head to some feedback.

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Darwin Indigo

• I commend you for using rainbows. lol



• On to some actual feedback, the lack of explanation on why Darwin has unicorn blood when his parents did not leaves me quite confused. Some background behind this will be nice, or a change in this particular part could suffice as well.



• Just a personal question, but does Darwin have any goals besides being able to use his powers and have fun? If he does, some clarification will be appreciated. If not, then leaving it as it is will be fine.



• What are the limits to his ability to fly? Details on this will be appreciated. Can he just fly away to seriously high heights, or is there a certain balance to it?



• I know I may be sounding picky, but I would also like to know the power of his rainbows (lol). Do the rainbow bolts do moderate damage? Or does it have any side-effects (like causing short-term rainbow visions :P). Clarifications on his more combative abilities will be appreciated.



• Rainbows.

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I am freaking in LOVE with this character for the sole fact that he can fire freaking RAINBOW BOLTS out of his hands. And he's a unicorn. <_>

Some additional tweaking to his details will be greatly appreciated, but I am in love with what I'm seeing so far.

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Ryuu blinked.

His eyes then bulged out of his sockets when he saw David... and, soeak of the devil, the problematic (cute) girl coming straight into the garden. He then smacked his cheeks, wondering if he was in a dream or not. That white-haired girl had just come back to... haunt him? Or chase after him? Or something?! She was like a magnet that screamed "Look back at me, Ryuu~!" in nearly every way possible!

There was no doubt about. She ran because of... HIM!!! And there weren't any of those handsomely devilish men swarming ar-

DAMMIT, THAT ISSE KID IS HERE AS WELL?! Good God! I think I'll need SHOCK THERAPY after this one!

Ryuu simply grumbled, answering David as he regained his "bad-ss" demeanor,

"Oh, yeah, man. I am so fine with everyone busting into my conversation with good ol' Adenine. I don't mind you, but a whole crap-bunch of handsome fiends destroyed our intimate privacy!"

He humorously said the "intimate" part very quietly.

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Kenshi Brett said
Where would it be best for my character to "pop out of the blue from"?

Hmm...

Maybe from his dorm, any of his classes, or some place. Even the student center, maybe, i dunno. o.o

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Ebil Bunny said
You'll need more fire than that. The way we set the dorms on fire was make a demon and a dragon man have a massive fight in the middle of the Student Center.

Which ended chaotically. :P (that situation got all of us posting like crazy.)

Sukui said
By the gods i need to sleep.

Sleep. ._.

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Kenshi Brett said
Also what state is Athalia in?

...That...

...I literally have no idea.

HylianRose, where the heck are our characters exactly located in?

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Ebil Bunny said
No! The half-evil one has come among us, and has plans to ruin Bael's plans, but also Matt's innocent attempts to save Lily from the depths of the void! :(

"You called?"

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Kenshi Brett said
[http://img-cache.cdn.gaiaonline.com/0bbdb8f8bc976613440fb05fc7369aae/http://i598.photobucket.com/albums/tt65/Gaurdian_Zax/Anime%20Boys/AnimeBoy15.jpg] Name: Kenshi BrettAge: 17(Second year)Gender: MaleSpecies: Human(Druid)Powers: He can command things sacred to the Celts using the welsh language. This includes Iron, Bronze, The natural elements as well. He also can control his luck. This is due to his close relationship with Celtic deities. It depends on his emotions however. For example. If he is angry he is more likely to have a accident like stubbing his toe. If he is in a good mood than he has quite good luck.Weaknesses:  He has a long ancestrial bloodline of druid and priests. Due to this his blood smells and tastes more desirable to vampires. He wears hoodies as this helps hide the scent. He also has a fear of falling and spiders.Personality: He is very proud of his welsh heritage and learnt the language long before he discovered his spellcasting ability. He is depressed at tthe death of his parents. He gets aggressive easily at anything that offends them, or at least the memory of them. He is a good person at heart. He can be cheery when he wants to be.Background: At 16 His house burned down. He was locked inside his bathroom. The house was wrecked but he was found coughing heavily, but amazingly unburnt. He was left orphaned and alone on the streets. One day some people tryed mugging him. As they took his money. They decided not to leave witnesses. One of them took out a knife while the other lit a cigarette. In his frustration he screamed out in welsh. To his surprise the flames from the cigarette lit up and started burning the one who was watching. He decided to experiment. He yelled in welsh again. The knife did not come to him. But a iron pipe did. He managed to beat the other guy over the head with the pipe. Killing him. He fell to the floor. Ashamed at what he did. It was in that state that someone walked up to him. Touching him on the shoulder he told him about a school where they would teach him to use his power.Studies: English, Maths, science, welsh and British history.IIII scrapped the dhampyre bloodline.This is the final version. NK just accepted it and HR did as well.

No more "light a f-g" shenanigans, I see. :)

On another note, I am looking forward to seeing this character in the roleplay's IC. I welcome you (for real this time) to the thread.

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Sukui said
Everything's settled, just need to be listed.

Totem Harem

The reverse-trap is already looking good.

But I also have traps.

Real traps.

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Sukui said
I know.By the way, can characters be killed off by someone else if the owner of that character approves?

Yes.

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Sukui said
I only have 11 PMs.casul

IT IS DONE

This is one of the few Sheets I do not have questions for (mainly because I saw this in my PM). Like HylianRose, I have no problems with the CS.

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I have 885 PMs, some of them being completely unrelated to villains.

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HylianRose said
Scallop! :D@Kenshi, One more quick thing, try to add more into his weakness section. Something psychological. Like Arrogant, Fear of [Insert Phobia], etc, etc.So, I honestly was going to stop it at Kenshi but I know you Scallop and how you RP so I'll let you make a CS and join us. It'd be good to have you. ^-^That would be interesting. You'll have to PM me so we can work out details. ^-^^o^/@All, I'll be taking my final really soon so I'll be off for an hour at the most. And then I'll be back for the rest of the day! :D

Awesome. I welcome these Kalmaysia(?) people with open arms. And that means that it's about time to truly shut the player slots closed.

Kenshi Brett said
I'm haunting O.O.C as well at the moment.

I will be checking this out soon. I'm on a phone right atm.