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OneWayOut
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9 yrs ago
Tfw you wear a short skirt and sit down on a cold chair with nothing to protect your butt and you wana die
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9 yrs ago
Do no harm, but take no shit.
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9 yrs ago
Ugh I just wana write x.x
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9 yrs ago
Speaking of Naruto, I really wana do an RP like that again. But do I wana start one? Mehhh.
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9 yrs ago
Writing: That weird place between torture and fun.
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Nice posts guys! I'll reply with Nagisa a bit later, after my laptop is charged.
Nice posts everyone! I'll wait for @Weird Tales to respond before I reply with Nagisa :)
@Dawkins Nice character. :) He's accepted ^^ Go on and put him in the characters tab.
@OneWayOut
Yes, Seiji's Feral ability will branch out to multiple animals once he's progressed. I tried to leave a lot open so that he can grow as much as possible.
Very interesting. I cant wait to see where you take it from here :)
@TheFourthIV Nice character :) He's accepted, though I had a general question about his Feral ability. Is it specific to one type of animal, or multiple animals? Will he perhaps gain traits of different animals later on (such as breathing under water or some crazy thing like that)?
Edit: *casually snagged the 200th post*
Edit: *casually snagged the 200th post*
@caliban22 Okay, I read over your character sheet and... well there are a few things that seem kind of odd to me.
Reading over your personality, I feel like I didn't really learn much about him. Other than... he was calm and enjoyed being around people. Which, I need a lot more. Like... a lot.
Your history also seems kind of off as well. Not only am I getting a re-written Itachi/Sasuke history vibe, I feel like it didn't make sense how his parents blamed him for everything, when really he didn't do anything. It's kind of all over the place, which I wasn't expecting. Its like you were trying so hard to give him a fucked up past, but as a result it didn't make sense.
I'm not saying you made a bad character, I see potential here, I just don't think it's very focused and though I never really mentioned it, I expected everyone to be on a high-casual writing level when it came to things like the personality and history. I don't know if what you've showed me so far meets that standard.
That being said, if you still want to make your edits, that's fine. Though I have to say with some people PMing me saying they want to join, I may not be able to hold your reserve spot for too long. Please let me know if you think you can still pull through since I know you're busy and, honestly, the Jonin have a big role to play here.
If you have any questions, let me know.
Reading over your personality, I feel like I didn't really learn much about him. Other than... he was calm and enjoyed being around people. Which, I need a lot more. Like... a lot.
Your history also seems kind of off as well. Not only am I getting a re-written Itachi/Sasuke history vibe, I feel like it didn't make sense how his parents blamed him for everything, when really he didn't do anything. It's kind of all over the place, which I wasn't expecting. Its like you were trying so hard to give him a fucked up past, but as a result it didn't make sense.
I'm not saying you made a bad character, I see potential here, I just don't think it's very focused and though I never really mentioned it, I expected everyone to be on a high-casual writing level when it came to things like the personality and history. I don't know if what you've showed me so far meets that standard.
That being said, if you still want to make your edits, that's fine. Though I have to say with some people PMing me saying they want to join, I may not be able to hold your reserve spot for too long. Please let me know if you think you can still pull through since I know you're busy and, honestly, the Jonin have a big role to play here.
If you have any questions, let me know.
I got my CS updated. at this point its just jutsu. can i get a check on history and personality? he is in Char tab
Okay, I'll look it over :)
Sorry, I'm going to have to back out of this RP. I don't think I would have fun writing at the same level as everyone else appears to be.
Best of luck.
Best of luck.
Alright. Spots are filling up so its going to be whoever finishes their sheets first who gets it.
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