Orior

Warrior Cats - Plague of Misery

We should make a map of the camp. :p

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@BCTheEntity Yes!

Warrior Cats - Plague of Misery

Honeypaw

Curled into an almost imperceptible shadow at the farthest corner of the apprentice's den, Honeypaw's sleep seemed undisturbed. The only sign of distress on her was her twitching ears, but such movements could be attributed to any kind of dream. She laid upon a small pile of moss with little other additives; it was a bit worn as well, and needed changing, as it had warn to the hard earth in some small spots. Around her, several sleeping lumps that were her fellow apprentices were starting to stir. In the predawn light, to golden eyes opened from the abck of the den, and Honeypaw groggily raised her head and yawned.

The others in the den were rising as well. Looking around, Honeypaw noticed that Stonepaw was not near his sister, and without a doubt had left the den earlier with his usual exuberance. Russetpaw herself seemed wakened, but she was laying as if she was still sleeping. Snowpaw seemed agitated, and struggled in her sleep. Shadowpaw, who looked to have been already awake, was near enough to her to look as though he was going to rouse her from her nightmare, but she awoke on her own and slithered quietly from the tangle of nests inside the den. She sympathized with the other she-cat, her own dreams were often unpleasant, and knew that Snowpaw could relate. Honeypaw shivered and turned her head to lick between her shoulders, not wanting to think of the young twolegs that haunted her own dreams. She stood and straightened, seeing Shadowpaw disappear, and streched the best she could without disturbing the other apprentices. She daintily picked her way through and out of the den, being careful not to wake anyone up.

Once she was out of the den, Honeypaw moved aside and stretched properly. Much of the camp seemed to be awake and working already, although that could have just been the impression Honeypaw had of herself having slept too long. She eyed the fresh-kill pile and her stomach rumbled, but she knew better than to get food for herself before checking to make sure the Queens and Elders were fed. She looked to the nursery, but seeing some many cats there already she figured that they had been brought food already. With light steps, Honeypaw trotted over to the Elders' Den.

There were only three of the elders in the den, Sparrowlegs, Echotail, and Frogpelt. Redwhisker must have been off elsewhere. Honeypaw entered and bowed her head respectfully once she had saw that the werey awake, and when she looked up, asked in a small voice, "How are you both this morning? Can I bring either of you fresh-kill?" Her small head swung toward Echotail as she answered the question first.

"Hello, dear. Thank you but a few of the other apprentices were in here before and brought us some from the pile." Again, the apprentice bowed her head, and as the elders returned to their conversations, she kindly back out as to not disturb them more than necessary. She took a short trip to the nursery, and saw that they, too, had eaten this morning, and the finally turned once more toward the fresh-kill to sate her own hunger. She grabbed a modestly small mouse and found a shaded spot to sit and eat while she waited for her mentor.

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Ok - here's what im going to do.
I eliminated the point system, and am trusting you all to be reasonable. At this point, @BCTheEntity, your character is accepted.
Gold and renown are going to be used for item repairs, enchantments, upgrades, ect, in IC, and I'll find a way to give out more power as time goes on. My character is going to be going under construction, as well, to be more similar to his last reincarnation. I didn't mention gold in the OP because gold isn't as accepted as much as payment any longer, so prices will be hashed out IC.

@gammaflux I apologize for the inconvenience, but could you edit your character as well? :3

Sorry for giving everyone a run around, but look on the bright side! You don't have to deal with it anymore!

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Yeah, that's how I was going to it. Some people can start with a weapon for free, and I wouldn't make basic weapons that expensive. Besides, I don't think it would be uncommon to come across corpses still baring weapons, so maybe I would just let people have basic weapons free.
Alright. I'm going to rework the system when I get on a laptop. I can't really at the moment

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@BCTheEntity Ok, that was what I was trying to get at originally. Platemail is heavy armor in and of itself; you'd have to enchant it against magic, which would be an upgrade. If it was a set of robes and plate pieces, I would have just counted it as heavy armor, because it had some physical defense and some basic. I was under the wrong impression.

I just meant the mace as a comparison. Do whatever you want with it as long as its not enchanted! Feel free to make it as reasonable exotic as you want.

... I'm thinking about splitting up Skill Points with Gold as a resource, so people can buy whatever they want in terms of weaponry but I'm not sure.
Edit: I just really think that would make it too complicated.
Edit2: Debating whether or not to eliminate Skill points and only just gold for things like armor and weapons. The only reason I use the skill points is because I hate if when people have their characters to crazy things just because their limits are undefined.

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@BCTheEntity Hmm, okiedoke.
I don't want you to add that it's self repairing. Although benign, such an enchantment would be very beneficial to a character, especially in this setting, and that would have to be an upgrade (im assuming you mean making the robes self repairing, because then it's still your armor, just your magical armor). It's true that it isn't a difficult enchantment in general, but I don't think it's a small thing. I was looking at your armor as just a set of robes, because if it wasn't I wouldn't allow it. Not only is it a set of platemail, but it's also enchanted robes (you can wear as much plain/padding/disguising clothing that you want, the "robes" are the clothes that are enchanted), and that kind of sways me a bit. The platemail is at least medium armor, if it isn't a full set, and the enchanted robes are light armor. That's 5 SP; if it had been just the robes that act as strong as platemail, then it would just be upgraded light armor.
How much platemail is he wearing? If it isn't too much I'd just let it slide. A plate out layer and helmet is what, a helmet, breastplate, fauld, cuisse, and placard? The weapon change is also no problem. So like from just a mace to a flanged mace?

@gammaflux Yeah sure np! You'll notice I link to the original character post now so you guys can edit all the time without asking me to change it if you just edit/reword stuff.

Warrior Cats - Plague of Misery

@LetMeDoStuff But no wai ;o;

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@BCTheEntity I don't have any functionality problems with your CS, just the fluff!

Is his armor all cloth, that's enchanted against physical attacks and destruction magic? Or is it plate (it sounded like that kinda to me, but I wasn't really sure)? Platemail itself would be 4 SP 'cuz it's heavy armor. I don't have a problem with it if they're just robes that were enchanted against those things; it wouldn't be any weaker if you're willing to spend 4 SP on it.

Also, the semantics of his aura, though ultimately what you can do with it is fine. I'd rather it be like, the first SP is for the whole fire aspect, which I look at is as your character can just summon fire to do whatevs in that area, and then the upgrade being the slight(half a foot is slight to me) distance boost as well as the increase strength/speed. The conditions you put seem fair to me.

You dont really need to change anything because the end effect is fine, so, yeah.

I really like him so far! He's really different from the other characters we had.

Warrior Cats - Plague of Misery

@Ginger Kollie That sounds cool to me!