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Naruto: Path to Enlightment. Looking for fresh meat!

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Naruto: Path to Enlightment. Looking for fresh meat!

Ayame Choko, “the Sewstress”

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Ayame had spent the last week working tirelessly, almost doubling Zeno's efforts in order to get stuff in order. Just because she had commited a coup, didn't mean she could just do what she want. There was so much to do - that one person in the other village wanted a squad of shinobi to protect some valuables, then another squad had to be arranged for the guy with the sharingan trafficking, though luckily she just had to grant clearance to use some shinobi to Fujitora. He did the most work. Then, there was also the Akimichi barbecue that she hadn't been invited for. A subtle slight if anything, but one she didn't care about. She figured that Fujitora would've done his best to atleast ensure safety at the party using his 11th corps, since it was a big barbecue if her memory served correctly.

She was still shoving papers around, signing some of them and reading others quickly while giving Fujitora the occasional sideways glance, annoyed at his antics as he was always playing around, even in times like these. “It's okay. Not much different than when I was an assistant, since Zeno never did the paperwork. And yes, I suppose the 11th is like that. They're weird. The ones that stand guard in my office are often more like robots than humans. Like Asura.” she said, looking at him a bit before looking back down at the paper in front of her, using her pen to sign it quickly and drag it to the side.

The entire office had undergone a refurnishment, with the normal setup being completely tossed away. Now, she had a desk that was facing towards the center, with the chair on the side of a wall. This was done to limit assassinations through the window, or any risk of an attack being limited this way. The window now had large blinds on them, pretty much always closed too. Then, there were large black cabinets lining the wall on the other side of the desk, which held a variety of items. Mostly they were used for paper filings. In the center of the room, there was a set of three chairs, comfortable and big, with a single table between them. They were arranged casually, and one was facing the desk now since Fujitora had been so free to adjust his seating. In the corner a coat rack stood, with Ayame's black coat hanging on it.

“Hai, the Uchiha's. I read. Interesting setup, I'll be reading it closely.” she said, not even looking up because she just knew he'd be making stupid faces again. It was then that Tsukiko entered, causing Ayame to look up at him and her both, before standing up and pointing her open hand at a chair. When Tsukiko would move to sit down, Ayame would come from behind her desk and sit down as well. “Thanks for coming, Tsukiko. I appreciate it. No task for you today I'm afraid, we're just here to discuss our future as friends together.”

Ayame didn't have to say a word before an 11th corps shinobi walked in with a wooden plate full of sushi and ramen bowls, with a second following closely with a glass of water, some wine and a very expensive, high class beer. Ayame would grab the wooden plate and place it down in front of them, then take the glass of water and put it before herself, with the wine being placed in front of Fujitora and the high class beer being put down in front of Tsukiko. “I hope you like that brand, I had it specifically imported from Kirigakure, but I am not a beer lover. I figured I'd let you try it for me, see if you like it, and then make my decision on whether I want to import more for situations like these. You seem like someone that enjoys beer, Tsukiko.” she said with a smile, a genuine one at that, but a smile that didn't tell much more about the situation even when it was clear that they weren't just going to discuss their friendship.

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Reijo Minamoru

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Reijo had been working on his large company, managing the multi million company he was running at this time. Only when he got interrupted he put down his pen and folded his hands together. “Enter, please.” he said to whomever was behind the door. As soon as Shin would enter, Reijo would ofcourse realize what this was about. “Ah, hello Shin. What can I do for you today? Have you finally come around and decided to stop working for the police force? You can earn more money working here, you know that right?” he said, pretending to be oblivious to what was actually going on here.

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Saburo Uchiha, “Kimyōna”

Saburo's Brother
@Renny

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Saburo glanced at Daiki as he walked with him, wondering and musing to himself about what Daiki really wanted. He wasn't surprised that Daiki lashed out at Yamato, since Daiki was still stuck in an emotional state that all normal shinobi had. He didn't see the true potential of Yamato Minamoru, and probably not his own potential either. “Because he is powerful. Power is a commodity, not a trait. We should utilise his power to benefit the 11th corps and Konohagakure, denoting that we do not care about people's personality or history.” Saburo told him, smiling again before looking straight ahead at the upcoming security checkpoint. They went through without much hassle. Daiki's next words were surprising, but Saburo had already figured out what Daiki wanted since he started asking. It was just surprising to hear the words from Daiki's own mouth.

“I see. I might be able to arrange something. You'll be severely tested and investigated. Likely, without you noticing it. My superiors, Fujitora in this case, will need to agree to it as well. So do you wish to join the 11th corps? It will certainly give you an inside look, and a certain hand in the world affairs. But I must warn you that while it comes with perks there are also certain things that might hamper your ability to communicate with the outside world. Your family will see very little of you. The Naito's even less. They are no longer considered your direct family by the 11th and as such you will probably not see them much at all anymore, in fact. You should think about that. If you then still wish to join, I can set it all in motion, denoting I will ask my superiors for agreement and start the investigations.”

Naruto: Path to Enlightment. Looking for fresh meat!

Pas de probleme.

Naruto: Path to Enlightment. Looking for fresh meat!

I'll do that soon! So me making a second character should be alright then?

@Write

Yes, but it has to be a stored character for now. Reason for that being we have a lot of characters currently and I want to keep some spots open for others to join. Probably this 2nd character can join in after arc 3.5.

Naruto: Path to Enlightment. Looking for fresh meat!

Right give me a second, I'm making the missions for the next sub arc, but I've already included your character (in a pretty nice group might I add) so consider yourself accepted. I'll just run over it later but feel free to post IC if you wish.

We also have a skype group so if you want add me under Vurige_Vos and I can add you to the group.

Naruto: Path to Enlightment. Looking for fresh meat!

Kyūsokuna kon'yaku('Rapid Engagement).

Maybe you missed my comment on that one.

Naruto: Path to Enlightment. Looking for fresh meat!

Ahh, I thought it was the kage bunshin kunai. Okay that makes sense, my bad.

Naruto: Path to Enlightment. Looking for fresh meat!

It didn't actually take me much time.

Naruto: Path to Enlightment. Looking for fresh meat!

My comments will be in read within the CS.

Clearly the other CS left a poor taste in everyone's mouth. I apologize for that and offer you the correct Cs. I apologize for any ill will that may have come attached to said CS.

Yuen Uchiha

“One peek won’t hurt… Trust me.”

Yuen sports a relatively average frame, good muscle definition. She is approaching five foot six. Yuen has a sharp facial structure a small pointed nose and an edged chin ending her face abruptly. She has focused brown eyes and perfectly clear skin.

Yuen’s chest is developed and she has pretty noticeable abdominal muscles. She has a few scars along her back, mostly from kunai and the sort. Her arms sport similar scars and by the time one would reach her hands, they would meet bandages. She practices plucking incoming kunai and shuriken out of the air regularly and thusly bandages her hands regularly.

Yuen’s legs are wrapped up in bandages as well, to make sure she has full flexibility in a combat situation.

Personnel files.
Access only by security personnel with a C3 clearance.

【Full Name】

Yuen Uchiha

【Alias】

N/A

【Age】

17

【Sex】

Female

【Sexuality】

Homosexual
Akio and Aoi eat your heart out

【Birthplace】

Konoha

【Bloodline】

Uchiha

【Rank】

Chūnin

Psych. report.
Medical secrecy applies.

【Personality】

Yuen is great at quite a few things, being positive looking out for her squad, properly prioritizing assignments and decisions. However one thing she reliably poor with is being cautious. Some believe it is because of the Yama blood that runs through her veins, however when it comes to realizing danger to her own self Yuen has been notably lacking since a young age.

This has caused her to run into overwhelming odds more than once and luckily escape with her life. That being said it can be that same trait that is Yuen’s greatest strength. Her reckless abandon has more than once taken an enemy off guard and provided the slight edge she needs to overwhelm them.

In social settings Yuen is typically popular. She is a good listener and as such doesn’t draw much attention to herself as she does to others. For this reason Yuen has never been out of friends. Even when her family had just moved from the land of stone to the hidden leaf village Yuen made fast friends. Yuen has never been a romantic, when she has need for a partner then she finds herself one. Some find this to be her most unappealing social trait, others love it. Yuen doesn’t bother herself too much where each and every person places themselves in that spectrum.

【History】
Yuen was born into the Uchiha clan to a tired mother and an absentee father. She would live her life under the shadow of her father and see even less of him. Yuen’s mother was a Kunoichi heralded by the rest of the clan as one of the best the clan ever had. The other children would always tell Yuen of how jealous they were that she had such prestigious parents, seemingly everyone knew of her parent’s legacy, which should’ve made Yuen proud of her name, but instead she just found anger in it.

Around the time Yuen turned ten years old her mother began to become frustrated in her and her inability to unlock the Sharingan. So one day her mother brought her into the living room sat her down and cast a Genjutsu on her. Yuen doesn’t remember much from the day, but when she awoke night had fallen, her ankle was broken and the search party had found her alone in the woods by a stream with the Sharingan.

Yuen since that day trained under her mother’s close personal supervision, very rarely interacting with the rest of the clan. During this five year period she became something of a legend within the Uchiha clan though not quite due to her own efforts but for her mother’s strict regimen. Every day Yuen would sleep from 2-7 and train for the rest of her waking hours. But Yuen felt rage towards her mother, every time she looked at her, it was like an inconsolable itch that Yuen had to scratch. Yet everyday Yuen would practice her techniques on her mother, training with her, but would relent to avoid doing damage to her mother’s psyche. Every training session, the itch would only grow.
Spending time in a four man cell was good for Yuen. She was given time to become comfortable interacting with other people, this along with her time with in the academy proved to strengthen Yuen’s social skills considerably. Perhaps to a certain extent it was because she could typically mold herself into a Yuen that whoever she had just met would like more. But when another person was fond of her, it gave Yuen a considerably warm feeling in her heart. Something she hadn’t quite experienced before under her mother’s tutelage.

Three years after becoming a Genin saw Yuen’s rise to Chunin. She was a force to be reckoned with in the exams. Trapping her first two competitors in a Genjutsu long enough to end the fight. However in the finals she was up against a girl who seemed to be weary against this specific style of fighting. She didn’t meet Yuen’s eyes and instead looked at the space directly beside Yuen, this slowed her reaction time slightly, but allowed her to avoid getting caught in any sight based Jutsu.

Yuen knew she would somehow have to take advantage of her opponent’s dulled reaction time. Having had some practice in Fuinjutsu up to that point, Yuen placed two seals on her lips each at a different point in the match, between dodging techniques. Yuen allowed herself to get closer to defeat. Taking a punch here and there, it looked bad for the Uchiha. Her opponent went in to finish the match, one palm strike to Yuen’s chin. However Yuen dodged the strike on the inside, grabbed her opponent by cheeks and kissed her deeply.

By the time Yuen had pulled away her opponent hit the ground, unconscious. The match was her and ever since the Kiss of Death was born.
But the past two years Yuen became more active in the clan and village’s community, becoming much more active in the field, whether it’s normal missions or tasks around the village needed. Or espionage missions involving taking out specific individuals, Yuen finally begun to make a name for herself. She after all, was a member of the Uchiha clan.


【Family ties】
Kyo Uchiha. She lives with Yuen and is the leading force in her life. Constantly pushing her to be a better killer and fighting machine. Yuen doesn’t hold a positive opinion of her mother.

Kyo Uchiha | Mother | 37, Lives with Yuen

【Dreams and fears】
Yuen simply wants to become the perfect incarnation of herself. She wants to reach a level of strength surpassing anyone that has been known in her clan and wishes to defeat any obstacle in her way

Combat reports.
Gathered from evaluation reports after missions.

【Fighting style】
Describe shortly what your characters fighting style is.

【Kekkei genkai, or bloodline limit】
Bloodline limit name:
Sharingan
Description:
The 2 Tomoe Sharingan allows a user to predict an enemy’s movement’s one step ahead, thusly a punch can be foreseen a Jutsu however cannot. She also uses it as a source of Hypnotization to interrogate and cast Genjutsu. Finally one may also use it in an attempt to copy a Jutsu. However Yuen would need to see that Jutsu performed at least three times and would then be required to practice that technique for at least two five hour training sessions.
Strengths:

The Sharingan can be an Uchiha’s greatest strength, helping to predict enemy movements and copying their techniques. It can also be used for interrogation purposes and casting strong Genjutsu on enemies undetected to those not using another Dojutsu.
Weaknesses:

The Sharingan, while powerful can also be a spot of incredible over-zealousness and pride in some Uchiha. Those who rely on the technique too often find themselves without chakra often and being countered in their obvious nature. As easy as it is to lock one in a Genjutsu with eye contact, not making eye contact is just as easy.

【Ninja techniques】

A rank techniques:

N/A

B rank techniques:

N/A

C rank techniques:


Sōfūshasan no Tachi k

Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu k

Katon: Hōsenka no Jutsu k

Karasu Bunshin no Jutsu k


D-E rank techniques:
Sōshuriken no Jutsu k

Kage Shuriken no Jutsu I'd argue that this has to be atleast C rank because Kage bunshin is utilised in this, but once more I am trumped by Narutopedia.

Coercion: Sharingan This is nowhere near D-E rank. Move it up to B. Minimally. And I want some info on how much she can do this.

Genjutsu: Sharingan I put this same jutsu under B rank just becaues there's no clear indicator of what it can do. It can be anywhere from a E rank genjutsu to a S rank genjutsu, so I advise you either move this up to B rank, or make it a custom jutsu with more clear limits on what it can do.

Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu is ok

Kuchiyose: Raikō Kenka Narutopedia states it's B rank. Not D-E



【Custom made techniques】
Jutsu name: Kage Te Jutsu (Shadow Hand)
Rank: D
Range: Mid
Description: This technique is more of a bluff than anything else. The user places a seal on a shuriken and their palm. After throwing the shuriken the user will perform the one handseal and the Shuriken will be transported back to the user’s palm.

Seems a bit useless but ok

Jutsu name: Karasu no Satsujin (Murder of Crows)
Rank: D
Range: Self
Description: By placing this seal on herself, Yuen can completely change herself into a murder of crows and relocate somewhere else. Yuen can also use this technique to summon crows from her body, growing out of her shoulders, arms and other extremities. The catch that makes this Jutsu so useful is that each of these crows possesses Yuen’s Sharingan and eye contact with any of these crows can cause someone to fall into her Genjutsu.

Nah, this is basically the same as the crow jutsu above, except they can cause genjutsu. And there's no real way to avoid this because you as a roleplayer can just always say 'a crow looks her in the eyes'. I can't dodge it without metagaming. So no.

Jutsu name: Shibō Garagara (Death Rattle)
Rank: B
Range: Auditory Range
Description: By imbuing her voice with Chakra, Yuen whistles to cast a soothing Genjutsu that either makes the target incredible tired or puts them in a comatose state for up to ten minutes. This is untraceable with the aid of Dojutsu do to it being completely auditory. This requires very little chakra on Yuen’s behalf.

Maybe untraceable but definetely breakable, like any other genjutsu.

Jutsu name: Kisu no Shi (Kiss of Death)
Rank: A
Range: Personal
Description: By placing the smallest amount of chakra in both of the ‘tattoos’ in her lips Yuen can effectively and without fail place the enemy in a Genjutsu in which for them it will feel like their heart has stopped and they will be unable to breathe. In reality they will be placed in a deep sleep until true love’s kiss an hour passes.

Sounds cool. I'll make sure my characters grope your characters for ultimate sexy time only to get defeated by this jutsu.

+2 points for originality.

Jutsu name: Kyūsokuna kon'yaku('Rapid Engagement)
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Description: ] A tricky technique, Kyūsokuna kon'yaku is essentially utilized to make it seem as if an Uchiha has not activated their Sharingan. This is done by flowing chakra towards the eyes and allowing it to build up in small bunches along the way so it enters the eye in increments, rather than as a steady stream. This, as well as the intention to activate their eyes, causes the eyes to flicker or, if observed closely, activate and deactivate at such high sped that the doujutsu is never actually seen unless viewed by a specialized technique or another doujutsu. If utilized with yin affinity chakra, the user is capable of initiating powerful, or subtle, genjutsu upon anyone looking at their eyes even in a moment where the Sharingan is not activated.

Again this leads to people being forced to metagame. It becomes super easy to cheese people with this jutsu so from a GM standpoint I'm gonna deny this even if it makes sense Narutoverse wise. Sorry.

【Weaponry, tools and objects.】
Weapon, tool or object name:

Fuma Shuriken 2x
Description:
A larger Shuriken, being hit by one could very well be lethal.
Weapon, tool or object name:

Weapon Scroll
Description:
When activated it will return Yuen’s two Fuma Shuriken to her sides. .

@Write