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I felt like I was challengeed to make a long post. So naturally, I tried my best to compete. I will not be beaten by these Advanced Players!

On with the point though, this is gonna be fun. Looking around at all the people gathered, it's time for a journey to begin. Insert outdated meme, "My Nincada will be in the top one percentage!"
Martin Price


It was a great day out. The skies were clear, and the woods were tranquil. Martin got out of his sleeping bag. He's been traveling for a bit and was on his way to Pureplain city via Route 1. He was still packing up his camping equipment, it wasn't much just enough to get here from Goldshore. He gave a long stretch, it wasn't his plan to stop a small distance from the trail, but it's not the best idea to wander around at night. Still, his watch said it was about 6:00am. He could not wait to arrive for his own personal Pokemon.

He didn't have to worry about getting dressed as he slept in his normal clothes. It wasn't because he was lazy, it was because sleeping in the woods meant being ready to go if needed. Still he could probably used a quick washing of his face, but it wasn't the worst possible outcome. By this point he almost considered himself a rookie camper. He could have prepared better for this, as most of his savings has dwindled to 500 Pokedollars now. The last of his food and water used this morning. Being this close meant that will be fixed soon enough though.

It was still quite a trip, looking around he learned a bit of the trails. There was no shortcuts, he has been walking these trails for almost 4 days now. No sane person goes this far for a rumor. He made up his decision a week ago and he wasn't stopping now. Besides, all this walking was good for him and he traveled most of Isson now. None of that was too important though. He made it here early, which was impressive. He finished packing and carried it in his bag on one shoulder. "Lets see what makes this place so special."

He took his first steps into this town, the first thing he noticed was how clean this place was. Buildings rising from the ground and it all looked so much better than Goldshire. Well, it might be a nice place, but he didn't come just for the view. He looked around and liked what he saw. Pokemon and humans, now this was how it's supposed to be. It was already looking like those rumors might be true. If he remembered right, he was looking for the lab. Some building with a Pokeball symbol on it. He pulled out a piece of paper he's been writing on. It looked to be a hand drawn map of the routes he took. Pureplain, this was the right place.

It was a bit of time getting through the place, asking around for the lab. He was an outsider and it showed. Eventually he found his way to the lab, it was closed. Some girl in red was sitting on a bench. Her outfit was pink and screamed of money to spare. Next to her was a girl in mostly shades of blue. They had quite the contrast being next to each other. Still off on another bench was a girl clad in black, her hood obscuring her face from prying eyes. She looked more like she didn't want a conversation anyways.

There was already quite the crowd gathering, adding in a guy with a headband already trying to make some friends as well. Even the straggler in a trench coat wasn't forgotten as he was being greeted by a girl in golden braids. Looks like Martin was definitely in the right place. His journey began here, and he could feel it.

Still, it's always a good time to make new friends, especially in a new place. He approached group of people and just decided to break the ice. "So many people have gathered for this as well? My name is Martin Price, anyone else care to introduce themselves?"
So much deep thinking...

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...
Traveling partners? Martin would be fine with anyone offering. I don't have any people picked out in advance. So, I guess let the cards fall where they may.


@PlatinumSkinkI took an extra day to try and correct mistakes. I have failed to make sure it was error free. When I get it to CS, I will make sure to change Team Valor to Virtue, and am willing to correct the town name to Goldshore. I was already on a roll when I got done with Martin, so I just kept going with Nincada. I get Pokemon don't have much to them, but I was into showing some odd quirks for him. In terms of the background, you took the time to write all the cities out, so I got curious and read them. Glad I got accepted, even being as late as I was.
Okay, this took way too long to finish, so sorry. I said I would get a CS, so here it is.



It's a dead body. There is a drunk orc swinging a huge weapon. Gee, I wonder how this happened. I would make a joke, but this is pretty clear to understand. Bob does not care about people, or what happened. You're right, he should have stepped on the corpse and stole the red sword. Mistake, I will make sure to loot the next time I see a dead body.
Bob found something glittering in the back, but dropped it. The building shook with the rage of an ogre, toppling the mountain Bob was looking at. He got buried in the trash quickly. This ogre was a danger to everyone, and was capable of actual thinking. "Finally, you speak, and the first thing you do is waste time saying you're not stupid. Also, called it. Your name has rock in it, so creative. At least I know where this inn is, so you aren't a complete waste of my time." He had to struggle to get out of the landslide, various scrap hooking on his assorted gear. After a bit of struggling he managed to free himself. "Time to meet the so called team. If they are anything like you, they will need my brains to hold it together."

Bob left the blacksmith's shop, with it the smell and smoke clearing up. It was a good thing the inn was so close to this place, no wonder Tugrok couldn't get lost. The front door was kicked in and there was the most interesting sight in front of Bob. A drunken ogre was swinging a massive blade, next to a headless, elf? There was even a half spider abomination to complete the scene. Was this the team? This is perfect he was the smartest one here and they were likely to kill each other at this rate. "I heard you were looking for more associates to join in your quest. Luckily for you, a famous inventor will grace your day with his help."

The inn was already starting to fill with the rings of gears turning and constant smoke flying off his back. He never gave it a thought, but it had a distinct smell, indescribable to pinpoint. He walked forward, making a point to laugh at the freshly decapitated corpse and took a seat at the table. He already looked like he was ready to take charge as a leader of some sorts. "Hey orc, mind at least cleaning up your dead corpses? It's gonna smell soon and no one wants to be reminded you still smell worse than it. Also, what hole did you crawl out of spider? Wherever it is, I see it wasn't deep enough below cause you crawled out of it still. So, what's this mission? Someone mind speaking before the clumsy ogre comes stumbling in here?"
Wow, this escalated quickly. Is a spider all it takes to lead to decapitation of the elf? Good job, no one needed hi- wait, he's still alive? Can I make his head a spare bomb? I think it will be a great idea. He will become Stride the bomberman. No one will ever aim for his head anymore. Also, how long are we waiting before posting can resume?
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