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Spends way too much time on his computer.

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So... I'm accepted but anything I should know about making the first post?
Editted.

Ability - Shortened the range to fifty meters. Anybody in contact with her gets transported whether willing or not so she can't say, conveniently blink out of a chokehold without some creative thinking.

Reworked her backstory and made her sort of a full street rat.

Mr Allen J said
Hmmm... This is a well-written sheet, but I feel like she seems like a comic-book character. But, we can work with her. She can be a tough-girl martial artist. That's fine. She can be a hero-type. Which is also fine (Long as she doesn't piss off NEST). Her parents could have been killed, shot herself, and thrown on the streets. She's going to need psychological repercussions (Which going off her personality section, she doesn't any). But some parts of it seem contrived. For example:Sorry, but this really seems like a forced way for her to learn martial arts. I mean she just pick-pocketed someone who just so happened to take her in and teach her to fight? That does seem a little forced.Also.This is pretty far actually. Around three-hundred feet by my calculations. Which is again, fine. But I'm going have to ask you to give her another weakness.Other than that, the sheet is fine.gtfo


I was kind of going for Jerkass with a Heart of Gold but noted,I'll work on it.

Interested in a Samurai x Princess or Vampire X Human!
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-Snip- Sorry for the double post. RPG donked out
I hope this is still open?

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