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Thanks for offering to send the original version but if it's alright, I wanted to make a few changes to the ending. I'll edit the previous post to include the new ending. Thank you so much for this opportunity!
I am so sorry for the late post!! Thank you for responding to the PM and understanding about my laptop being stolen. I'm borrowing a friend's so I hope this is alright until I figure this out. Sorry again for this major inconvenience. Thanks for being so understanding. Sorry, had to rewrite it so the ending is choppy but if it's alright, I would love a chance to rewrite it after I take my exam due at midnight tonight. Thanks again!

Name: Petra Ducrat

Element: Earth/Stone

Age: 18 years of age

Race: Unfortunately Human….sorry

Gender: Female

Nature/Appearance: Petra is a sturdy young woman who knows the meaning of hard work. You wouldn’t guess by her curvy, feminine figure but beneath the usual dark pants and oversized shirts she normally wears, her body holds a surprising amount of strength and power.

She normally ties her shoulder length nut brown hair back into a bun to keep it out of her eyes. Her mud brown eyes are normally intent and focused on the task in front of her. Her determination can be seen through her strong frame in her 5'8 body. Most people who see her assume she wouldn’t understand “adult work” but little do they know that she gained that comprehension at a very young age.

Backstory: Petra was born and raised in Diedremere where her family had resided for several generations. Her father and brother kept food on the table, quite literally, with their hunting skills and by selling the extra meat to the local butcher. Petra would spend the day with her mother, feeding the miners who worked so diligently from dusk to dawn. She had always enjoyed hearing the stories the miners shared, barely allowing them to finish their story before shooting another question their way.

Petra couldn’t quite describe why she felt so drawn to the miners and their stories but aside from her family, that was the only strong bond she had in her life. The clearest and closest bond she had was the one she shared with her twin brother. These two were practically inseparable and would occasionally tease their parents by dressing like the other. With Petra’s shoulder length hair and the same deep brown eyes, their only differentiating factor was their gender. Their identical freckles and bright smiles were the outward features that reflected their playful spirits. They would occasionally display their playful nature by running around by the base of the mountain and seeing how far the other could climb. Little did they know, how much they were playing with fate.

On the day of her and her brother’s birthday, the Ducat family deciding to climb the mountain near their home and celebrate the birth of these two special children. As Petra and her family set off for the mountain, she couldn’t help shake this eerie feeling. The skies were clear and the breeze was light so she hiked alongside her family, up the mountain to where they would have their picnic. The day was as close to perfect as it possibly could have been….until they began their trek home.

They were coming around the final pass before the descent into their village when the mountain began to shift beneath them. Her father immediately shielded his family by stretching his arms over them. He encompassed them in his protective arms when the boulders began falling. They rolled right past them at first but then began to get dangerously close. Soon the world went black.

By the time Petra came to her senses, the villagers had already rushed to the rock slide and pulled her from the aftermath. As she awoke, she stood up shakily staggering over to her brother and gently squeezed his hand. “Kellan, we made it. Where’s papa and mama?” Kellan gave no response so she tried again. Horrified by the reality that was beginning to sneak in, she shook her brother’s shoulders only to find that no matter how hard she tried, Kellan was not going to wake up.

She felt like the earth was angry with her for ignoring the warning it so graciously gave. Well, she would show the earth just how “grateful” she was. At the young age of 14, Petra became the youngest mining worker in the village. She would angrily thrust her sickle into the rough earth and envision her hard work as a way to gain vengeance on the murderous earth. Her once playful nature was stifled and replaced with a dark hatred fueled by the desire to lash back on the one thing that took what mattered to her most.

She blamed the mountain for taking her family from her and leaving her all alone. Oddly enough, the only place she didn’t feel alone was in the mines. As she continued to grow in strength and beauty, she took notice of a strange attachment she felt to the environment around her. She felt strongest when covered in the dust from mining the stones and the grainy sand beneath her.

Petra celebrated each birthday in the darkest caves that ran beneath the mountain. She used to imagine the ceiling caving in and her being helpless to escape. As she would lie there on the cold, hard ground, she felt like her family was sitting around her, celebrating like they did on the day of the tragedy. But something was different this year. Petra didn’t see anything special about her 17th birthday but as she placed her rough palms faced down on the earth, she was shocked to feel a pulse running the cave and throughout the surrounding area. She felt each shift of the stones as feet crunched them beneath their boots. What could this possibly mean?
Petra returned to the caves every night after that to find out why she felt so drawn to the earth beneath her. Her connection continued to grow and intensify for the next year as she began to become more in tune with the surrounding life around her.

Goal: Petra wants to continue learning more about her abilities and find out if she is the only one with these capabilities.

Inventory:
• Pick axe
• Serrated blade knife
• Water pouch
Here's what I have so far for my fire element character! I'd appreciate any feedback or thoughts on it :)

Name: Drake Furon
Element: Fire/heat element
Age: 21 years old
Race: Regrettably human
Gender: Male

Appearance: *Picture to be added soon*

Character’s Build: Drake has a decent build for a young adult, with broad shoulders and evenly toned muscles which he gained from long hours of welding. He maintained his physique at home by wrestling with his younger brother. He’s usually sporting some dark facial scruff but never fully grows it out merely because of the slight fear he has of looking like an overgrown dwarf.
Eye color: The inner ring surrounding his pupil is a soft earthy green that spans out into the outer blue that envelops the remainder of his iris.
Hair color: His shaggy black hair has natural tints of red and dark brown.
Skin color: Drake’s skin tone closely resembles the color of cinnamon which darkens each time flames cast shadows along his dark skin..
Height: 6’2
Scars: Drake has a scar from a knife wound on his shoulder.

Wardrobe: He typically is very laid back with what he wears. He commonly is dressed in full length brown pants with a fitted white shirt, and a mid-length black dragon skin coat with deep pockets on the inside to carry his concealed weapons and tools.

Nature: Drake is a quiet, even-tempered man by practice. Others oftentimes interpret his demeanor as stand-offish and hard, but he just prefers to mostly observe and keep to himself. His temper rarely flares, as it was stressed in his home to be collected at all times despite anger, but when there is what he deems injustice or excessive pride, his self-control is known to slip. He is truly a soft hearted individual who makes a valuable and loyal friend.

Backstory: Drake was born into a prosperous family in Jeorva that also miraculously balanced a happy home life. He is the first born within his small family, made up of his parents and 13 year old little brother. He was raised to show respect to everyone and be cool tempered even in the most stressful situations, which he still struggles with today.
After moving closer to the college in Jeorva, shortly after his 17th birthday, he worked in his father's metalwork shop to support himself. His hard work in the metalwork business paid off and allowed him to begin his own business. While working alongside his father, he found that he seemed to be drawn to the flames used to bend and shape the metal. He somehow felt a gentle pull from the flames, beckoning to him. Drake would generally ignore these feels being under the assumption that the heat was causing confusion and exhaustion.
But that soon changed the night he discovered his ability to manipulate flames. When he was out late, Drake and some friends were attacked at knife point by a drunken man. His attacker lunged for him but only managed to gouge his shoulder (which later left a 3 inch scar covering the top of his shoulder). Drake, who was always quick on his feet, disarmed his assailant and retrieved the knife. Without intending to, he seized energy from a nearby street fire and struck his assailant. It was in this infinite moment that the realization of his connection to fire was made known to him. Astonished by this experience, he further explored his abilities by routinely attempting to control the fire instead of allowing it to control him. Through many years of vigorous training, he managed to gain better control over them.

Goal: Drake wants to create a comfortable life for himself and his future family. He imagines himself living a happy life running his trade business with his brother and parents actively involved in his life. His ultimate goal is to eventually raise a family in a safe place where he wouldn’t fear for the lives of his future wife and children.

Inventory:
Switchblade
Drake acquires this on his 18th birthday and is never seen without it.
Tinderbox
For obvious reasons, Drake carries this around to always have a source to power his element.
Journal
This is where he documents his triggers, boosts, and limitations that he discovers while building his control.
I'll be making the character profile for the fire/heat character.
I'll be making character profiles for both the fire/heat character and the animal/plant character.
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