No worries, it's a lot better than a majority of characters I've seen come through my rps in the past. It isn't super detailed but honestly that's probably best. My rp tends to confuse people especially on details haha
And yeah, we like to stay on top of things around here. ;)
All and all looks good. There's just a couple things I'm going to point out.
He has the same last name as my character. You don't have to change it but could you throw something in the sign up about there not being any relation between them? (unless you'd like to plot out some ideas involving them being related)
There's some grammatical errors but I don't stress over those much.
CO-GM will be sending you a message to bring you up to speed on what's going on. Things might get a tad confusing since the rp is being moved from another site but feel free to ask questions.
-Rebirth: Yes. She was the first official successful case in the Rebirth project. Recently had the 50 year anniversary for being in Rebirth.
-Rank/Assignment: Commander
-Call-sign: Valkyrie
-Personality: Rin Monroe is known by her stern, commanding, cold, rough, and unforgiving personality. She is rough around the edges and harsh. Her opinion of you will generally be known and given openly with little to no care for who you are or what rank you are. If she disagrees with you, you will know it. She does though have good reason for being the way she is. Years of seeing horrible things and hundreds off Rebirths has made her jaded. Constantly getting hurt from trusting people or even just showing that she cares has made her shut off. Many consider her to be a heartless monster but in all truth she is far from it. Perhaps part of her problem is that she cares to much. Deep, deep, down she does have a more compassionate side but it's hard to find because she has built practically impenetrable walls around it. Her emotions are burred under years of untold heartache. If you can ever gain her trust it is likely that you'll never loose it. Time apart doesn't diminish her trust in a person, only their actions can change it. When she trusts and cares for someone there is little to nothing she won't do for them. Most who knew her when she was younger barely recognize her. It seems all that is left of her is anger. It isn't so much so that she doesn't have emotions anymore but that they are burred and confused. Occasionally happiness, enjoyment, and love will show through her bitter exterior but when they do it can be in strange ways. Needless to say she is a complex and confusing person, even to herself.
-History: “My name is Rin Monroe. I grew up in a little village on the planet Tenish. My father was the best fighter pilot of his time in the R.A.S. When I was only three years old he gave his life to prevent a major attack on the the home planet, Shintie. He has always been and will always be regarded as a hero. I was raised by my loving mother and grandparents. When I turned sixteen I decided to follow in my father's foot steps, so I ran away from home to join the military. I went through two years of rigorous training at the academy in Vail, -the capitol of Tenish- to become a fighter pilot. Five days after my eighteenth birthday my dream came true when I was sent into battle. Little did I know of what laid ahead of me. Our mission was to protect a larger ship caring a bomb, strait through the battle field to the enemy battle ship. The mission was a success, but out of the full twenty-five of us that they sent out, I was the only one to survive. Some said it was a miracle, but my commanding officers recognized it as my unique natural ability. I quickly became known as the best pilot in the R.A.S. Years pasted and I gained many respectful honorers, one of witch was being the youngest ever to be appointed as C.A.G (Commander of the Air Group). Then one fateful day I was approached by my commanding officer and a few scientists. “Live forever”, “Never die”, ”Invincible”, ”The perfect soldier” were a few of the phrases used. They told me that I could die however many times and I would just wake up in a new body just like my old one, every time. They said it had to do with some-sort of cloning and genetic modification. I jumped on the opportunity. They took me into this lab where they pocked and prodded me. “Taking samples” is what they called it. For six months I waited to hear from them. One day two men in black coats told me to come with them, I complied. After blind-folded me they drug me off. When they removed it I was tied to a table in a dark lab surrounded by people. “We're ready to began.” one of the women said. “What does that mean?” I asked nervously. “Don't worry. It will be over soon.” she reassured me. Before I could say another word she pulled out a hand gun and shot me in the head.
I saw a quick flash of memories and then felt dizzy and unsure feeling.“Am I dead?” I thought. Suddenly I notice something on my head, it felt almost like a helmet. I blinked my eyes but couldn't see anything. The thing raised off my head and I saw that I was in some kind of tube that was filled with a goopy liquid. The last thing I could remember was the woman pointing a gun at my head, a blast of pain and, then seeing the memories. “Congratulation! Your first resurrection was a success!” Said a voice from behind me. It was the head of the project, Isaac Dean. “You mean...?” I begun to say. “Yes! You my dear just faced death, and won.” He said with a smile. I couldn't believe it, I had just died, and came back. Holding out a hand he helped me out of the tube. “Welcome to the league of the invincible...” He said putting his arm around me. If only I knew how my life would change....”
-Skills: An amazing pilot, has loads of experience with lots of different weapons. Skilled with guns and knifes. Has an eye like a hawk when she is in her Viper. She has an uncanny and incomparable talent at being a fighter (Specifically Viper) Pilot. Strong swimmer(She spent most her time on the beach growing up). Many would never guess it but she's a very good cook.
-Weaknesses: Isn't so good with electronics, especially the more advanced stuff. While she usually knows at least kind of what she's doing they seem to just hate her. The cold bothers her. Spiders freak her out. Emotionally repressed and twisted. It's difficult for her to form personal relationship in recent years. She doesn't always look at the full picture. Once she get's an idea set in her mind it's hard for her to change it.
-Romantic relationship: Currently none but has had many in the past. She doesn't openly trust and it's near to impossible to gain her trust.
-Other: She lived in a small house on a hill over looking a beach. Most of her childhood was spent on the beach and in the ocean. Her love for water has never went away. She was given her middle name in honor for her father after his death.
-Appearance: She stands at 5'10" with a well toned but plentifully feminine figure. Through the years and Rebirth she's gone through quite a variety of different tattoos and scars. At the moment she has very few scars and only a couple of tattoos. She has naturally pinkish-blonde hair (mostly kept in a ponytail) that is only seen in certain blood lines on Tenish and gray-blue eyes. Her look is generally cold and stern, when she was younger and happy she was often times complimented on having a beautiful smile.
[This roleplay is being transferred from another site. I will only consider characters from those who are serious and won't be dropping out for no reason. Please post your character submissions in OOC or PM them directly to me or the CO GM]
Rebirth
The United Kingdom of Dain and The Rebel Alliance of Shintie are two groups of planets that have been at war for almost two hundred years. In an effort to bring a stop to the UKD's endless need for power, the RAS stepped up before they could gain full control.
The United Kingdom of Dain believes in controlling and dominating of all the planets. They believe in predestining people's life course and controlling such things as where they work, who they marry, how many children they have, and what position they will have in society. However, they are generally more advanced and their machinery is more efficient. Many things in the entire structure of the UKD's society are computerized and done without ever being touched by human hands.
The Rebel Alliance of Shintie believes in the freedom of all the planets. Freedom to chose for yourself what you want to do with your life and for each planet to make their own decisions. The RAS is generally a rugged, rough cut, society. In comparison their technology is crude and highly mechanical. Portions of the alliance are more inclined to agricultural and natural means of living. It is not uncommon to find a surprising lack of technology on certain parts of the less developed planets.
The war between The U.K.D And The R.A.S has ravaged on for nearly two hundred years. Many planets have sought freedom in the R.A.S and there by gained their protection. While others have gone to the U.K.D under the promise of global peace and a stable economy and there by falling under their domination. At the beginning of the war only the planets of Dain and Shintie were at war, but as the war wagged on, other planets slowly but surely fell into it. The war has lasted for so long that both sides have begun to lose sight of what they are fighting for and are now just fighting. Through the course of the war many new technologies have been created. Most of which to try and gain an advantage over the other side with. Though given time the other side always finds a way to acquire it or something very similar to it. The R.A.S had been working on a bold but seemingly old idea, the ability to never die. So with the consent of both the military and the government the Rebirth classified project was put into place. After many, many years of research, observation, experimentation, more research, more experimentation and an abundance of tests, they were finally ready to put it into play. The first official successful case was that of Rin Monroe, A 29 year old female fighter pilot. After the success of her case the government decided that others should be added. They gathered pilots, soldiers, scientists, high risk government officials and others with “Undocumented rank and assignment” to participate in the operation. After more were added on it became more common and more widely recognized. So the project could no longer be “Top Secret”. While names and specific information was still kept classified the actual project itself became more of a common knowledge. So as such it didn't take long before the U.K.D started their own similar operation called the Living project, about 12 years after the start of Rebirth. Now Rebirths and Livings are commonly known and used.
Rebirth uses a process known as downloading. In this process every person which is a part of the Rebirth program has their consciousness constantly uploaded into the system. When a host is killed their consciousness is downloaded into a clone body which is kept at the nearest available station. There are many download stations, but not everyone has host bodies stored at every location. Most people will only be able to use stations on a ship they are assigned to or else the stations surrounding their home / resident planet. Regardless of where a participant dies, they will only regenerate at a station which holds their host clones. Once downloaded, participants are returned their full personality and memory. Physical alterations [e.g. tattoos] the host may have sustained are not transferred onto the clone though. Rebirth clones are exact replicas of their hosts, but it is common for physical disabilities or impairments to be corrected in the clones, such as substandard vision or scar tissue. Until the download takes place the clones are not conscious or aware of anything. It's as if they are a shell waiting to be filled. Some side effects may be experienced for an hour or two after downloading. Side effects generally consist of dizziness, nausea, headache, blurred vision, and a feeling of displacement.
Planets belonging to The R.A.S: 9. Shintie, Tenish, Victon, Milshin, Shantor, Mardish, Keantish, Naidor, Hanorat. Population of the R.A.S: 78,000,000,000 Capital planet: Shintie Capital city: Kelch Main military base of operations: Shintie The R.A.S Is a Democracy under the current leadership of: Shane Kelon and vice president Helen Redford. Head of the “Rebirth” project: Isaac Dean.
Planets belonging to The U.K.D: 7. Dain, Hexon, Dynex, Lintor, Mackortie, Zeenyx, Cortan. Population of the U.K.D: 65,000,000,000 Capital planet: Dain Capital city: Rokma Main military base of operations: Dain The U.K.D Is a hereditary monarchy under the current rule of: Andrew Linch IV. Head of the “Living” project: Linda White.
1) This roleplay is played in First Person
2) While things such as cursing and romance are fine please don't be vulgar in your language or go into any sexual content.
3) Respect mine, and the CO GM's authority. [I'm probably going to do or say some things that you guys won't understand but just know that I have my own personal reasons. When I put my foot down about something, don't push it because I'm not going to put up with it. I have banned people from this rp and I will do it again if I need to.]
4) Play nice with others. [If another character has done something you feel will negatively affect the rp than you can message me or the CO GM. However, if it's a personal issue you have with another member of the rp than I expect you to sort it out on your own and keep it out of the IC and OOC.]
5) No power playing. [This can be demonstrated in many different ways, none of which are acceptable.]
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[b][h3] [color=9e0039]Rose [/color][/h3][/b][/center]
[center] I suppose I'll start with the basics. I'm a female, age 22, married, mother, from and currently living in the US.
Started rping about 8 years ago but haven't been doing much writing in the past 3 years.
Ridiculously unpredictable schedule, nonexistent motivation, professional procrastinator, tired mom.
(2025 this is all massively out of date) [/center]
<div style="white-space:pre-wrap;"><div class="bb-center"><span class="bb-b"><div class="bb-h3"><font color="#9e0039">Rose </font></div></span></div><br><br><div class="bb-center">I suppose I'll start with the basics. I'm a female, age 22, married, mother, from and currently living in the US. <br><br>Started rping about 8 years ago but haven't been doing much writing in the past 3 years. <br><br>Ridiculously unpredictable schedule, nonexistent motivation, professional procrastinator, tired mom.<br><br>(2025 this is all massively out of date)</div><br><br></div>
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