Tatsua Aiisen said
Oooh, I intended on making a Firebender so it looks like we'll have plenty of hotties to keep things lit.
XD. Of course! Can't have a rebellion without people to light the spark.
Tatsua Aiisen said
Oooh, I intended on making a Firebender so it looks like we'll have plenty of hotties to keep things lit.
Lucius Cypher said
"I could lift you head off your neck and drop a wrench onto your skull. Would that please you?"
Lucius Cypher said
Well, the intent is that after Lucilia finishes her meeting with Khan, she'll hear about Rurik and than make a note of how she's suppose to help him. Than she returns to her office, looks over some reports, and notes the names of those who distinguished themselves during the Attack on College. She'd than call them up and assign them missions for them to chose at their own digression.
Frettzo said
Coco will go with the Eania Elective one
yoshua171 said
Don't know what this means. Also lol at the edit to my quote.
Mikael said
Also, have they ever met? I think they may have briefly seen each other during the Hodge fight, but.. other than that, not sure.
Apokalipse said
Your writing is fine; but if I could offer a tip. It's all bunched together, so maybe making a few parts of it separate, by subject, would make it neater. Other than that, it looks fine. You are really good with showing a character's personality, and not telling.
Themerlinhawk said
This will be interesting to see what happens if you give Mary a fragment.
yoshua171 said
Now that'd be difficult, I mean...he's deader than the Gatekeeper Violin.
Mikael said
Peskay: My default plan is having him in his secret base working on a few things. But if someone wants to meet him, I reckon you can find him in a tavern or bar somewhere asking around for clues and gathering info on emerging threats / renegades.