Ryu

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Can't post because I'm too busy UPDATING ZEN'S APPEARANCE BECAUSE SOMEONE HERE REMINDED ME.

THANKS, MAN, THOUGHT I COULD GET AWAY WITH IT IF IT WEREN'T FOR YOU.

(But no seriously thanks for reminding me)

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I don't know about you guys, but kicking buildings is the bomb.

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Well, ERode just got back from his adventure, Keia is waiting for a fabulous time to show up, I stopped saying "So how's everyone doing"/"So how was everyone's day?"/"So how is everyone?", and Yuuji is on vacation for two days, so until Wednesday.

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Pyromania99 said
Alright I'm going to start my IC post tonight and possibly get it posted tomorrow.

Eh, okay then.
ERode-san's CS and Key's CS have yet to make an appearance.
Soon?
Soon.

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This is better, much better than before for an actual tank character, so good job, buddy.

Although, the passive needs a work on it, so let's work on it, okay?

Now, the problem with the passive is, with the size of a great sword and pike, it's probably going to hit multiple enemies with one swing nonetheless, so the passive is kind of useless.

So what would be a good passive for a tank character? Of course, a passive that increases endurance, now the type of passive you want can vary. We can go with the "it's shit now but it's amazing end game" passive, or we can go with the "it's okay right now, not strong late, not strong now." passive.

So, for the first one, you can give it the passive of a maximum health increase.

"The Titan Emperor gains more health based on 1% of his maximum health"

That's pretty weak right now, but I haven't talked about it's gain. Every five levels, this passive is increased by 1%.

So, this would mean that at level ten, the passive would be 3%. At twenty, 5%. At thirty, 7%. At forty, 9% and so on.

This passive is amazing late game, and it really wouldn't be overpowered, which is why I say go for this passive since it's pretty helpful at the cost of being weak in the early game stage.

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The second passive should be easier, you can always go with,
"The Titan Emperor gains 5% bonus armor when in combat."
Or...
Faith: "The Titan Emperor gains 10% bonus armor when in combat with allies."

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Just some suggestions for the passive, rename them, rework them however you see fit.

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DragonBeastMode said
I could take out of the critical stuff then, but the chain armor I think is ok I mean, I know alot of games when tank classes wear chain armor, and having those three is not op, Ike didn't say anything about which three we can have, we can three, just alchemy would be my weak job skill. Took out the hp thing, and made it defense, which is good for a tank class, and I already said my char is not a dps it's a tank aoe, class, uses area attacks to attract enemies, so they would have some type of good attack power. I don't think I went to out the box, my char is now a mix of every type of class. But I can take out the crit part and make the passive something else.

I didn't diss the chain armor. I dissed the character wearing the chain armor. Your character was basically running around in chain armor bashing people with his weapons. As a tank with chain armor, you don't do that because chain armor is heavy.

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Hibiki No Echo said
If anyone is wondering where Chrys might appear from, chances are he's looking at your window right now.

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Detailed

I'm not going to be kind on this one.

Alright, let's start. Small CS, so this should be relatively quick.

Okay, the class.

It looks to me that you have no sense of direction of where you want to bring your character to be. Why does your character become deadlier when they level up? Your character is a TANK. A TANK. Let me emphasize that.

A TANK.

Tanks are meat shields, they receive tons of damage and do little damage for the sake of their team mates. This class will not work out at all. Right now? This class is a DPS class more than anything else just from the description. If you want a DPS class, change it to a DPS class. If you want a Tank class, don't be ignorant and listen to what Ike said to you on PMs and what I'm about to say to you right now.

Let's see what catches my eye?

Strengths: High HP, Strong Attacks, High Physical Defense, High Critical Attack Rate

No. No. No.

Not possible, you are a TANK. You want that? Go be a DPS and remove the high HP. A tank cannot have all four of these things, a tank sacrifices TWO of these things to actually be a tank, can you tell which ones they are? If not, Strong Attacks and High Critical Attack Rate. Those are for DPS, a Tank almost NEVER has Strong Attacks or High Critical Attack rate, sure, a Tank can land a lucky Crit Chance, but that's rare.

Weaknesses: Low Attack Speed

This is good, Tanks are meat shields, they do not attack fast, so good job on this aspect.

Jobs: Blacksmith, Armorsmith, Alchemist

Simply put? No. This is the holy trinity of the crafting skills, basically, and I don't think you can have all three of them WITHOUT it being OP. Instead, have your character know two of them and then have your character learn the third one (Alchemist) later on from another character.

Passive
No. You are a tank. You are not a DPS, you want your character to be a tank? Then stop trying to make him into a DPS class. This passive increases endurance, but in the worst way possibles. Tanks do not have critical chance, so landing one would be rare, and he gains back 20% HP back? Even on a DPS class, THAT IS TOO OP. At the most, it should be 7% for a DPS class if they had this passive AT MAXIMUM LEVEL. Remove this passive entirely and add in a better one to increase endurance/survivability for your Tank character.

Active One
This skill is great for saving some team mates and getting them off their back, but 25% HP at a cost? No. That is too high and that will get your character killed. Fix that ratio and turn it into something less, like 5%.

Active Two
Nope. This skill won't work, change it, and if you turned this class into DPS, that ratio is way too high and that time is also way too high.

Active Three
No. You are a tank. A tank. Not a DPS class, a tank. Do you want to keep this? Change your class into a DPS.

Equipment List: Chain Armor, Great Sword, pike
You are a tank. Would a tank be able to run around in chain armor on the battlefield killing his enemies with his OP abilities? Hell no. A tank would be the first one to arrive on the battlefield and be the slowest one out of all the characters but have the most armor and HP.

Edit: This was the revision before I edited it to be much more nicer and shorter.

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deadpixel101 said
Ryu. Have at it.

No problems with your CS as far as I can see, you explained everything well, her class and her skills, so it's not very overpowered or underpowered.

Good job. You get the...

RYU'S STAMP OF APPROVAL

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DragonBeastMode said
Umm Ryu my chars a more of a aoe class, but is tank, he uses his aoes attacks to get enemies attention, not a dps but a tank aoe class. So he would be in tank set, and I took out the strong attack thing and attack buff, and I changed it to defense buff. and I sent you a pm Ike of the fixed parts, hopefully my chars good now, before everyone writes to much and I cant join in.

I'm starting to regret not posting the full character "revision" thing I had for Lyon to actually point out what the hell was OP and why Lyon was OP (and in my opinion, still is now)

Oh well.