Shadowcatcher

Hogwarts: The Next Generation

@Angel Eyes

Awesome thank you. I too need to get my post finished x.x

@NarcissisticPotato

No idea. She's just adorable XD

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@Halvtand

I have up the information you wanted about Haruhi's beast if you want to take a look. I'll be working on the Jutsu format now.

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@Shadowcatcher Character evaluation.
Over all a very good character. I wasn't expecting such quality so quickly. Do remember to use hider-fields to keep the post length down a bit.
After a short discussion with Keanto we agreed that you're ok for jinchuuriki, as long as it won't evolve into jinchuu-spamming, in which case we'll call your mother and complain. Also, we'd like some more info on the bijuu and the relationship between it and your character.
Jutsus seem fine, but you'll have to convert them to the proper format. I know it's boring busywork, but it's so much easier to get a good picture of a character's strenghts and weaknesses if you can stay on the same page. Also kawarimi (substitution) is an E-rank technique, so you don't have to list that one. I'll add it to the OP.
Also, thanks for the pic, but I think i fixed the link in my character.

@Halvtand

Awesome thank you! I don't mind busy work so it's no problem writing the Jutsus out! I'll fix my CS right now ^^

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I made this for myself to put above my post. Just so its easier to visualize my character when they read my post. Let me know if you want one. ^_^

@Angel Eyes

O.O that's so amazing! Can you make me one? ^^

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if anyone needs help finding a picture, i can help. I'm the picture queen ^^

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@Halvtand alright. Let me know his opinion ^^ Everything else is alright though?

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My CS is finished and posted!

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Character Sheet
Name: Haruhi Hikari
Nickname/Alias: None
Gender: Female
Age: 18
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Village:

Rank: Chunin
Chakra Nature:

Appearance:


Personality: Haruhi has a personality that is unlike the stereotypical gloomy Hidden Mist personalities one would assume to find. She has been faced with death, lost a few of those most close to her, and has speant many nights crying herself to sleep. Despite it all, Haru has managed to keep her same bubbly personality that keeps people wanting to know her. She is tough at heart, determined, and stubborn, If she dosent get what she wants right away, she will fight and fight, never letting up until she gets it. She hates few things and loves alot of things. Though it once was easy to upset her, or get her to cry, it is much more difficult now. After years of trying to learn patience and control over her emotions, she had finally suceeded in such and is more laid back than she used to be. Within her are a perfect molded together combination of Mika Hayashi's fierce fighting style, and Takeshi Shun's casual and fun personality. (Those two are her NPC sensei's.) Haruhi is a quick thinker, unpredictable, and she hits hard everytime, never letting up when faced with tough challenges. She refuses to ever let down her teammates, villiage, sensei's, etc. and is extremely loyal. She can be trusted to follow through with tasks without hesitation, and no longer does she second guess herself. When she is not training, sleeping, or on missions, she can be found dragging often unwilling close ones out to eat before using her adorable charm to get them to pay. Not once has she failed with that.

History:

History

"I've grown up... I know now that death comes with being a shinobi... There are times when death is hard for me to accept, but if I don't get over it, there's no future..."

At a younge age, Haruhi was seen by medical ninja after a near death expirence. Her heart has always been weak as she grew up, and as a result, her mother would oftentimes shield her from doing anything dangerous. As a result she grew up staying at home alone most days or roaming the streets watching academy kids run around and train. Her father, Shougo, was a Hidden Mist shinobi, working as an academy teacher in fact, and it was always a dream of hers to be an amazingly strong shinobi like her father. At the age of 8, Haruhi lost her dad. She came home to see her mother crying about her father's death from an illness and Haruhi was sad but found even more determination to become strong. At the time, she didn't find it strange. There was no burial, no body...in fact, the last time she saw her dad was when he told her he was going away on a top secret mission and would be back in three days time.

He lied.

His last words to her, with a light pat on her small head was, "Take care of your mother while i'm gone okay? And don't be afraid of anything. Your super strong, never doubt that. Being a Hikari means you never give up, no matter what."

It was that that would guide Haruhi through her life as a beginner shinobi. Going into the academy at the age of 10, Haruhi's frail mind, body, and spirit held her back from graduating for a long time. She was picked on by younger kids her were in her class, made fun of for being older and weaker. Made little jokes about how stupid she was for thinking she could ever be a real ninja. Even the teachers would whisper, even the medic nins would tell her after she collapsed from pushing too hard, that she wasent suited to be a kunoichi. Despite it all, Haruhi pushed through all those years, not letting anyone see her cry but her mom. Finally, just after her 14th birthday, she would graduate and be assigned to Mika Hayashi's Team 14 along with two teammates. Time would pass and what started out as an unlucky placement in a team of jerks, would change into a team that Haruhi would be proud to be in. Though the three would likely not admit it, they all learned to tolerate eachother and become friends of sorts.

It was when her sensei gave her a small Bingo Book that a series of events would occur and result in the slow changing of Haruhi's life. She found out her father hadn't really just died of sickness, but was killed by the former Hokage. She had also found out that not only was her father a criminal wanted for everything bad under the sun...her mother knew about it and kept the truth from her for years. Angry and spiteful, she left home in search of security she ended up finding with her sensei, Mika. Together they planned a new goal for her, a new ninja way, and a new reason to keep fighting harder than she did back at the academy. Determined not to let her grief consume her, Haruhi got back up, only to be hit by another setback. The Five Tailed Bijuu would be sealed into her against her will, and again she felt betrayed by not just her sensei, but by her entire villiage. It was if everyone was trying to make it harder for her. Kicking her while she was down and throwing impossible scenarios at her at every turn. She would eventually meet Takeshi Shun, her second sensei, who along with Mika would train her and help her reach her ultimate goal of becoming strong enough to protect her villiage. Also seeking to make things right with her mother, Haruhi would go to her and tell her about her beast. Her mother would scorn her and cast her out. Claiming she was a monster and no longer her child. She would later find her mother dead at home, her rotted corpse later analyzed and determined she committed suicide. Angry and hurt beyone belief, Haruhi ended up losing control a short time before Chunin exams, and threatened the safety of the villiagers as she began changing form into her tailed beast.

Again her sensei's would help her through it, and again she felt lost, broken, and wanting to give up, but with arms outstretched from Takeshi and a firm grip on her hand from Mika, her sensei's would help Haruhi eventually fight her way out of that pit of darkness too and continue on her path to greatness. Now a Chunin, Haruhi is one step closer to reaching her new goal of one day becoming Mizukage. Being recognized by her village as a fast rising shinobi, her village leaders gifted her with the sword Kokuyōseki, that had been forged specifically for her. Haruhi would soon find out she was soon to be recruited into a different organization, and the sword was to protect her from harm.

"I'm Haruhi Hikari and that doesn't really mean a whole lot just yet. But one day, i'm going to be strong enough to protect this villiage, and everyone will trust me. They wont think i'm weak, and no outsider will ever try to hurt the people I love. One day, i'm going to let our Mizukage-sama take a break because... I'm going to rule the Mist!"

Other:

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Weapons/Items:

Kokuyōseki

Description: A heavy, oversized broadsword with a sharp edge extending the length of the blade on one side. On the other it is serated in one section. This large sword has the ability to conduct Haruhi's lightning chakra, making the blade sharper and deadlier than before. Known to still be charged when she lets go of it. The details of its forgery is unknown to Haruhi, but she knows it was made specifically for her and was infused with her chakra.
Appearance:

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Special Traits:

• Advanced Chakra Control
• Above Average Chakra Reserve
• Out of the Box Fighting Style
• Good in Ninjutsu and Taijutsu
• Good Speed and Agility
• Good Multitasking Skills
• Unpredictable
• Manipulative
• Doesn't Give Up Easily
• Jinchuriki Chakra
• Quick Thinker

Kekkei Genkai: None

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Jutsus:

Canon Jutsu

Shadow Clone Jutsu
Type of Jutsu:Supplementary Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Nature Type: N/A
Description: Haruhi creates clones that equally share her chakra and abilities.
Weakness: Haruhi can only create three clones at a time. Due to her personality of not following directions right away, her clones often don't listen to her or argue with her. It's quite amusing to watch.

Chidori
Type of Jutsu: Offensive Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Range: Short Range
Nature Type: Lightning
Description: The channeling of large amounts of lightning chakra to Haruhi's hand, so much that it becomes visible.
Weakness: The speed at which the attack must be done, and having to run in a straight line, causes Haruhi to have tunnel vision. This leaves her open and vulnerable to attacks from the side. Also this Jutsu is very loud, temporarily making it hard for her to hear.

Chidori Sharp Spear
Type of Jutsu: Offensive Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Range: Short to Mid Range
Nature Type: Lightning
Description: Haruhi uses shape transformation on the original Chidori to form it into a blade like form. This increases range and grants her less vulnerability.
Weakness: Has the same weakness as the original Chidori.

Chidori Senbon
Type of Jutsu: Offensive Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Range: Short to Mid Range
Nature Type: Lightning
Description: In comparison to the original Chidori, this technique further specialises in speed by using shape transformation to take the form of many sharp senbon that are then fired at the enemy.
Weakness: It takes Haruhi some time to aim at the enemy. Once released, they are no longer controllable, moving in the direction they are sent and can no longer be transformed.

Spider Web Jutsu
Type of Jutsu: Offensive Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: Short
Nature Type: Lightning
Description: After kneading chakra in the body and converting it to lightning, Haruhi places their hand on the ground which creates a surge of electricity that spans out around her. It creates a web of electricity around her in which anyone caught within this web is electrocuted by the lightning's effect.
Weakness: It takes time to build her chakra up. When her hand no longer makes contact with the ground, the Jutsu fades. Easily visible.

Thunder Binding Jutsu
Name of Technique:
Type of Jutsu: Defense / Supplementary Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: Short to Long Range
Nature Type: Lightning
Description: This technique lets the user create a three-sided wall of electricity to bind their opponent. If the trapped enemy comes in contact with the wall, they are electrocuted.
Weakness: Haruhi must have three or more conductors in the ground to use as points. The technique can be broken is if an outside party were to strike one of the walls with a strong enough attack, which will then deactivate the other walls.

Lightning Cable Jutsu
Type of Jutsu: Offensive Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: Short to Mid Range
Nature Type: Lightning
Description: Using the aide of a clone, Haruhi gathers lightning chakra in a hand of both her and a clone and connect them in a line. The lightning's cable is capable of cutting through nearly anything.
Weakness: Other than the fact her clones don't follow good orders, she must stay close to her clone as she is only capable of extending the cable a few meters.

Chakra Enhanced Punch
Name of Technique: Haru Smash!!
Type of Jutsu: Offensive Taijutsu
Rank: C
Range: Short Range
Nature Type: N/A
Description: A large amount of chakra is built up and gathered in Haruhi's fist. When she hits the target, the chakra is released, causing a lot of damage, depending on how much chakra is gathered.
Weakness: Haruhi is not the best when it comes to timing. Sometimes she will release the chakra after she's hit a target, which granted, works on a stump that won't move, but fails if there target can escape before she does.

Chakra Enhanced Kick
Type of Jutsu: Offensive Taijutsu
Rank: C
Range: Short Range
Nature Type: N/A
Description: Haruhi jumps into the air, aiming a falling kick to the enemy with chakra gathered at her heel. When release, she can create a crater in the ground and/or seriously injure someone it it hits.
Weakness: Same as the Chakra Enhanced Punch. Timing.

Custom Jutsu

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The Five Tailed Beast

Kokuo

Name: Kokuō - Gobi

Nicknames: The Five Tails, The Deceiving Beast

Personality and manners:
Kokuõ is a cunning beast. She doesn't lie, but bend her words in a way that may give the wrong idea to anybody that speaks to her. It hasn't been confirmed yet why that Kokuõ does this, but it's assumed that it's either of self defense or because she enjoys this. Kokuō is other than that a very cautious creature, not loving to risks or gambles, but rather playing it safe. She also doesn't show her emotions, giving the false look that she is somehow always calm and friendly. Though it's clear that she cares more for herself than for anybody or anything else.

History:
Soon after the Bijuu were created, Kokuō started to wander what is today the Earth Country. Around that time, Kokuō was like some other beasts curious to this world and simply wanted to learn and wander around. However, of all the Tailed Beasts, she was the first one to be sealed inside a human body. Only to be free after ten hours, due the weak seal. The human host exploded, making it clear that the Shinobi should develop stronger seals to seal a Tailed Beast. Ever since then, Kokuõ has been cautious for any human and developed a cunning personality to try to keep out of their hands. Some tales that resolve around are that she tricks and fools humans to do what she wants, while gaining nothing from it.

Though she has been sealed in all kinds of hosts from villages, Kokuõ has always managed to get the better out of it. Likely due her nature, she has been able to deceive and manipulate her hosts in a way that it would aid herself and sometimes resulting that it would also harm another tailed beast. After all, for Kokuõ, there is only one thing important.

Herself.

Host:

As of now, Kokuō is sealed within Haruhi, and has been for nearly four years. She had the most hosts of the Tailed Beasts, but due her deceiving personality, she never got close with a host. And seemed she has not really the intention of getting close with a host, until she was sealed within Haruhi. At first the two didn't like eachother for obvious reasons. Haruhi didn't like feeling like a monster and Kokuō didn't like being sealed away. Over time, Haruhi came to accept Kokuō as a part of her, but refuses to use her in any means to make her self stronger. Haruhi has always preferred to use her own strength rather than that of her beast, and Kokuō saw this, growing to respect the girls wishes and the fact that she was finally with a human who's goal was not to use or abuse her. The two are friendly enough. Often times they speak when Haruhi is in deep sleep aboutHaruhi's future, or how she can overcome her struggles. At this point in time, Haruhi knows Kokuō as "Gobi" and not her real name. Haruhi is the first human that Kokuō has come to like/respect because of the purity in her intentions. She admires that every decision Haruhi makes is for the safety of her village.

Cares for :

* Herself
* Freedom
* Creativity
* Likes to plot, even when it hasn't any meaning or effect on her or her host.
*Haruhi's state of mind. When Haruhi is distressed, she worries she will do something reckless

Dislikes/Hates :

* Being outsmarted
* When her freedom is being threatened
* When Haruhi calls her Gobi nee-chan
* When another beast/human is able to fool her plans

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Thanks ^^

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Working on my CS now ^^