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So to summarize, we've got the following elements covered:
Fire: 2
Air/Wind: 1
Ice: 1
Lightning: 1
Earth: 1
Gravity: 1
Darkness: 1
Light: 1
Aether: 1

While the following elements have yet to find a champion:
Water, Wood, Metal(?)

And I thought Valentia was more in Poland or Russia. Eh, I guess the map isn't exact, and doesn't have to be; as long as the Sanctum Cities are mostly defined, the setting's fine.
Re-write for Penny looks good, don't see anything that needs to be changed there.

Great! Will upload her CS sometime tomorrow or the day after.
Second Pass, hopefully, I've caught everything this time.


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Penny seems good! The only thing I should note is that magical weapons generally manifest as part of your transformation.

That said I think I'd be fine making an exception and letting Penny using Grand Eisen as her weapon. It'd just be that it becomes far more effective in her transformed state. Untransformed she could still use it to help her channel her magic, but she'd run out of juice pretty quickly.

I had re-read the setting and tried to edit that part out. Basically, it manifests like any other Gladius now. If I missed a part of the background and didn't edit that part out, point out where; I knew I forgot something.
Come to think of it, Hasta is literally on top of (or right next to) Paris. Sure, most of humanity's cities got wiped off the map and the Sanctum cities were built to house people, but it would be hilarious (and yet heartwarming) to see the City of Lights not only survive the apocalypse, but thrive (even if they changed the name for some reason).
Character Sheet up!




EDIT: changed some minor details in the backstory.
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They can have moving mechanical parts, yes. Guns are fine, as are rocket hammers or stuff like that.


Nice. Looking forwards to this.

EDIT: Okay, so a few questions.

So humanity is limited to the 23 cities, no small townships or villages. Are those globally distributed, or focused in one region/continent? Can there be cultural differences between them (for instance a Middle Eastern Sanctum City would be more Arabian/Persian in style while a German one would be more Gothic) Is there some range to the society there, or are they all basically arcologies? Meaning can there be a relatively "country folk" ring around the cities, basically consisting of those who would otherwise be townsfolk and villagers? How's the class system in the Sanctum Cities?

By "restricted use", would that mean any can operate magitech, but few can actually take it apart for maintenance/repair/etc...? Will you be explaining the magic system more when the thread starts up?

Can a character still be (at least at the start) an optimistic, cheerful person?

And most importantly... will our school uniforms and magic girl outfits be the same? :P
This looks fun, count me in.

Just a question. Would the weaponry be traditional magic girl weapons, or can it have moving mechanical parts? Mostly trying to decide whether to go for a straight traditional magic girl, a goth girl with revolvers, or a mechanically-savvy girl with a powerhammer.
Going to have to drop out of this. I just keep losing inspiration and focus. Sorry guys.






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