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Kurt🌵 I still have a stain on the page he almost ruined...
🌵 I'm sure he's a nice guy but he comes off as a tad.., bipolar, and irritable.
🌵 It might be because I almost stabbed him, that one time. Really, I have one trigger, don't touch my notes.
🌵 Don't know if we'll ever grow any closer, not that I care too much, though.
🌵 He doesn't really like me.
🌵 He makes for a good smoker character who hangs out on the fringes.
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Solomon🌵 I like his name.
🌵 Uhm.., he's kinda' cute, I admit.
🌵 He's a good guy, I guess. There isn't really anything to redeem.
🌵 Sol makes for a good best friend for the main character.., oh, an idea. Nice.
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Bree🌵 I can appreciate a steadfast personality.
🌵 Mh, I can't really decide if she's a bitch or just.., really opinionated.
🌵 I'm pretty sure there's something else, there.
🌵 Bree makes for a good character with an attitude who you eventually warm up to, maybe in the later seasons.
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Sierra🌵 I like her, in a way. She doesn't take anyone's shit, and has a backbone. That's good.
🌵 She could be the main character, for sure. There's a lot to work with.
🌵 Every good character has a mix of drama and harmony in them. Sierra seems to balance that out, well enough.
🌵 Video games bring people together.
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Brody🌵 You're friends with the mute skeleton? Huh, the choices we make.
🌵 I won't lie, Brody, you're an interesting character. There's a lot of beyond that smile, isn't it?
🌵 You'd have to fight Sierra for a place in the spotlight, I admit. I'm sure there's room for you both, though.
🌵 It's charming, the whole skater persona, just don't let masks smother you, yeah?
🌵 You are quite impressive, on that board.., if you're going to fall off, make it a good read.
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Billie🌵 There are times where the girl does manage to make the gay boy think of an alternate reality.
🌵 Perhaps we can trade words, sometime? Seeing you from afar is only interesting for the first three chapters.
🌵 If anyone here ever had anything in common with me, I think it would be her.
🌵 Do you want to draw my stories into life, Billie?
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Irene🌵 If Vinehurst ever did have a muse in its halls, it would be you.
🌵 Yes, I heard you speak through your art, a language with more words than words could ever manage.
🌵 There is a strength inside of you Irene, one I admire.
🌵 Never yield. Art glows the brightest in a steadfast soul, and yours is clearly a brimming sun.
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Brad🌵 Even your name is a stereotype.
🌵 When you think, I can hear a puppy die.
🌵 What is it you see beyond the trivial pursuit of perfection?
🌵 If there is anything beyond that shell, it would take a chisel to break it loose.
🌵 Jocks. You're a castaway character designed for the development of your betters.
🌵 One scene. You get one scene.
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Mina🌵 You remind me of Cerberus, he also brings the party with him.
🌵 I'd say you've mastered the art of social convention, well done.
🌵 One mask for every opportunity, huh?
🌵 You'd make an interesting villain. Those layers are deceiving, yet comforting to have in one's presence.
🌵 You'd require several chapters to truly shine, and I'd love reading every second of it.
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Dominique🌵 You're entertaining.
🌵 I admire the fact that you've mastered words as a weapon.
🌵 A tactical person will go far, in life.
🌵 I'd say.., anti-hero. Yes, you'll make a good anti-hero.
🌵 How come all the girls are more interesting than the guys? This school sucks.
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Calen🌵 Huh.., you vex me.
🌵 It's like staring into a mist. You see shapes moving beyond the obfuscation but you can't.., be sure.
🌵 That smile, the friendly nature, yet the air of mystery makes you.., the most interesting person here.
🌵 Most definitely an important character. I'm eagerly waiting to see what your chapters reveal.
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Katia🌵 I can't.., stand bossy people.
🌵 You blend in well with everything else I see.
🌵 You could say that's a good thing, but honestly, it just makes you forgettable.
🌵 There are strengths there but so far.., eh.., I'd star someone with more emotional color.
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Tanner🌵 There are two types of jocks, one's an eventual love interest for the main character, the other, a plot point.
🌵 Which one are you? Think with your muscles, or your brain? I can't hear puppies screaming in agony yet, so, either you haven't gotten that far or.., there's more beyond the surface.
🌵 The way you look at me, Tanner, it's endearing.., and annoying. What do you want?
🌵 Yes, the weird outsider might be able to help you find yourself.
🌵 If there is something down there.., bring it out. I can't stand spineless men.
🌵 Right now? You're the background jock with a slightly more compelling character arc, than Brad. We'll see what happens.
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Innes🌵 Being a zombie must be exhausting.
🌵 That aside, any novel you're in would be about you becoming.., human.
🌵 Admittedly, your archetype usually ends up being a psychotic killer.
🌵 However, that's just lazy writing, I'm curious to see just what's under that armor of complete and utter disinterest.