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@Siber Overall, I like your character and her angle a lot. I do wonder where her name cones from, though. If I'm going to be honest, it strikes me as pretty out in left field compared to the others.

If I am to be honest? I made it up on the spot. If you would prefer something different, I'll have something picked out within the next 12 hours.
<Snipped quote by FrogRFlowR>

I may have 4ish years of D&D experience... let me hide in the corner in nervousness...

1. That makes sense! Will edit!
2. Again, that fits, editing... >-<
3. Lunara is the chosen God(dess?). I thought I at least edited that in for more clarity... [Insert player grumbles]

Aaaand finished! Maybe? Hopefully...
@Siber Okay, so I've read the CS and I like her angle a lot. I want to see where it leads her for sure! She uses force magic in a very cool way too and makes being a bard believable in terms of being helpful. A few minor issues below:

1) The names. Remember that we're not just in a generic fantasy setting here. Drudgunzean names should remind us of names from Germanic tribes. Eskandr names should have a Norse/Viking feel to them. 'Jenny' ain't gonna make the cut, haha.

That's honestly about it, actually... Otherwise, you're good to go!

Changed "Jenny" (I am still laughing at this) - honestly I don't know what late night Siber was thinking. If any of the other names are iffy, let me know which ones specifically!
@Siber Your character feels very D&D, I guess you played it before? :P
The Background is mostly Ok, but there was a few things I wanted to clarify with you.


  • Apart from Sand Elves, Elves mostly stay within their forests so there is little chance Elven Archers would protect Euphoria. Most likely, it would be half-elves. There are a few Elves that left Mica and Yeryn, and a population of half elves across Edanica, but it is unlikely that this close to the borders of Mica you'd have elves living outside. :)
  • That part of Edanica is scarcely populated. It would make sense that Euphoria lies close to the coast, to the West. Most likely, tourists would refer to people traveling by sea to and from Malia, and stop there in the way.
  • So, Lunara is your chosen God correct? As per the edit made to the OOC, part of the chosen God's essence will be inside of your character. Just wanting to make sure!


I may have 4ish years of D&D experience... let me hide in the corner in nervousness...

1. That makes sense! Will edit!
2. Again, that fits, editing... >-<
3. Lunara is the chosen God(dess?). I thought I at least edited that in for more clarity... [Insert player grumbles]
Screw it, I have taken interest, should you still be looking? This reminds me so much of the show Glitter Force, I love it.
-Sees Pokemon RP
-Zooms in


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After many a day of contemplating (and feeling horrid at my past mistake), I have updated Penny with the requested changes!
I think I've been hypnotized by the flashing avatar. Screw it, I'm in.
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