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4 yrs ago
Current For those wondering where I fucked off to ... the apple iphone 14 pre-order launch is this thursday and I work software dev for a cell carrier. Been a lil slammed.
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4 yrs ago
As someone who once unironically used grey-on-black text .... don't. Its impossible to read on OLED screens, which include most modern phones.
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4 yrs ago
Sometimes I feel like this site is a Thai buffet. I'm sure there's delicious things here, but for the life of my I can't find anything that really speaks to me right now.
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4 yrs ago
When not prepping for my D&D table, I should spruce up some of my stuff here. Not all of my old content is the garbage I presumed it was. But some things I wrote we won't talk about ....
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4 yrs ago
Reflections on characters past: "Adi really was a spoiled brat. How did I ever think her motivations were compelling?"

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Peace is a lie. There is only passion.
Through passion, I gain strength.
Through strength, I gain power.
Through power, my chains are broken.
The Force shall free me.

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A WARRIOR FALLS



Arrows from afar pierced the flesh of the soldiers encircling her, the product of her distant allies lending what they could to her dire situation as she wrenched her staff free of the longsword embedded in it. The numbers were bad, but the lack of space to properly wield her lengthy weapon would be the death of her. She poked and clashed, blade on blade, with the first soldier to her front, testing his defense. His expression shifted momentarily, a subtle grin prematurely anticipating his success, even though Adi was nowhere near letting him land a strike.

And then a scream erupted as the bird of prey sunk its massive talons into her surprise attacker’s skull. The jig was up and she thrust backwards, sinking the butt of her staff into the stomach of the ambushing soldier to her rear. A pivot, a loft, and a hard swing down embedded the blade deep into his head just as the bird fled. It didn’t break free until she planted her boot into the corpse’s face, promptly launching her backwards and into the waiting arms of yet another hostile. She managed to bring her staff up to guard her face just in time but got it pinned against her throat by her assailant grabbing his own sword by the blade.

A second was there to finish her off, steel at the ready. In desperation she pulled both her legs off the ground and drove her boots into his chest. The soldier holding her in a choke caught an arrow in his knee just as he was struggling to hold onto her full weight, and fell onto his back with her atop him. Her lungs burned from breathless exertion. The edges of her vision were fading. She remembered her knife belt and prayed she wouldn’t lose her head if she let go. Her hand slipped, she grabbed a knife, and started relentlessly stabbing at her attacker’s ribs until he released her.

She practically threw her own weapon away as she rolled off of his writhing body, gasping heavily as everything became unbearably bright with her vision returning. Movement on her left, swinging from above her drew her focus and with it her weapon. She just barely stopped the axe coming for her skull, but its wielder was fresh. Her focus was already drained. He hooked her staff and ripped it clean from her tired grip. She staggered to all fours and lunged for it, only to catch the leather of a boot clean in her sternum.

Her chest felt like it was in a vice, her breath being stolen away again. Panic cemented its grip on her. She rolled back and desperately tried to parry with bare arms, forgetting she didn’t have her reinforced bracers to protect delicate flesh. And the axe came down.

A SORCERER RISES



The steel met smoke and dirt, a black whisp racing across the ground, dissolving the fallen staff, and then Adrianna reappeared out of thin air behind her killer and ran him through. Kassandra momentarily had her, giving the blade a hard twist and ripping it out, shredding what was left of his heart as he fell to the ground. Adi came to in a daze, not sure how she had ended up here or even fully remembering the last few seconds.‘The hell was that?’ Where even adrenaline was failing her a moment ago, her energy and wits were back about her, and she took two steps back to figure out what came next.

‘Me saving your life.’
“Well your timing...” she grunted aloud, parrying another sword and twisting it off into a spinning kick, “SUCKS!”
It managed to throw her latest opponent back several feet. The separation bought precious seconds to strategize, and bicker with the voice in her head. ‘You’re a sorcerer now. Start fighting like one!’
“I got not juice left from la-”
‘No. Stop with that bullshit. Now do it.’
She tightened her grip as the remaining three soldiers regrouped from being attacked with ... a tree? She glanced right and saw Gwynne fighting for her life against better odds, and with backup. Kassandra had finally worked up the strength to help out it seemed. The same fire in her veins she remembered from the previous night had returned, giving her strength. Three soldiers, two swords and double axes. She didn’t have her gloves to grab them by the blade and disarm. ‘Go for it. I will protect you.’

She remembered what made this energy tick. ‘Aggression is power.’ She dropped her staff. She felt the crackle at her fingertips, and stepped forward to face the first challenger. His cohorts scrambled to flank her right as he swung decisively at her neck. She reached up and grabbed the sword with a bare hand. All three hostiles froze, and in their hesitation she struck. Adi pulled the blade over her head, spinning with it and struck with her free hand at its wielder’s grip, liberating the weapon. She turned back but instead of swinging for him, she thrust an open palm first, launching him backward in a blast of energy and into the waiting arms of the stocky northman Dorian nearby. She pivoted to face the other two, fearfully flat footed of the monster they had awakened.
@Dr Catfish I specifically said I would linger around to find out more about what you had planned and that I would consider further. I never committed in any capacity to submitting a CS. I should never have been counted as an actual participant. To that end, if anything went wrong here, it's the mistake of counting chickens before they hatch. This is why I like to demand character sheets in the int check so minimum capacity is already met when I create the OOC thread. "I'm interested" by itself holds no intrinsic value and a 50% loss rate going from int check to OOC is pretty par for the course.
I'll evolve the concept a bit more and make a more complete version of it. I think a few of the difficulties in sale could be rectified by that. It also isn't *too* hard to retool to one of a couple of options that don't strain credulity as much.

And you have an entire faction built around zealous piety .. and they don't have an Inquisition? That just feels wrong. :P
@Grijs Interesting that you seek my opinion on that. I think the Chlotars are described as a bit brutish and war-obsessed in their initial description but in the expanded lore below they come across with more of a righteous zeal that's actually quite attractive. Aside from addressing that discrepancy, I think they're in a good place. The Lamperts I think suffer from a descriptive identity crisis moreso. Initially, it is made out as if the entire culture revolves around cursing God and seeking his ultimate demise. Later as you read into the expanded lore, this seems to be a fixation only of the king. The rest of the people are a hardy atheistic population just happening to live under a borderline-deranged, tyrannical leadership. That latter scenario I think is a bit more appealing and provided there's enough player influence in the Lampertian nobles' court to temper the king's bad behavior, they're a force to be reckoned with. I would also say that you mentioned the king having a daughter. I would strongly advise having a basic character framework for her done (or commissioning her out to someone), because she might come into play heavily.

Now for the fun stuff, exotic concept in brief:
Rothgar - Grandmaster at Arms of Lambertia, advisor and protector to the High King
Chlotarian by blood, Lambertian by heart
-Originally trained with Chlotar master swordsmen in the art of dual-wield speed fighting , but later banished from the tribe's lands by the Chlotar Inquisition (seems like something they'd have) for his absence of faith.
-Having more in common with Lamberts than his own pious people, his training was completed here after many years and many weapon proficiencies gained.
-Proficiency as a weapon master gains the favor of a lord; he ascends through the ranks of the garrison leadership.
-Favor is gained with the king, who replaces that noble with him (swords are more valuable than tongues) as both a court member and personal guard.

I know its probably a hard sell getting Lambertian leadership to put any trust in an outsider no matter how loyal they are ... but it would no doubt be very cool. I haven't written enough down to make retooling the character a pain in the ass when I inevitably have to. :P

Oh and I caught one more thing while writing that. The CS lists 5 tribes, but only 4 are talked about in lore. Who are the Radbouds and what makes them interesting? (or snip that before anyone else notices)
@Grijs You're going to lose some people over time. It's a fact. It's a shitty situation when you lose someone or have to eject them for inactivity, but it does get easier. You will also have dedicated people who stick with you through thick and thin. I recovered from almost 30 days of inactivity with only 1 player lost out of 8. The people who browse the advanced section are usually less liable to flake and disappear than casuals are.

Now to get into actual roleplay stuffs ... I may be dabbling with a really exotic 'out-there' character concept. I think I'm gonna write up a simplistic form of it and pitch it to you straight pending inevitable rejection before I get to work on a real sheet.
While this is the Advanced Interest check, I am thinking of posting the actual RP in Casual. (Probs with Casual-Advanced in the title)
The reason: Making long and detailed posts is fine if you want to, but doing so frequently for months on end just drains too much energy and I’ve seen RPs die that way. Therefore preferably make your posts concise and direct. Avoid dragging out and take it easy. It's fine.

What I just read felt like a capable writer more than comfortable with advanced quality standards concerned about constant pressure to write novel-length and about maintaining player population. As both a fellow GM and an interested party, I think you should stick to your guns on what you expect for posting quality. It's a hard decision to stand your ground, but I believe it would be worth it long term. And honestly you shouldn't worry about the length. Advanced is first and foremost a quality standard. I run something in that section where some posts are only about 400 words (less than 20 lines excluding whitespace). Demand quality and let length take care of itself.

The way you wrote the int check does not suggest you're remotely a casual level writer. If you put something in casual, that's the level of writing you'll get. That's not to say people in casual can't step it up to a superior tier of quality, but it sets the lower common denominator. I think you should build the RP to your ideal participant, and then the closest people to that are exactly what you'll get. It may reduce your prospect pool, but I personally consider that better than compromising the vision. Hell, it's worked out for me so far. The advanced section does inherently move slower, but a little determination to ensure the inexorable march of progress goes a long way to running a roleplay until the end of time.


These are the hard decisions to make, but they're what define you as a GM. So tell me ... "Who are you, and what do you want?" You have my keyboard, and my sword.
@Spoopy Scary no, I'm not going to do that. Airing my grievances here would undermine the GM and I will never ever do that to someone no matter how badly I take issue with something they're doing.

My reasons are my own and I do not expect the majority to adapt to accommodate me. No individual should ever be that important.
Please be aware I should not be counted among the interested parties at this juncture. I thought in the name of Star Wars I could push aside my concerns but I was ultimately mistaken in that regard.
... and that we're also going to set aside rule of cool for what seems to be a relatively minor point of lore-accuracy.

Stormfly has not purported herself to be super concerned with the minutia of lore accuracy, and certainly not to the point of affecting player choice in that fashion. To that end, my stance on the matter at hand is rather straightforward: I want to hear it from the GM before it goes down as a hard and fast rule.
So you're telling me that in a thousand years, nobody thought to weld two of them together ... and that we're also going to set aside rule of cool for what seems to be a relatively minor point of lore-accuracy.
[skepticism intensifies]
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