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My cat who was missing for a year finally came home, I'm so happy!!!
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Great, I'll try to get something up soon.
Hello, I'm interested in joining if that's alright, I can have a CS up as quickly as possible tonight.
I'm interested as well.
Hope that was okay and that it doesn't conflict with anything. :)
A small republic ship exited out of hyperspace, aboard it was a Padawan, the blue-eyed girl's faint slightly pale reflection appearing on the glass as she stared out the window, the ship slowly approaching the planet. This was her first mission without her Master, she was a tad nervous, she had only freshly become a Padawan and hadn't seen too much combat, she hoped she wouldn't have to fight too much.

Neviana thought back to how her Master had told her that she was to go to the Cyphan system to provide some additional assistance to the other Jedi and Padawan there, it was a last minute call and no other Jedi were near by and could respond, not to mention that her master had her own mission to accomplish that she couldn't be dragged away from, so she decided to send Neviana. Not that it seemed like a dangerous mission, just there had been reports of the Trade Federation trying to bring the planet on their side of the fight, either through negotiations or force, so better safe than sorry.

"We'll be touching down soon." A clone voice spoke over Neviana's wrist communicator, breaking her from her thoughts. "Oh, right...thank you." She spoke, not really knowing what else to say. The planets atmosphere slowly started to break as the ship descended into it until finally it touched down on a landing pad and then the ramp extended down for her to exit.

Soon after she exited off the ship, the ramp retracted back and started to leave the planet, the Republic couldn't spare any additional troops what with other planets more strategical targets to either take or to keep from the separatists. "Well I guess good a time as any to try and find the Jedi and other padawan on this planet." She spoke to herself as she started to make her way out of the landing area. She sensed some force users on the planet, but there was more than the two she was told about and they were in different directions and she couldn't waste time trying to search them all. Ready to pull out her holocomm and try and contact the Jedi Master, she suddenly heard an attack going on along with small explosions coming from the State Building, she didn't know if it was an attack on the Jedi that was here or just some common gang attack, either way, she couldn't stand idly by whilst it happened and quickly started to run towards the sound of the commotion.

As she was making her way into the deeper parts of the city, she noticed some droid not too far off in the distance heading towards the city, she didn't like the looks of that, she was a talented Jedi, though still hadn't had all of her skills developed, but the amount of droids heading towards the city was too much for her, that she knew, so with a little boost to her sprint with the force. With her nearly at the building, she decided to pull out her holocomm, hoping to contact the Jedi Master, "Hello? Master Rolin, are you there? My name is Neviana Sarin, my Master sent me here on orders of the Jedi council to assist with whatever's going on here." She had assumed that it would just be an observer or minor added assistance, like when her Master would have her guard politicians and diplomats on other planets whilst she faced whatever threat was looming, she wasn't so sure that was the case with this assignment, she hoped the Jedi Master would respond soon.

@TheUnknowable Alright, thanks, just didn't want to assume and the so forth saying with that. :P
@TheUnknowable Just wondering so I don't mess up, it alright if I add my character to the IC and Character tabs?
@Shiny Keldeo Yeah, suppose I could edit a few things around to try and make some things fit better and I always try to make my characters interesting in some capacity, thanks for the feedback.

Edit: I fixed it up a bit, hope that works a little better, probably not but my tired brain thinks anything looks good, hehe, I had written something else but I felt it was a little long and a lot of stuff in it wasn't needed, hopefully this is better as I said.
Hope this is okay, I don't know, felt the backstory and a few other things might not have been right, if this is accepted, I was wondering if it would be okay for her to be either arriving or already there as a padawan alone, I know that on most occasions they're accompanied by a master, but there have been occasions where they've been on their own missions before and I figured this would be one of those times, what with a war going on.

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