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A Symphony of Elements

Very safe. As for holiday approach, you thinking a Halloween-type deal? Or a Thanksgiving thing? Or dare I say Christmas?

Winter is Coming.

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Sketcher said
Just to put it out there; I edited and added the story about Konoe(the swordmaster)'s death. Not because I'm expecting more feedback so quickly, just saying it :)I wouldn't want to be greedy, now would I? :(

Thank you for your cooperation. You're in.

A Symphony of Elements

This is doable, and if Asami couldn't be controlled then Xano would take it upon himself to bear the burden of containing all the elements on his own. Anything we're forgetting?

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Lawless said
Name: Akira Master strategist. Impressive pain tolerance. Large chakra reserve. Adaptability. Photographic memory and vivid recollection. Swordsmanship. Espionage & Tracking. Recognizing and dispelling Genjutsu. He is more physically powerful than he looks. Excellent hunter and stealth expert.

Please tell us how much chakra the queen demands to mass produce that fast, the pros outweigh the cons but I just want to know how much it takes to make this technique happen.

As far as skills go, you have way too much. Not even Itachi or Kakashi could have all those perks and they were geniuses in their own right. Going to ask you to remove at least a couple of those, perhaps the 'master strategist' bit and maybe the 'physically more powerful than appears' bit. People like filling in a lot of holes in their characters arsenal, but I ask that you not make your character a master of just about everything at 17 years old. No matter how hard he was beaten, you can't excel in every category.

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We did discuss Ikki, Jinora was to be yours and she was to be mine, but considering the weight of so many characters the safe option may just be to see how we feel about it later. The original intention was to turn Ikki against her family since Xano found a means to draw on her bending without causing her to perish later. Jinora becoming 15 could work just fine if we do go with 5 years. Tenzin and Lin, however, hit their early-mid 20's? We also need to figure out how exactly they did so, perhaps a misguided attempt to get the two in Xana and Xano's corner, but doesn't work. We can cross that when we get to it but we have a lot going in before that I think. We got dates, we got apologies, we got sparring, rebuilding, love ...all that jazz.

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Yeah that's the route we were going, it's all coming back to me now. Meelo does die for the final element and eventually succumbs as his mother did, although faster given his age. Xana and Xano may have found a way to create bottled youth, so Jinora, Ikki, Lin and Tenzin reaching their prime ages is still a possibility if we could make some sense of it.

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Sketcher said
I know I'm being a little impatient by asking this but... Could I get some feedback on my app?

Yeah just a little bit ...

Anyway limited detail on this mission that apparently went so wrong that only your character returned. You didn't describe the time between meeting your master to losing him, so awakening Mangekyou makes little sense to me. You could've only known him for a month or a week as far as any of us would know. Age doesn't really MATTER per se, I mean Sasuke got his at 16 under stressful conditions: Killing a brother he looked up to, and discovering that Itachi was just doing what the Leaf needed him to do. Your origin doesn't exactly cover that very well, so here's what we'll do: You can use this incident to unlock Stage 3 of the Sharingan, but there's too little information on his growth with his Kekkei Genkai to warrant you having the most powerful form that doesn't involve an eye transplant. Sorry, it makes us uneasy, and the Mangekyou is a lot of power. Doesn't help that if you're suspected of killing a fellow Uchiha to awaken it, the Hokage, who is an Uchiha himself, would likely hesitate on seeing you progress unless you could explain what had happened in detail with a good team nearby knowing that what you say is truth and not fabrication.

Jounin isn't given based on power alone. You need to show excellent qualities in leadership and have a level-head, as well as the skills to get the job done. To that end, I don't think your reasoning for reaching Jounin is acceptable and I'll need to ask you to find another way to make it work or settle with Chuunin. Jounin aren't typically 'loners', not saying they can't be, but they at least need to know what it means to lead people and you didn't mention much experience in that field.

So fix these bits and we'll see where we're at. Other templates are currently under heavy review, we'll let you know ASAP folks.

A Symphony of Elements

Excellent, Excellent. I THINK we said water, but Asami just has the look and feel of a fire bender. I actually remember us discussing the possibility of Asami having two as an experiment later; Fire and Water. Artificial Avatar and all. Mr. Sato could be a good tool to make sure that this doesn't get out too soon.

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Lin using the motherly side she wasn't sure she ever had <3, Lin coming to see Tenzin and Pema is kind and he'll appreciate her gesture. The frustration of knowing no doctors he could find can cure whatever ailment is afflicting her will be high. Asami and Korra should talk at some point soon while Bolin and Mako are learning the ropes on the police force for sure. The motive for releasing Mr. Sato escapes me; remind me what Xana and Xano wanted with him? His names a little trashed but he does know a thing or two about engineering.

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Well Korra and Bolin growing closer again is a good opportunity to 'make up' for her past mistake, even the past Avatar's are trying to prevent her from going to such a deep dark corner in her heart where taking her life was actually considered. In short, BolinxKorra is on. A week later is fine, just after Asami is introduced to the possibilities Xana and Xano can create and awaken the latent potential within. As Pema's condition worsens there will steadily be less of Tenzin, naturally, as he'd want to be with Pema and try to understand how things could go so wrong when she was so healthy days ago. Asami adjusting to bending is fine, but who is she trying to befriend? And yes Mako would be interested in it as well, withholding surprise that Bolin had taken a little charge and wanted to sign up.