TJByrum

Marches of Man: the Black Shields. [ALWAYS OPEN]

It gave me coldchills reading those character descriptions. And now I think I like the idea of having Warren continually ask "am I loyal to the king?"

I think Warren has a certain respect for Gregar, but I think he was disappointed when he removed Ella off of the throne. To him, this was wrong and unjust.

And I won't reveal just yet 'why' Warren hates the sultan's men so much. He just hates them. With a passion.

Marches of Man: the Black Shields. [ALWAYS OPEN]

And if it'd be better, I have an idea for a religious fanatic who wants to join the Black Shields for the sake of furthering his religion. He's mostly non-combatant, and tries to amp the team up with his ritualistic prayers. He has complete faith in his religion, and isn't afraid of anyth8ing because he believes his faith will protect him. Not sure what religion I want it to be, but I was thinking Sawarim, just to spice things up.

And people who seem to want to make new bios can just save our current bios for characters down the road, if you'll allow multiple characters.

Marches of Man: the Black Shields. [ALWAYS OPEN]

@Partisan Do what you think is best, Partisan, I think everyone here will understood your decisions.

Marches of Man: the Black Shields. [ALWAYS OPEN]

Agreed, Partisan, personalities can be tricky.

Could you tell me what other types of characters you had expected?

Marches of Man: the Black Shields. [ALWAYS OPEN]

@Partisan: I'll work on the personality a bit more, but is there anything else I need to fix? I tried my best on personality, but that's one of the hardest parts of a bio for me to write.

Also, I think 7-8 characters is adequate for this roleplay. More characters offers more dynamic, but sometimes it gets convoluted, especially if some of us get really busy. Then again, I guess that's why this is 'Advanced Roleplaying'.

And I also think the addition of other characters, whether they're controlled by us or others, would be interesting too.

The Island [More Worldbuilding than Nation]

I see a lot of grammatical errors, run-on sentences, and lack of making additional paragraphs @Murtox. Think you could fix those?

Asgeir

History of Eastmarch

Eastmarch lies to the east of Remes, and south of Vessex. It is a small and somewhat insignificant kingdom built in wooded pine lands.

Asgeir

History of the Skogg

The Skogg are an offshoot race of Varan who inhabit a stretch of land that extends northwest from Asgeir. It is a cold, harsh land, even wore than Asgeir itself. The Skogg who live here are powerful, brutish, barbaric savages who still cling onto their tribal ways. It is said they embody what Varan use to be.

The Skogg are mostly independent, but when the need arises they follow a single leader, known as 'the Skogg'. They are secluded from the rest of the world, and rarely interact with the Varan.

Asgeir

History of Vessex

Vessex is a moderately-sized kingdom lying to the east of Asgeir, and northeast of Remes. Theregion was once controlled by the Reman Empire, but the natives wrested control from the Remans and proclaimed independence. It is now known as the Kingdom of Vessex.

Vessex is a rocky and rugged land, with dark forests and ridged terrain.

Asgeir

History of the Sultanate