Tuujaimaa

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

I would like to point out that I am, in some circles, considered the King of Overpoweredness - and I wouldn't accept Teleport's character in its current state at all ever.

Not only is it a massive faux-pas to be skilled in more than two areas (except Ken/Tai, which while distinct are intimately tied), you are also trying to be more skilled in all three areas than everyone else is. Some of your techniques do not make sense, which always supersedes every other facet that goes into making a technique. Your sword is blatantly overpowered given that it can materialise and dematerialise at will - which, if regulated, can be an interesting mechanic, but your wording has been left vague so it is... Absolutely ridiculously broken and open to all kinds of abuse.

Your Kekkei Tota is, in a word, a mistake. Not only are its effects completely unregulated and immensely overpowered, your having the Kekkei Tota is bogus given that being born with it implies that it is genetic, and there is... No way for your to have been born with both the Sharingan and your Kekkei Tota.

And the rest of your techniques are broken beyond all comparison, having little to no possible interaction and generally accomplishing things that should not be accomplished.

Like, seriously. This is quite possibly the most broken thing I've ever seen, and I've seen /a lot/ in my time.

Natrelmon: From the Ashes

VOID

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

@Corrupt: There are three changes to Akaritori that I need your approval/disapproval on c:

Her new sword, Ascension and Riverside Cremation <3

Natrelmon: From the Ashes

As the Chu used Surprising Speed, Sagralia countered immediately, as Itsuki had been prepared for the use of the move. Mock did not happen, as Chu was not given the directive to use it and the pre-existing conditions under which it was operating had not been fulfilled, and Sagralia's Trinity Force switched to SSS, enabling both the use of Hydroshackle and of Hydrosurge. The Kusarigama was not something that Sagralia had to worry about, as it would deal fairly negligible damage, so as the Chu continued on its path it would immediately be met with a Hydrosurge to the torso, which (due to the short distance and the 18fps speed) was guaranteed to hit the Chu directly. The fast and wide spray of water would engulf the small Chu and knock it back a fair distance just with sheer power, and though it was not a particularly effective move due to the Chu's Steel typing, it would create a buffer of distance.

Sagralia would then sow again, in a circle around itself, and infuse the seeds with Lifecharges, turning them into vines. The vines would give Sagralia a zone of comfort in which Chu could not act without repercussions, and simultaneously, it would unleash several Effigy of Loathing at the knocked back Chu, hoping to increase Sagralia's zone of control further. If, somehow, Chu was not hit by the Hydrosurge, Itsuki and Sagralia would be ready to react.

[0 LC]

Natrelmon: From the Ashes

Sagralia sowed seeds again, and as soon as Chu got in range, well within the two seconds required for Effigy of Despair to charge, Sagralia would step forwards quickly and unleash the point blank attack directly at Chu. Given the instant nature of the attack and the forward momentum he had, he would find it difficult to dodge, and the Nox Aeterna - Path would be created if he didn't manage to dodge in time. Surprising Speed was not a particularly viable option due to the instant nature of the attack, but Itsuki had considered its usage and was fully prepared to dodge it if Chu attempted to close the gap with it. Simultaneously with the unleashing of the Effigy of Despair, Sagralia unleashed a Hydroshacke that was initially obscured by the Effigy of Despair, but angled in such a fashion that it would strike the small Ninja's form if he began to dodge to the right. If the Hydroshackle hit, Sagralia would instantly use Flash of Life to create flowers, which it would then shackle the Chu to. The shackle would prove to be extremely dangerous if it hit, but Itsuki was not expecting it to hit - especially given Chu was yet to use Surprising Speed. As per usual, Itsuki and Sagralia remained ready to react and change their aforementioned strategies should circumstances dictate.

Natrelmon: From the Ashes

Sagralia would seed again as Chu rolled to the right before firing its Effigy of Despair - it would do nothing, as Chu had not started running at that point, but it would briefly obscure Sagralia long enough for it to fire three Effigy of Fear, one directly at Chu, and the other two in such a fashion that they would be five feet to the left and right respectively from his current position as soon as they reached where he would have been as they were fired. As Chu came forwards, another Effigy of Despair began charging. In order to get close, he would have to walk within the range of Sagralia's point blank attack, and though he was resistant, it would provide the desired effect of creating Nox Aeterna. Itsuki remained observant, and ready to react to any sudden movements from Chu, and as always, actions were ready to be changed at a moment's notice if the conditions changed.

[6 LC]

Natrelmon: From the Ashes

"I already have." came the reply as Sagralia moved into action. The Spirit Bond allowed the two to communicate without words, and throughout the entire exchange battle plans had been forming in Itsuki's mind - though they had been very general and of little use until Axel had brought Chu out. The shadowy aura that naturally surrounded Sagralia was intensified, indicating that it was charging a move, and it began by firing a single Effigy of Loathing headed directly for Chu. Simultaneously, it sowed seeds, and prepared its Trinity Force, currently with the elements Tide, Tide and Stream. The battle would be somewhat unexciting to begin with, for Sagralia's style was one of winning a war of attrition, and it was at the start that they were weakest. In order to do much, Itsuki reasoned that Chu would have to be extremely aggressive immediately, which could backfire if he was not careful. It would be a good test of Axel's mettle.

Natrelmon: From the Ashes

"If you'd like, I'll be happy to help you warm up for Anastasia. I'm afraid my Natrelmon are considerably higher than yours in strength, it seems like..." He smiled, laughing a little as he pointed to his Sakura-oh and his Sagralia stood next to him. The two Natrelmon were obviously protective of their trainer and were very imposing despite their floral nature. It was also immediately obvious that the bond between them transcended words, and that Itsuki would be a rather challenging opponent for Axel. Perhaps that was what he wanted.

"I'm a very skilled mage, so it's understandable that you'd rather it just be Natrelmon - that's fine with me, though. I'll make a temporary Arena for us, to better simulate the conditions of the Arena proper." He added, before using a combination of his Frostburn Pillars and Pillars of Winter to create two platforms for them each to stand on, and a square arena forty feet long in each direction. There would be plenty of room for each Natrelmon to move, and while the Arena was only six or so feet tall, it provided a good approximation of the bounds that Axel would face in Anastasia's arena.

"If you fall from the pillars, you lose the battle. If your Natrelmon exit the Arena, you lose the battle. Ready?" He added, prompting either Sakura-oh or Sagralia, whichever Axel wished to battle, to take their place in the Arena.

Natrelmon: From the Ashes

"Itsuki Mayoi." He nodded, returning the handshake with a polite if slightly reluctant grip, and standing up to stretch his legs. If Axel was a new trainer, he'd probably be wanting to practice before he challenged the arena, but that was a decision Itsuki would leave to Axel - if he wanted to, he would ask. If not, he would simply go to face the... Seemingly innocent leader of Toran's Arena. She was very enthusiastic about asking people if they'd seen her Tibearius - she was notoriously forgetful and clumsy - but Itsuki doubted the ability of Axel to help her find her Tibearius if he missed the giant red lettering on the building.

Natrelmon: From the Ashes

"The Arena is over there, easily identifiable by the big red lettering on the building that says: "Toran Arena". I take it you're new to these parts." Itsuki replied, laughing off the... Less prudent nature of the new fellow. He looked fairly cold, as if he'd just come from around Relin, so he was willing to give Axel the benefit of the doubt - but whether or not Anastasia would be a challenge for him was a different matter entirely.

"I heard she's a lot tougher than Kiken, the old Arena Master, was. Good luck!"