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Finally got another post up :)
Aristo said
Ahrazan watched the heavenly retinue from the shelter of the tall reeds he kneeled behind. Like a comet they had plowed into the earth from above, the few with spears scarcely subtle in their descent. The Ohlgar had never had the privilege of laying eyes on the winged folk before - all he knew about them from was old myths and lore. They were lauded by many of the civilized peoples to be divine, beings of religious significance. Ahrazan could certainly see why. They were tall, resplendent figures of shimmering skin, and their wings graced them with an otherworldly appearance. Yet, for all the tales he'd heard of man throwing himself to his knees before the angelkin, Ahrazan felt no innate need to prostrate himself before them and ask their blessing. What kind of deities would remain so distant from their congregations as if they had never existed at all? As the crimson-clad warrior pondered this, he felt the waxing of Melekeshar's presence at his side. the entity whispered, his voice like that of many speakers' words laid on top of each other. "Their very bodies are radiant. But are they truly the gods I've heard them to be?"Melekeshar's grin reversed itself into a grimace. "Like cowards?""Why would they reappear now, if they detest the earth so much?" Melekeshar stroked his chin quizzically. "It would seem as though the angelkin might attempt to enforce such a tradition. If they were agents of the Goddess, that is. But-"Ahrazan tipped his head in an inquisitive gesture. "Would that be a wise idea?" the entity answered with a laugh. Melekeshar emerged from Ahrazan's hiding place, the warrior in suit, and stepped towards the small assembly of angels before them. Ahrazan looked over his shoulder at his companion, who had altered his form to replicate a .


“Filth!” one of the Angels cried out. With a flap of his mighty wings he was next to Gabriella. “Filth and mud! That is all the Dirt offers.” The clothing on the Archangel Tyran looked almost identical to that of his men. Only a golden headband with ancient texts showed his rank as general of the Angelic army.

“You would be wise to remember what the creatures of this world has achieved with these fragile and crude materials,” Gabriella said softly and enjoyed how grain colored her heels yellow.

“And you would be wise to remember, Gabe,” Tyran returned with, “that though you are a Archangel and a Councilmember, this quest of ours is military.”
There was truth in his words. Unfortunately. But the last thing she needed was a lecture about rank from the general. Though her influence was large in Crystal City, here she was but a guide and consultant.
For all her pride and stubbornness she said nothing. It was too early to fight with another Archangel - one who was older, but not wiser than her.
Instead she breathed in more of the rich air, the world of the Dirt offered and enjoyed the sky for a few more seconds.
Then something moved in the corner of the young Archangel's eye.

Out into the field came 2 knights in armor – one so large and broad-shouldered he made an Angel seem small... well, only if you forgot about their wings.
As if on cue the Angels drove their spears with haste and pointed them with deadly precision – all but the 2 Archangels. Yet again Gabe showed her unquestionable, yet unofficial, power on the quest, by raising her hand and saw them lower theirs. Though it was not visible to the eye, she too was armed. She was more than just a diplomat. Much more.

“Enough,” she muttered softly, yet ever single souls heard her.
The blue silk-dress, she wore, outlined her slim legs, as she walked across the heavy grain. One would almost not think the rules of gravity applied to her. Her feet moved with divine ease as she approached the strangers.
“Greetings mortal men.” Her wings almost mimicked the movement of her arms, as she spread out her thin hands in a friendly gesture. “The Heavens have opened their gates and ears, and that has led to this very moment.” It was with sapphire eyes she looked upon the knight in front. Tall… no doubt immensely strong for a human or humanoid.
As the heavenly being thought the strangers where close enough for her taste, she stopped. “Now, remove your helmets good people, and tell me your names.”
There was much expectation in her voice. Immortals, emperors and kings had bowed down to Angels through centuries, and right now Gabe was honoring these mortals with her presence.
I will write a response, as soon as I get a window of opportunity.
Wow, IC really has exploded, while I slept :D
And the angels seem quite popular, hehe.
PinkFlower said
Unkown....I partially feel like my character should say. Where do I look?


:p
Aaaaaaand... the angels have landed! :D
At first there was nothing. Nothing but the calm sound of grain waving in the wind. The yellow field would offer both peace and quiet for anyone who decided to enter it. Yet at this moment no one did. Emptiness and bliss ruled here.

Then something happened…

Something… the size of a person… fell from the sky. Without being affected by wind or weather on this calm day it fell strait down like a meteor. Clouds separated like dry leaves before this incoming anomaly. Flocks of birds turned around terrified by the strange phenomenon.
As the figure came closer, the human-like features became more visible from the ground. The delicate, fragile shapes of a young woman falling became clear.
Closer and closer she fell…
Then, just as she was about to hit the ground, a broad and powerful set of wings spread out from behind her back. Instantly the blond woman was stopped and gently hovered down, until her bare feet touched the grain.
As heavy as she could fall, as light could she wander over the yellow field. She took a moment to breathe in the heavy air the surface provided and felt the soft grain between her toes.

Suddenly, with no warning, 6 men dropped down too. Like her they had wings, but these guys were not gentle. Their landings send dirt flying and created shock-waves - destroying any hope of harvest. Their fine tunics, sandals and leather-braces did not hide any of their muscle-definition. In fact the thin clothing only made their swelling biceps that much more visible.
All of them were carrying large, golden spears, which they were pointing in all direction. But as intimidating as they looked, a simple hand-gesture from the female was enough to bring them at ease. They trusted her counseling and guidance.

The breeze that blew through the field did not have any effect on the golden hair of Gabriella. Her long locks floated, as if gravity could not hold them down.
Gabriella, the female Archangel.
Gabriella the Brave-hearted.
Gabriella a Council-member of Crystal City.


She moistened her sensual lips before silently whispering: “Look to the sky, mortals, for you will remember it. Because at long last… WE have returned…”
Angels are quite popular apparently.
And to think my first thought was to be a giant :D
Hey, I would like to make a quick apology, if I seemed a bit too stubborn yesterday. I actually do think it might be a positive thing, you all got me to lower some of the character's powers. It is probably for the best.
So thanks for being patient with me.

And... I will be looking forward to RP with you all :D
I'm glad you didn't delete the previous one, as I had made some changes to the CS there ;)

Name: Gabriella the Brave-hearted.
Nickname: Gabe
Race: white-winged Angel
Gender: Female

Age: 366 years (quite young in her culture)
Age Appearance: 29 years
Birthplace: The Crystal City, high up

Alignment/Affiliation: The Divine Nation of Angels (neutral)

Rank/Occupation: A Council member and Archangel of Crystal City.

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Weapons/Items:

Name of Weapon: Gabriella’s sword
Description: On the ground this weapon is nothing more than a blade, but in Gabe’s hands it can engulf in flames and even shoot small bursts of fire.
Appearance:
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Appearance:
Just like her kin she is both elegant and beautiful to behold. Her hair always floats in the wind, even with no wind. Though she appears almost fragile, the truth is far from it. She wears no actual armor or protection, only simple thin silk-material. The wingspan on her is huge and rather impressive for most people to watch.

Personality: Though slightly arrogant and snobby, she is unusually curious about the world (which is known as “The Dirt” amongst Angels). Her bravery and mental strength is respected around her own kind. Though young her wisdom rivals that of some of the older Angels.

History: The floating fortress of Crystal City is a marvel to behold. Yet no Human, Orc or even Elf has ever laid eyes upon it. It is the place where the legend of high Heaven started. In it lives the ancient and proud white-winged Angels - pure in heart and mind, or at least that is what they will tell you. Though other Angels can visit and enjoy the hospitality, only citizens can stay. If a white-winged Angel was to ever find a partner from the outside, their family would be disgraced.
The creatures living down below are all considered lesser beings by the Angels, who refer to the world as “The Dirt”. From time to time an Angelic warrior flies down and report about the activities of the lesser beings, but no contact is allowed.
Crystal City was built only of pure moonstones and sparkling crystals. It’s just one of several places inhabited by Angels, but it is the most famous and beautiful of them all. The capital of Angels.

Yet for a whole year a strange sickness has plagued the great fortress and city…

Angels have had their wings turn gray and weak. Maybe one day Angels will lose their wings. Searching the archives and ancient scrolls has proved useless to the Angelic people, as no answers were found. Because of it, other Angelic nations have started to put distance between themselves and Crystal City. Disgrace is near. One day maybe all Angels’ wings will turn gray. Maybe one day Angels will lose their divine power.
HERESY!
Such can never happen!
Angels are not afraid and doesn’t worry! Simply implying it, is heresy.
This is still just a new and minor concern.


The timing couldn’t be worse. A hidden evil has been foretold. Chaos, death and destruction will erupt in The Dirt. As Angels consider themselves Masters of Existence, it’s their duty to preserve life and save the lesser beings – even from themselves - and even by killing some of them. The inhabitants of The Dirt are but foolish children. The real problem is that it has been many ages since Angels last meddled in mortal affairs. Someone who has studied the puny beings is needed to travel down.

This is where Gabe comes into the story. The young Archangel’s curiosity for the outside world has always been met with annoyance. Since white-winged Angels consider themselves the Masters of Existence and mentors of all living things, they want little to do with the filth below. Angels have, through time, guided mortal nations through quick visits and fast bloodshed and threats. But since humans started to explode in numbers and military-strength, Angels have kept their distance.
That is where Gabe differs from most of her kind. She takes the part about guiding the lesser beings as a sworn duty. Her opinions have started many arguments in the Angelic Council, and she has yet to win a single one. But Gabe is still respected. Her cunning, wisdom, strength and determination have always been admired, and have secured her a spot on the Great Council for the past 68 years. But not only that, she has also achieved Archangel-status, an honorary title for only the most powerful and divine Angels. It is not often a Master of Existence practice both diplomacy and war.
Gabe is of good, noble family and has never broken a rule… yet.
When it was decided, that a small group of Angels was to travel down to The Dirt, she was picked because of her knowledge of the puny world.
So while her own home struggles to find answers for the strange occurrences, she visits the mortals’ home because of duty.

Only as long as Angels feel a responsibility to the silly little dirt-world, do they control it.

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Strengths:
- A physical strength much greater than a normal man, and combat-skills even greater.
- Her powerful wings can transport her around faster than any other being, and create powerful winds to send opponents or incoming arrows flying.

Weaknesses:
- Few friends and allies at her side.
- Arrogant and ignorant to many things in the world.
- Her good heart and self-sacrifice can easily be exploited.
- No long-ranged attacks.
- Little capabilities to defend herself from anything, that can’t be dodged or blocked by her sword.

Name of Magic/Technique: Immunity.
Rank: A passive and very old ability which flows in her blood.
Users: All citizens of Crystal City have it.
Description: Immune to most poisons, deceases as well as many spells too. It offers a good defense in and outside battle.
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