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@Aristo
You still here? We are Co-GMs and I think Angel would be alright if we took off with the boats... But I'm not sure exactly what he wanted, so maybe that's not a good idea...
@HushedWhispers

Shoot... I hope I can do a rich girl with a modeling background because I alright have a great idea for that. xD
@Jig
Ugh, I'm so conflicted... I really want to do this, but I know I won't have time to keep up... So I think I'll have to drop my interest. If it is alright with you, though, I would like to watch what other people do and kind of just read it as if it were a book as the posts go on because it is an AMAZING concept. So... I'm still interested, but I can't make a character if that makes any sense. I'm sorry. :(
~Ella Tremaine~


Name (Fairy Tale World): Cinderella
Other Names (Fairy Tale World): Ella, Cinders
Real Name (Fairy Tale World): Ella (Carlyle) Tremaine
Occupation (Fairy Tale World): Servant and Performer
Place Of Origin: Province
Age: 20
Affiliation (Fairy Tale World): Neutral Good

Appearance - Thirteen Years Ago (Seven Years Old):



Appearance - Earth (Twenty Years Old):



Wardrobe Style (Fairy Tale World):
Because Ella is only a servant, she does not get very many fancy clothes. She rarely changes from the clothes that she was given when she was first sold to the castle, but after hearing her sing while she was cleaning, Gaston forced her to sing for him almost all the time, and she had to wear this every time he had company over and he wanted a performer to sing for them.

Relationship Status: Single
Partner: None
Father: Weston Carlyle (Deceased)
Mother: Eleanora Carlyle (Deceased), Lady Adelaide Tremaine (Stepmother)
Siblings: Anastasia Tremaine and Drizella Tremaine (Stepsisters)
Pet/s: She has a pet white mouse she keeps in her room in a box. Her name is Dream and Ella always makes sure to give some of her food to her.
Other: Gaston Le'Gume (Master)

Personality:
Ella is a very independent, strong woman who does not like to be bossed around… though she is a servant. She is sarcastic at times, which can be seen through her comments behind Gaston’s back. She is mature and does not seem to have a childish side, though many think that she would since she grew up a servant and never had any real experience in the world. She is quite rebellious for a servant, considering that she longs for the experiences that others have had that she has not. She disobey many things when given to her and is beaten quite often. She is intelligent enough to know though when not to say, "No." She prefers to be learning about fighting and attempting many escapes instead of doing her chores or singing for Gaston. She has a fierce personality. She tends to distrust people easily, since she placed her trust in the wrong people when she was young. She is not a caring person anymore, as she was when she was a child.

Strengths:
She is quite intelligent for being a servant since she was seven. She is also very strong at cleaning fast and cleaning extremely well. She has a beautiful singing voice. She does have the ability to ride a horse very well and she is a fast learner. She fights expertly well with swords, as, in her free time, she hangs out with the private blacksmith at the castle. She has extensive knowledge of battle Weaponry and gear from working with the blacksmith.

Weaknesses:
Because she is rebellious, it is easy to tempt her with freedom to get her to do what you want. She is also very stubborn and hard headed, which can lead her blindly into bad situations. Her ability to say No is a dangerous one in the servant world as well.

Magic Capabilities:
Cinderella has no magical abilities.

Weapons:
She mainly uses and practices with swords, but she can shoot a bow pretty well.

Brief Biography (Life In The Fairy Tale World):
Ella was born on a cold morning in the middle of winter to a rich family. Her father was a watchmaker and seller, but her mother came from money, which is why they were able to afford their own mansion in the upper part of Province. Her mother died giving birth to her, so her father named her after her mother, Eleanora, but later shortened it to Ella. Her and her father were not close, especially since Ella reminded him so much of his dead wife. Soon after Eleanora had died, her father inherited all of her money and he went on a spending spree. He used it to kick start his own shop in the city, but soon it went under in the market. He lost all of the money within a year. He had a one year old daughter to take care of and he wanted and needed money fast. Lady Tremaine was an older woman who had always had her eye on Ella’s father, for the beautiful mansion space, and she finally found her chance when his business went under.

They were married within six months and within three days after, Lady Tremaine and her horrid daughters moved in and took over the house. Ella was three at the time when they moved in and they immediately put her to work. She was small enough to clean the gutters, get into tight spaces, and even clean the chimney, which is where she got covered in cinders and soon took on the nickname Cinders, which gradually became Cinderella. She was under the thumb of her stepmother, but Lady Tremaine could never get rid of her because Ella’s father was still in the picture. The only reason for marrying him was to get his mansion, which was the biggest in Province besides the King’s castle. So, she staged a murder.

At dinner one night, when she was six years old, Ella’s father crumpled at the table, clutching his heart. Lady Tremaine sat at the other end, dabbing her mouth with a white napkin, and just smiled. She had poisoned his after work drink and it had finally passed through his system to his heart. Now, the mansion and fortune were hers and her daughters’. There was no need for Ella anymore. The year that the Queen took over and Clayton Le'Gume took over Province, Lady Tremaine took her chance and sold Ella to Clayton Le'Gume for the perfect price. She managed to get back almost all of the fortune that Ella’s father had lost.

Ella was seven when she was sold to Clayton Le'Gume, Gaston's father. She was immediately put to work as a maid for the whole house. She swept, cleaned the floors, did the dishes, any form of cleaning that the family needed around the house. Gaston, after he took over for his father after his father's disappearance, first heard her sing when she was fourteen and put her to work as a servant and a performer when she was fifteen. Every party he had, every guest he hosted, every special dinner he had, she sang at. She is also not allowed to sing outside of a party, ball, dinner, or anything. She began to feel trapped when she was sixteen and that's when her rebellion began to kick in.

She would try to escape the castle more than once a week and she took more beatings. She would refuse work and disappear for hours on end. As she got older, though, she realized this was not smart. So she continued working, but every spare moment she had, she would disappear to the blacksmith, who became her constant frien after catching her the first time she tried to escape. The blacksmith made weapons only for Gaston and his Guards and he allowed Ella to practice with them in his shop, as long as she promised to sing for him each time she came. It was treason for treason, but Ella was fine with it, evendors a little excited by it. Little by little, she began learning about weaponry and war gear and she was fascinated by it. The blacksmith taught her everything about war and she was enthralled.

When she was about eighteen, she began sneaking out into the Guard Training area and began practicing her fighting and her shooting. Slowly, she has been getting better and better and she is preparing for the day when she can kill Gaston, kill the woman who killed her father, and be free of her chains forever.

Brief Biography (Life On Earth):
Cinderella has never been to Earth nor heard of it.

Other:
Nothing

"I’ll Be" By Edwin McCain.
@Invader LenMaybe we shouldn't even do this if we don't get along. And just for reference, I had Tara play it as if they had worked together before, that's how she knew his name when it came up in conversation. Just the same, everyone knows his obsession with Ghostess, so if Ramirez walked out alone, that would most likely raise suspicion with her.

As with the phone business, it would be easy for Tara to call the precinct and have them route her to his phone if she lied about it being an emergency, since you claim that he has worked with the precinct for as long as he has. Someone at the precinct would have his phone on file somewhere, so it would be easy to route it.

Just as well, Melissa is not a superior officer, she was just delivering news. The chief, according to you, had left at that moment, and Tara honestly didn't care about Matthias after the chief left, so that is why I made it so one-sided. She doesn't like people getting on her cases. And if we can't do LOGICAL ideas that could possible happen and we had to do everything according to what YOU say though I am the one that had the detective and the thief interest check to begin with, then, as of now, I will no longer be RPing with you. Just as well, too. School starts on Tuesday for me and I will not be on as frequently as I will like. You can continue this RP, but it will be with someone else beside me.

That's all. Thanks for your time. You are an amazing writer and I hope you do well, but we're too different when it comes to writing.
Godmodding, not okay, even if you think you know what the person was going to do. Please delete it. I was actually, going based off the first part of the post, have Ghostess back off and go out to call Matthias. Tara was watching from the roof. She would've seen Matthias walk out if he had did. She would have thought about this before she entered.
@Invader Len

.... you did not just do that right? You did not just take control of my character and USE her. No way you just did that. You did not just Godmod my character, RIGHT? -_-
It was quite obvious when Detective Charlot arrived, because he immediately began questioning the curator of the museum. Tara just shook her head and continued to study the items herself. He also arrived with the ever annoying Ramirez, who seemed to not be able to leave this case alone because Eliza is close to death. The curator walked off quickly and Tara just shook her head.

“If you’re going to be a part of this operation, you needn’t scare off one of our leading experts on these artifacts,” Tara said loud enough for Detective Charlot to hear. Tara turned and cocked an eyebrow at Matthias. “So what exactly are you doing here? We have enough detectives at the precinct to work this case on our own… Daddy’s privilege, hmmm?”

Tara,” Melissa hissed at her, but Tara just shook her head and continued to walk around, searching for weak spots. She eyed the small windows surrounding the basement. They would be just above the ground at this height, which means if she were to get through this way, she would need to wiggle along the ground and slip through. But they could only be unlocked from the inside. Narrowing her eyes, she turned and walked back toward the steps.

“If you’ll excuse me,” Tara said, roughly bumping passed Matthias to get to the stairs, “I have some real detective work to get done.” She stalked back up the stairs and went back out into the open exhibits. Melissa, giving a small smile to the young man as she followed her friend him, hurried up quickly after her and caught up with her.

Well that was quite rude of you,” Melissa said, grabbing Tara’s coat covered arm and yanking her back to a stop. “You could at least try to be nice to the poor kid.

Tara jerked her arm out of Melissa’s grasp and snapped, “I don’t give a damn on what you think, Melissa. This is my case. It should be my case. Ghostess is… the reason I became a detective. I wanted to stop people like her and I don’t need any rookies messing it up!”

May I remind you that Ghostess was a stem off from the work your father did?” Tara stared at Melissa and Melissa then realized she had gone too far. Her slim pink mouth shut quickly and she frantically searched her brain. “Tara, I didn’t mean…

“Tell the Captain I went home and I’ll be back in the morning,” Tara said blunting, tucking a piece of black hair back behind her ear. “The storm is getting worse and I don’t think anyone wants to be caught in the rain out here.” Melissa tried to reach for her arm, but Tara dodged around it and made her way back outside, holding up an arm to block any rain from running into her eyes. It would just mix with the tears. Tara took a deep, shaky breath before ducking into her car, soaking wet, and driving off down the street.

Her knuckles were white as she gripped the dark steering wheel. She was almost half tempted to flip on her siren so she could get to her apartment faster, but that would be wrong of her. Instead, to pulled steadily to a stop at a stoplight, with no one else around. She pressed the heel of her hand to her forehead, taking a deep breath, and pressed her forehead to the top of her steering wheel. This was just the “best” day so far. She couldn’t believe that she was babysitting a private detective.

The red light stayed for a long time and she blinked open her eyes. What came into view was her laptop bag, with the Ghostess uniform stowed away neatly inside in it. She stared through the front window. It was still raining, fairly hard in fact. But she knew if it was Eliza in this position and she had seen what Tara had seen, she would go for it. Tara swore under her breath and yanked her car into reverse. She did a U turn and sped back down the street.

There was a small diner just off of Third Street, only a few blocks away from the museum. It would take only five minutes to get there and it would take only a few minutes to change… She drove into the diner parking lot and parked in the back, away from the streets to where no one would be able to see the unit. She slipped in through the back door, and then disappeared into the restroom. This wouldn’t take too long.

Locking in one of the stalls, she plopped her laptop bag down and began slipping out of her drenched clothing. She pulled out the black yoga pants and black tight fitting sweatshirt. Tara didn’t understand why Eliza needed to look like a ninja, but she did always have those damn katanas on her back whenever she went out, so it was obviously a look thing. She slipped into the tight clothing, pulling the hood up over her head and slipping the mask up over her face. She pulled her sister’s black boots on before flipping out a makeup mirror and painting a cat eye liner on both of her eyes. It was one of her sister’s signature characteristics. She then pulled on her slim black gloves and tucked the lock picks into her boots.

The door to the bathroom suddenly opened and someone walked in. Tara froze, waiting for the person to leave. It took the person five minutes of possibly staring at the mirror before they walked back out again and Tara quickly threw her wet clothing into her bag and slung in back over her shoulder. Her Glock was still on her waist and she had Eliza’s katanas in her truck for later. She hurried back outside quickly, making sure to stay out of sight from any form of person. She knew there wasn’t security cameras on this diner, which made it an easy mark to change.

Heading to her car again, she opened up the trunk and pulled her sister’s katanas out and slung them onto her back, throwing the laptop bag in the back. She tucked the signature onyx swans into a pocket on her side. She hooked her keys onto a belt loop and hurried down the street. She ducked into the alleyway and found a low enough fire escape to climb up to the rooftops. She climbed up quickly, ducking through the rain. Her boots slipped, and she nearly fell, but she flipped up onto the roof before she could fall.

She began sprinting across the rooftops, jumping from roof to roof. Almost each time she had to drop and roll and then pop back up to sprint again. She managed to get all the way to the apartment building across the way from the museum. She crouched down at the edge and pulled out a binocular. She looked to the street and saw that there was only one car still there. Melissa must’ve left after her. She kneeled down, and pulled the mask up around her mouth. She would need to wait for that last car to leave before she could dodge in.
Interested! Definitely!
This sounds interesting....
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