Host said
No, what Scootaloo said.
Oh, that was to Sweetie Belle. Terrible at magic. The blunt way she said it is normal to the way I've seen her act in the show. What do you think?
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Oh, that was to Sweetie Belle. Terrible at magic. The blunt way she said it is normal to the way I've seen her act in the show. What do you think?
Host said
Her talking to Cheerilee?
The only thing AB said to Cheerilee was why Sweetie's magic aura was black.
Host said
There may be a thing or two.
Of course. So, how have you been?
Host said
The story makes it seem like the knife changed something, and I thought what Applebloom said was a bluff. And she seemed really disrespectful.
I'm not trying to project the image that the knife is changing anything, though. I guess I'll have to change a few responses. What quotes seemed disrespectful?
Host said
Okay. So there was a typo. "The look on DIamond's face" as opposed to "Diamond's."And I felt that the second "mind was muddled" was a little redundant. Although, It wasn't really clear how the knife played to the magic, and I can only assume the dark magic was the cause of the attitude.
It wasn't dark magic, actually.
but ah may have accidentally mixed myself up and put the stuff for an aura colour changer too.”
Which attitude? What do you mean by the knife played to the magic?
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Host said
*Laughs*There's not much I would be surprised at.
Not much any of us would be surprised at now, really. *chuckles*
Think you could look this over? http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/619942 It's not done, obviously, but still. Clunky language is easier to find in shorter intervals. If anything seems unrealistic, if language is boring, you know, normal editing stuff.
EDIT: BTW, the unpublished view password is PerfectlyNormalKnife.
EDIT: BTW, the unpublished view password is PerfectlyNormalKnife.
Host said
Hey, it can't hurt.
You wouldn't believe how not alive they looked. Although I probably could have tried anyway. Nothing of a magic drain to try and revive. Next time I'll be sure to try, though, if they die.
Host said
Hm. Did you try to resusciate them?
They were extremely very not alive.
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