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You pm the bits in it to Yosh and he helps you with them.


I just realised where he put the stat system. I just filled it out myself.
Sorry for the double post but I wanted to ask this separately and I didn't want the question lost alongside the CS: Am I supposed to put in the stats and descriptions myself or are they going to be given to me?
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I see you've already started this RP. I had a look at it from yesterday but I haven't finished my CS. My intention was to make a 4th seat originally from squad 11 and I just wanted to know if it was still worth applying.
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Jin wasn't as confused as he should have been. It happened quickly but he understood that he was being passed from Briney's authority to that of Mitchell, or Honnings or Mitty if his deductions were accurate. 'Oldale' was the name of the area they were heading to. Jin knew little about Hoenn and while he also knew it seemingly had nothing to do with why Jin was requested to the region... this was exactly how he wanted to start his investigation.

"So, you starting your own Pokemon Adventure, pops?"

Jin glanced to Mitchell and chuckled.

"I'm a little old for that dream now. I am here for discovery. There are things about Hoenn I'm eager to understand. I don't think I'll find the answer I'm looking for in a gym battle though." replied Jin as he approached Mitchell's Manectric. He showed a signed of peace by gently and cautiously petting the pokemon. His movements were cold but civil, not wanting to patronize the pokemon or give a pretence that he was infatuated or enamoured either. He climbed up on Manectric and clutched at its mane for a reign and held on tightly as they traveled Upon approaching the settlement of Oldale Town, Jin could tell that it was a humble, tranquil community. Instinctively it put him on alert for anything that was too interesting or mysterious that would ruin the boring, simple aesthetic of the town. He followed Mitchell to a house and was introduced to the extent of his family. Jin smiled as Mitchell grabbed his shoulder.

"So - this is your hometown," began Jin as his eyes scanned the room. "Three generations; you obviously have some roots here. Places like this, people know people. I'm sure just entering your house at least three of your neighbours knew that I wasn't a local myself. Tell me; have you come across anything new or unusual as of late?"
@c3p-0h Haha! Yeah, I could tell. Seems to be "hot headed" in that way. I liked how you pulled off the fact she's chasing headlong into something she's totally unprepared for but still calm enough to make quick decisions that solves a problem with the least resistance. It really showed a lot of character development. I just wanted to voice my appreciations for your efforts. ^^

@Xan the G Although, I'm not helping much either. I'm at a loss of how to get him to where he needs to go. I'm still brainstorming of things I can do to make it happen. I'll probably implement a small time skip to get it going. I feel bad for failing you. :(


The best thing to do is to consider Jin's story like a side event in Fallout or Skyrim; everyone else's story is a legit mission, Jin's story is kind of like sitting around in a town long enough to see a special interaction between npcs.

...lol in other words, write as if my character wasn't important, just write what the NPCs would normally do, and I'll rp Jin intervening like a detective would!
@c3p-0h Awesome post! Very well written (not that you've never made a good post). I'm just saying it read well for an intense action scene. ^^


Tbh the quality has been quite high. I can't speak so much for myself as I haven't really delved into anything meaty yet. I'm probably the furthest behind storywise of the original players. But believe me, once Jin gets into a mystery, I'll be picking up my pace.
@Xan the G Sorry if it was vague, but my post meant to portray that they were no longer at the table (or they all finished with breakfast) and that Jin was meant to be dressing in his now-dried clothing. If that's not how you wanted to take it, it's fine. It doesn't really change anything substantial. ^^


Oh right - let me edit then. I'd rather that tbh.
Jin smiled as Briney explained that he wouldn't be going out to sea, but having an eventful day with his son. He swallowed the morsel in his mouth and nodded approvingly.

"That's fine," he replied. "I'll follow your lead all the same. It would help even just to hear some stories of what you have seen about the beach over the years." explained Jin in reiteration. In a brief passage of time, Jin had all his clothes on, which included his multipurpose black-camo raincoat. He was heading for the front door, in the middle of the hallway when a voice as crude as it was impatient piped up from the outside. Jin noted that amongst all the natural faux pas the voice seemed to be taking an endearing liberty, suggesting that it was not simply being rude, but probably belonged to someone who knew Briney well enough that it would be taken tongue in cheek. To that end, Jin refrained from responding in any meaningful manner other than glancing to Briney for his cue. From his position at the table, Jin could see into the hallway where the beholder of the voice was approaching, able to appreciate both his stature and attire, soaking as they were from the continuing downpour.

By his dress sense, Jin didn't see anything about him that suggested he had any akin to boating, but the manner in which the man called Briney to action and the way in which he had no concern about the rain water nestling into his clothes suggested a man in his element. Jin was just glad that for once this didn't present yet another person seeing Jin in a compromising fashion. He tried to avoid eye contact with the man and rotate sideways to let him pass as he entered. Jin's intention was to fade into the background of whatever interaction he would have with Briney.
I posted - I know it seems like a strange choice to stay around Briney but I want Jin to come off as a guy who doesn't think about things inside the box; it will be the reason why his investigation will turn out differently to those before it.
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