For something made from Wiki-stuff it's certainly not too bad. I've seen way way worse. Certainly it's messy and clunky in some aspects but the idea is clear enough.
@heroic2019 I was actually going to avoid going the mystic eyes route because they are supposed to be relatively rare and I'm sure another master may want to have mystic eyes. But, you are right that she would probably already be able to enhance herself with runes...
I will definitely keep it in mind though. I also very much like the idea of making the cards into spell containers. In that case I may change her deck mystic code to simply a "deck box" that can instantly enchant any card (or card shaped object) that is put into it.
Mystic eyes aren't all that rare. It's more about the level of mystic eyes that determines if it's something rare or not. Stuff like the basic sort are manufactureable. Things on the ranking of Jewels are a big deal. But there's plenty of in-between and go for whatever is my advice.
It's funny that I was planning on using him considering a certain other character already shown in this game...
Lancer
Percival: The Dolorous (M)ender
Short Bio/Synopsis: Once there was a innocent ignorant youth living peacefully in a glen with naught but her mother and the company of a lively woods. To live simply in the wilds surrounded by nature, separated from man and their ways. A life away from the glory of the men of Britain, of the chivalry and the wisdom of man.. Yet that all changed when he witnessed strange men in the forest, knights. Enamoured he declared to his mother he wished to become one, to serve under the man spoken with such reverence by the knights, King Arthur. A man that was not just a man, kingship in the form of a human. A person no other could be like, no other could approach. Such an ideal was far from the simple life of simply seeking sustenance and humble existence as shared with his mother.
His mother lamented his choice and desires, having taken to such a secluded existence to spare them the heartbreak and suffering that came with such a life after to death of his father. Yet the youth could not be dissuaded. Given the gift of a ridiculous outfit to travel in to mark him as a fool so he may return humiliated and yet hale and whole. Percival traveled to Camelot. There, he slew the Knight Ither and claimed his belongings so as to become a knight clad in red.
A fool who became a knight, a knight who was foolish. Yet he was strong, holding the strength of a wildman and soon, with his prodigious talents, the skill of a champion. Becoming one of the Knights of the Round Table he soon became known as one of the elite knights of Arthur.
Yet left in the wake of those adventures and paths traveled are regrets. The admonishment of failing to ask a question, the shattering of a sword of virtue. Through penance and understanding he came to visit the castle again and claim the Grail or so it is said.
If asked about the Grail he would surely simply laugh off the matter and say that the grail to focus on is the grail that will be before the at the end of the war. Yet what is certain is that Percival has completed his journey.
Cleansed of regret, arriving to the final destination of what he was born for. The youth has become a peerless knight.
Stats: STR: B CON: B AGI: B- (Representing the lack of control when utilizing his Noble Phantasm) MGI:B LCK: A MR: B NP: A+
Class Skill: Magic Resistance: B Cancel spells with a chant below three verses. Even if targeted by High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for them to be affected. A high rank for the Lancer class that's all in all unsurprising for those who know of his many adventures and exploits, along with his status as a knight worthy of the grail. If he were to hold a class that held a greater ability in this skill then…
Personal Skills:
Eye of the Mind (False: B+ The natural instinct and qualifications for a knight honed and sharpened by years of adventuring, experience and the attainment of wisdom. Growing out from the comforting and yet small Glen, the world of Lancer expanded. Yet likewise he has grown far from the fool, and now takes up arms as one of the perfect knights of the spear. In some circumstances Percival is able to see to the end of courses. His life and experience coming to form a sort of insight that goes beyond mere knowledge for such things. A bonus essentially to plotting his course and focusing on achieving it.
Question Dolorous: - The healing question that restores all to its rightful state. An ability of healing and mystery that lifted the wound caused by the Pillar. It is an ability born of Percival’s virtue and the mystery of the Grail Quest and Castle. It is something that goes beyond healing just the physical. Misfortune, ruin for both the people and land were restored. Whether it be individuals, objects, or even the land and leylines themselves all manner of things can be healed by Lancer. In a sense a Crazy Diamond-esque ability of restoration and reversion.
Virtuous End: B+ The end result of a story. The knight becomes a lord as proof of his virtue and completes his quest. All heroic spirits are completed existences, finished stories that have had their final page written with a Fin. Such a state and nature is all the more pronounced in Percival who chased and chased after his destined and intended end of becoming a great pious knight. No matter the stumbling block or loss he encountered on the way he has without doubt become the knight worthy of a Grail.
To change the nature or state of Percival is a fruitless endeavor. Even something akin to blackening or staining him otherwise impossible. For the most part one could say it' to be an immunity to status effects and burdens that would diminish his status as a pious knight. Whether it be madness, unchivalrous charms and compulsions, or a mutilating of his form.
Noble Phantasm:
Name/Tile: Brace Longinus : Charge The End, Man of Corbenic Rank: A+ Type: Anti-Unit (Anti-Fortress) Range: - (1-99) Maximum Number of Targets: 1(1-1000) Description: The Lance of Longinus. A spear with a light similar to that which fastens the world of the human order to the surface of the planet. Such a peerless light would scorch all enemies before him with as much devastation as the spear of the end…. Or so it would if it were used in such a fashion. Not fully unsealed by Lancer, he instead utilizes it in a different more unique fashion. Combined with his own abilities, Lancer “braces” the lance against the leylines and land, connecting to it utilizing it’s nature as a pillar for a temporal-enactment. Connecting to the land and using its energy and support in a reversal of the dolorous strike by the lance that ruined it. The energy both floods and rejects Lancer, sending him blasting forward at his target at extreme speeds, garbed in a massive light of energy to rival and exceed even that of dragons or holy swords. Infused with such energy normally even the body of a hero or spirit would break down.. And break down it does. But with his ability to restore Lancer continuously heals himself, allowing him to harness the power beyond his limits. The magical energy swirls and spins along with his circuits, drilling into whatever stands in his way. Yet even covered and defended by such a potent power this can only be called an hyper-offensive high risk attack.
Utilizing a limited release he otherwise utilizes a lower scale version of the Noble Phantasm to coat himself in energy akin to a phantasmal beast’s aura. Yet the cost for such a burst and coating is the loss of fine control. To fight in such a way would be foolhardy if not for his experience and instinct. Chasing after the end he seeks, he becomes a human missile and lance.
As for what such a ridiculous and reckless fighting style is called by him. He calls it Horseless Jousting. A knightly form of combat that can be brought forth without any limitation or reliance on mounts.
As a side note… it seems that upon witnessing this attack, the Wizard Merlin found himself with inspiration on instruction for a fair maiden knight with a dazzling shield.
For something made from Wiki-stuff it's certainly not too bad. I've seen way way worse. Certainly it's messy and clunky in some aspects but the idea is clear enough.
Lancer is ready, but I'm gonna sleep since it's been a long day, before waking up to edit and quality check on things.
Hey, I’m interested in this RP and I’d like to be a marine. I’m thinking of either going the Blue that has the most players or starting out simple with East Blue.
Gender: Male Age: 17 Birthday: 3/11 Height: 179.8 Weight: 65
Nationality: Japanese
Personality:
An absolutely self-centered, self-assured individual. While not even necessarily meaning to be arrogant or superior, it’s a natural line of thought that’s central to him. His existence and self could be said to be a filter that his thoughts start on.
Perhaps it could be best said that he believes that he has the ability to effect the world, and that for better or worse, his life, and the events around him hold a relation to his own actions. One who is a master of his own destiny, and is in turn supported by it.
Proud, he holds himself up to a self-set standard, and to the responsibilities of his (overinflated) position. The eldest male, and therefore heir to his prestigious family. Supported and encouraged to go to the famous Academy City (so the unsuited failure could be gone for a while), he lives a life full of blessings and fortunes to live up to his family name and status.
Ah, if only if they’d raise his level. Someone like him can’t be a 0!
With the feelings of a not understood genius carrying the secret knowledge of, and crusade against those who wield magic due to his sister (and unknowingly the rest of his family.) It could be said that his petty vengeance is the cornerstone to making him feel extra-special instead of merely gifted..
Biography: A beautiful gifted child born to a wealthy and affluent family. The life of Senki was certainly one that was destined to be blessed.
If not for one problem. His blessings, his special ability, his abnormality from birth made him ineligible as a true member of his family. The Kayne were a family of magic practitioners. Due to Senki's status as an Esper making him unable to utilize magic he was kept in the dark and was, unknownst to him, looked upon as a black sheep, with his younger sister coming to inherit the path of his family and their knowledge. Consequently to get rid of him he was sent to Academy City. Senki for his part saw this as an extreme show of trust and the fact that he was worthy of his family legacy and status as the eldest son. After all what young child is sent to the famed city of advancement and science to live alone as a student? Obviously the gifted and special.
With his ability excelling at his studies, doing well with other kids and various other obstacles in life for a young boy were a breeze to get through. Although he still continues to fume about his (in his opinion) completely undeserved level of 0.
While he never discovered his family's true background, he eventually discovered the fact that his sister practices something strange and barbaric like magic, and so has come to shun and despise her, calling her, ironically, a black stain upon the Kayne. This distaste has caused him to hold a great dislike for mages in general, even if he accepts his sister to an extent due to the obligation of blood, and finds her presence (after she decided to move in and live with her brother at some point to keep her eyes on him and spend time with him) more than annoying.
School: Eiri Highschool Grade: Second Year Highschool Skills:
Academic top, skilled scooter rider (eventual plans to upgrade to a motorcycle. Has a license.) skilled at wasting hours at video games, tech savvy in comparison to an average user. That is to say, someone who’s googled up a few things and keeps up with trends.
Krav Maga (False [Karate True]): He’s looked up a lot of books and internet guides. He has never actually met a person who practices it. He considers himself an expert.
In truth he learned Karate at a local dojo growing up. Talented enough at it, he reached the level of a black belt.
But Karate just isn’t all that cool or hip, especially when one is at a place like Academy City which is the cutting edge of cutting edge.
Good at karaoke and holding his liquor (It’s cool to drink as an underaged student)
Faction(s): Academy City Student
ESPer: Ability name: Centerpiece (BlessedFocal Point) Level: 0 Premise: N/A: Attraction (Fortune) : Gemstone Description: Theorized to be a strange ability with a limited form of AIM Diffusion Field Resonance that causes other ESPers to gather to him and notice him. In a sense an AIM that forces itself to imprint and focus the attention of others onto him. It is thought that his large AIM is due to the nature of this ability.
In truth an in-born natural supernatural quality to Kayne Senki. His ability makes him into a nexus of fortune and blessings. A recipient of all the good in the world, and where they all intersect.
Another way to look at it is that he is one where those with talents (Magic or Espers) gather to. This ability is part of why he’s managed to become so popular, and partially why he’s able to continue his secret strange petty vendetta as he’s accosted by, and is able to find magic users.
Both as a matter of a blessing and fortune, as a wish, a lucky thing and as a divinely ordinated fate, along with his ability to draw others to him, his already pretty good looks are made to look stunning and it’s said that many girls fall in love with him.
Truly the heartthrob of Eiri High School.
Naturally such an ability has interesting possibilities when it comes to interacting with other Espers and various phenomena, but at its current stage, and his current knowledge and ability it's primarily a matter of attracting things, people and supernatural luck/fortune.
Gender: Male Age: 17 Birthday: 3/11 Height: 179.8 Weight: 65
Nationality: Japanese
Personality:
An absolutely self-centered, self-assured individual. While not even necessarily meaning to be arrogant or superior, it’s a natural line of thought that’s central to him. His existence and self could be said to be a filter that his thoughts start on.
Perhaps it could be best said that he believes that he has the ability to effect the world, and that for better or worse, his life, and the events around him hold a relation to his own actions. One who is a master of his own destiny, and is in turn supported by it.
Proud, he holds himself up to a self-set standard, and to the responsibilities of his (overinflated) position. The eldest male, and therefore heir to his prestigious family. Supported and encouraged to go to the famous Academy City (so the unsuited failure could be gone for a while), he lives a life full of blessings and fortunes to live up to his family name and status.
Ah, if only if they’d raise his level. Someone like him can’t be a 0!
With the feelings of a not understood genius carrying the secret knowledge of, and crusade against those who wield magic due to his sister (and unknowingly the rest of his family.) It could be said that his petty vengeance is the cornerstone to making him feel extra-special instead of merely gifted..
Biography: A beautiful gifted child born to a wealthy and affluent family. The life of Senki was certainly one that was destined to be blessed.
If not for one problem. His blessings, his special ability, his abnormality from birth made him ineligible as a true member of his family. The Kayne were a family of magic practitioners. Due to Senki's status as an Esper making him unable to utilize magic he was kept in the dark and was, unknownst to him, looked upon as a black sheep, with his younger sister coming to inherit the path of his family and their knowledge. Consequently to get rid of him he was sent to Academy City. Senki for his part saw this as an extreme show of trust and the fact that he was worthy of his family legacy and status as the eldest son. After all what young child is sent to the famed city of advancement and science to live alone as a student? Obviously the gifted and special.
With his ability excelling at his studies, doing well with other kids and various other obstacles in life for a young boy were a breeze to get through. Although he still continues to fume about his (in his opinion) completely undeserved level of 0.
While he never discovered his family's true background, he eventually discovered the fact that his sister practices something strange and barbaric like magic, and so has come to shun and despise her, calling her, ironically, a black stain upon the Kayne. This distaste has caused him to hold a great dislike for mages in general, even if he accepts his sister to an extent due to the obligation of blood, and finds her presence (after she decided to move in and live with her brother at some point to keep her eyes on him and spend time with him) more than annoying.
School: Eiri Highschool Grade: Second Year Highschool Skills:
Academic top, skilled scooter rider (eventual plans to upgrade to a motorcycle. Has a license.) skilled at wasting hours at video games, tech savvy in comparison to an average user. That is to say, someone who’s googled up a few things and keeps up with trends.
Krav Maga (False [Karate True]): He’s looked up a lot of books and internet guides. He has never actually met a person who practices it. He considers himself an expert.
In truth he learned Karate at a local dojo growing up. Talented enough at it, he reached the level of a black belt.
But Karate just isn’t all that cool or hip, especially when one is at a place like Academy City which is the cutting edge of cutting edge.
Good at karaoke and holding his liquor (It’s cool to drink as an underaged student)
Faction(s): Academy City Student
ESPer: Ability name: Centerpiece (BlessedFocal Point) Level: 0 Premise: N/A: Attraction (Fortune) : Gemstone Description: Theorized to be a strange ability with a limited form of AIM Diffusion Field Resonance that causes other ESPers to gather to him and notice him. In a sense an AIM that forces itself to imprint and focus the attention of others onto him. It is thought that his large AIM is due to the nature of this ability.
In truth an in-born natural supernatural quality to Kayne Senki. His ability makes him into a nexus of fortune and blessings. A recipient of all the good in the world, and where they all intersect.
Another way to look at it is that he is one where those with talents (Magic or Espers) gather to. This ability is part of why he’s managed to become so popular, and partially why he’s able to continue his secret strange petty vendetta as he’s accosted by, and is able to find magic users.
Both as a matter of a blessing and fortune, as a wish, a lucky thing and as a divinely ordinated fate, along with his ability to draw others to him, his already pretty good looks are made to look stunning and it’s said that many girls fall in love with him.
Truly the heartthrob of Eiri High School.
Naturally such an ability has interesting possibilities when it comes to interacting with other Espers and various phenomena, but at its current stage, and his current knowledge and ability it's primarily a matter of attracting things, people and supernatural luck/fortune.
