Wow, nice Thinslayer. That's a pretty cool map. That, already, is just above and beyond, I appreciate it sir. Please don't spend money on it, unless this is something that you want for yourself.
As for the critique, it's gonna be hard as this is pretty perfect. I know exactly where we are now. That's all we need. Maybe you can update the map as you name new cities or locations. Or if we name any, we just PM you to update the map. I honestly have no criticism, this is awesome.
I'm gonna go read the lore again. With this map, it should crystalise a few things. Thanks a lot.
Also, whatever you need to rework should be fine, so long as you check with Rabid and Conscripts as their characters may be affected. I'm guessing (just guessing) that the story will go to the Empire very soon, so if you're going to change them, you might want to start that first.