My main issue is the bone dragon. Size: huge? Uses is more like, what can this summon do, not who uses this summon. :P History could and should be longer, atleast 2 paragraphs and preferably more. Interesting KG though, definetely keep that in.
I suggest you change the bone dragon to either something more conventional or downsize/balance it so it seems more realistic for a genin. Naruto could summon Gamabunta, other genins could probably not even summon anything at all until later.
I suggest you change the bone dragon to either something more conventional or downsize/balance it so it seems more realistic for a genin. Naruto could summon Gamabunta, other genins could probably not even summon anything at all until later.