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Nope, I just started a trend it seems. My only requirement was that you choose abilities that can evolve and expand as the story progresses.


Good, because that was far too organised for me.
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I just laid down the groundwork and just used the stages to help establish what's currently in Maria's capabilities.
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Here is my input, subject to changes if they need to happen. I did the stage thing like others, but I'm unsure until I get the go ahead and they fit within the level wanted for this thing. Was really unsure on strength and such.

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My CS has been updated with a writing sample.
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@Lev Looking good, anticipating accepting it when it's completed.

@Horrid One thing I'm particularly iffy on is the five tonne upper limit. Other than that the powers are different enough from Roman07's that I don't see a problem with them.
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@The Roman07 The grammar and formatting of the sample is of some concern. For example, new speaker should mean a new paragraph in your sample, there's also a couple of capitalization errors throughout but otherwise the sheet is good. I'm going to say accepted on the condition you tidy the above issues up in the IC.
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Yea im mostly doing everything on a tiny smartphone so the format i see and the format you see may be completely different. The back and forth banter between brother and sister was just something i picked up on rp guild, necer actually used that style before and still a little unfamiliar with the way its used so my apologies. As for capitalization im spoiled by todays auto capping on most word programs and sadly dont have one on my cheapo phone lol sry
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Sooo.... If our cs is up in the character tab, do we post in ic?
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@Lev Looking good, anticipating accepting it when it's completed.


I figured it was completed. Is there anything else I'm missing?
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@Lord WraithLowered the 5 ton, but if it needs lowering more or changing completely, just give the word. Otherwise accepted?
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@The Roman07 Yes you may.

@Lev Indeed there's something missing from your CS, best bet would be to go through the rules again.

@Horrid Yep accepted.

@Optio Should probably mention that you're accepted as well.
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General heads up for everyone, I decided to change Alexis' abilities.
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@Lord Wraith

>@Optio Should probably mention that you're accepted as well.

Woop Woop!
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Looking forward to meeting everyone in the IC.
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General heads up for everyone, I decided to change Alexis' abilities.


Alexis must sparkle with every step.
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@Mr Allen J Only her personality haha
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Alexis must sparkle with every step.


Don't encourage him.
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@Lev Indeed there's something missing from your CS, best bet would be to go through the rules again.


Since you couldn't just TELL ME what I was missing, I found that the only thing my CS didn't have was was a "notes" section.. I added one and filled in unnecessary information.

May I proceed..
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Since you couldn't just TELL ME what I was missing, I found that the only thing my CS didn't have was was a "notes" section.. I added one and filled in unnecessary information.

May I proceed..


Unfortunately it still seems you haven't read the rules to their fullest.
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<Snipped quote by Lev>

Unfortunately it still seems you haven't read the rules to their fullest.


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