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That sheet was so edgy that I cut myself on it by accident.


Hey let's not be dicks now. I'm sure Blackmist just forgot to read the rules.
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"Dick" is my trigger word.

Mr. Skeltels don't have dicks. >:(
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"Dick" is my trigger word.

Mr. Skeltels don't have dicks. >:(


But the word "bone" is right there in it!

@cider I'd suggest that you wait for the timeskip. It should be coming within the next 48 hours, so it won't be that long a wait.
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This has probably already been expected and I'm sorry it's so unceremonious but, I'm out. Shit's not so great right now and I just can't write. You guys take care.
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This has probably already been expected and I'm sorry it's so unceremonious but, I'm out. Shit's not so great right now and I just can't write. You guys take care.


If that's how you feel, then I respect your judgement. Farewell, my friend.
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Feel free to squat in the OOC and provide viewer commentary. The audience eats that shit up.
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@cider I'd suggest that you wait for the timeskip. It should be coming within the next 48 hours, so it won't be that long a wait.


Not a problem, I'll do that.

EDIT: If I may offer @Blackmist16 a piece of advice; try reading the opening OOC posts thoroughly and a couple of the accepted sheets before writing your own, to help get a sense of what kind of what style and quality of writing the RP is looking for. As of now, aside from what others have mentioned, you have a large number of grammatical errors that really shouldn't be present in the Advanced section. Do you check your post in Word (or similar word processor)? If not, I'd recommend it. Sure helps me. Perhaps most importantly; make sure a character's personality isn't self-contradicting (or contradicting the history of said character), and rather a natural evolution of the character's experiences and surroundings (as well as throwing in some deeply rooted, highly personal traits). It's perhaps a more challenging process, but much more rewarding as well.
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Friday.

Sometime.

It may happen in an IC thread near you.

-- P.S. I hate my company so much right now
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-- P.S. I hate my company so much right now


Is it a...bad company?

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH
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No.
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How's the new sig?
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How's the new sig?


Kill urself
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<Snipped quote by Maxx>

Kill urself


Fight me you nerd.
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I would also like to fight maxx
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I would also like to fight maxx


No. All you need is love DB.
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<Snipped quote by Dragonbud>

No. All you need is love DB.

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How's the new sig?


Awful.

It doesn't get the Allen J seal of approval.
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I popped up a collab post. Might be subject to change but i think its good. The Shade baby likes to keep his PMs mysterious so i think its all cool. Probably. That mysterious loose cannon motherfucker.
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@Dragonbud Accepted.
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