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Hidden 8 yrs ago 8 yrs ago Post by Deadnaut
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Guys, I need help! I'm making my CS, but I've hit a serious problem...

I need your tree puns, I need them all!



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Alright, thus is the first iteration of my character. I spent most of the creation time trying, and failing, to think of good tree puns.

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I may be a bit late to this party but I am definitely interested. Would there be any room left?
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@Deadnaut Accepted. Go ahead and move her to the characters tab.

@Archangel89 Ok, last person. Once all of the apps are in I'll close it.
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Cool thanks for the opportunity. Now these artefacts, could you explain them a bit more in detail? Could they be anything like​ say a false limb?
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@Archangel89 The artefacts are a broadly defined group of objects, really. The key thing about them is that they were all around at the time of the sundering, and held significance in some way. They then absorbed some of the magic that became present during the sundering, and held onto it. Most of them have ceased to exist since then, through general wear and tear, or the magic wearing off.

Whilst it is possible that a prosthetic limb could have absorbed this magic and retained it til the present day, it's unlikely that it would still function as a limb. Furthermore, the Heavens' Eyes would have seized it by now. Anyone it was attached to would have been quite unceremoniously disposed of.
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I'm going to be stepping away from this RP for now. There's another thread I've had my eye on, and I have a better character concept for the other RP as well. Best of luck to you guys.
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@Bazmund Alright thanks, just wanted to check on something. I had an idea where the character would essentially cast lightning from his hand that he would use like a Tesla coil. Incoming grumpy naval commander lol!
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@Lexicon Have a good one, man.

@Archangel89 Be very, very careful to not have that be OP. He can have a sort of prosthetic arm/weapon that uses an electrical discharge not dissimilar to a taser or stun gun, but I'm not ok with him shooting lightning out of his hands.
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Oh snap, are prosthesis a thing? I had a character that essentially had a robotic ark prosthesis that was a multi-tool/Swiss army knife...

Different small/precise tools/wires built into his fingertips, a welding torch built into his pointer finger @Bazmund.. Can this be a possibility?
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This is what I have so far please tell me what you think.


EDIT:@Bazmund This is my new concept minus the backstory
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@Bazmund Oh don't worry, the concept of the lightning hands bit was because of an artefact that would have hunt him everytime he used it but I disregarded that for the concept above.
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@Archangel89 I think your image for your hard knocker isn't working
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@vietmyke Ah I see well poo... thanks for telling me lol. I guess that'll be something else to fix tomorrow
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Oh snap, are prosthesis a thing? I had a character that essentially had a robotic ark prosthesis that was a multi-tool/Swiss army knife...

Different small/precise tools/wires built into his fingertips, a welding torch built into his pointer finger @Bazmund.. Can this be a possibility?


Not quite that developed. Mechanical prosthesis would be more like a claw or grabber, with some interchangeable parts. It wouldn't really be capable of having more than two modes to switch between - say, a grabber and a blowtorch, or a power drill and a soldering iron - and these would require maintenance, fuel, and they'd hardly be lightweight. Certainly wouldn't be pretty. Your character can absolutely have a prosthetic, but it's not going to be a work of art - particularly not for someone who isn't rich as hell.

@Archangel89 Poo indeed, mate. It's a pretty decent app I can't lie, but you've made a few grammatical errors, and I can't help but feel like he's a bit... too much? I don't know, he's slightly unlikely. If he'd been a legend in the Iron Dominion navy, he'd not be taking work as what essentially amounts to a more diplomatic sort of mercenary for the World Council - particularly since they're not likely to promote someone who isn't radically pro-dominion to that rank, and even if they did he would probably become more of an aristocrat in the dominion itself once he retired. I'm gonna say you should work him over some more, since I know he's not done yet, and then I'll give my final answer.

In fact, as a general rule, we ought to try and avoid our characters having been senior military officials - particularly ones with legendary reputations - for the simple fact that it'll compromise the secrecy of the mission. Lt. Hunt is SORT OF an exception for the reason that he's the liason officer, and his line of work demands secrecy anyway.
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Can I take Lexicon's spot, and post a character sheet for review?
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@Vinsanity Go for it buddy.
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@Bazmund I was going to write him having a conflict of interest with the Dominon which is why he would not be with them but he is a rough draft and I will keep working
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Heya! Sorry, I've been shackled to a CAD project that took on a sudden urgency (I love not having to pay for parts)!

I'll have a PM to you in a little while, @Bazmund. :3
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@Bazmund I'm going to have to withdraw my interest. It still looks great, I'm just busy. Best of luck!
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@Bazmund

Can I take Tacky's spot?
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