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@ERode: Hmmm.

While I appreciate the amount of work that went into this bio quite a bit, I'm a little concerned that he overlaps a bit too much with @Raineh Daze's character. Given the cast size and the nature of the characters being played I want everyone to be pretty divergent from one another, so I kind of feel like two deities based around both conflict and multiple meanings of the word conquest is a bit much.

@Martian: Since the backstory was my only issue here, accepted.
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Where's the overlap in terms of actual abilities and personality? If the only issue is the nouns I used, I don't mind switching to something else. Could probably just slap down something like God of Plunder and Ruin instead.
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@ERode: Well, the primary points of overlap are the specific notes about conquest-as-sex and the war focus. Additionally, they have similar methods of avoiding injury, as well as a focus on sex as part of an ability set. I'm not saying only one deity can be into sex, but lewd as an actual part of the domain is something that probably shouldn't be repeated twice in a cast of this size.

I also think he's a bit overtuned for the beginning of the RP, at least as far as my judgement went no-one went quite that far in their own bios in terms of offensive capabilities as well as metaphysical ones. While the players are definitely going to be powerful by dint of their nature as deities, I think his ability to interact with concepts and ignore damage entirely is a little too much.

With the acceptance of @Martian's edited bio, the RP is full, but I still thought it would be really inappropriate not to explain my concerns, especially given the effort put into the bio in the first place.
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Sure. Have a good one then.
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@ERode: Thank you, and sorry that things didn't work out.
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@Rune_Alchemist@Click This@1Charak2@Raineh Daze@Renny@Martian: Forgot to mention, but now that we have a full cast I'll be starting the RP either tonight or tomorrow!
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Righto I'll get a thing going soon
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My post is up @VitaVitaAR. Hopefully I hadn't interfered with anyone else idea.
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I'm sure your god can enjoy kicking someone his own status. At least she can take it. (ProbablY)
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Don't mind me just acquiring smol lost girl and giving her a floofy heaven
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Hmm, I don't suppose the gods might have known each other? Unless those associations and memories are also lost to time, that is.
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@Click This: They should all be at least somewhat aware of one another at minimum, having all reigned at the same time.
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And if it wasn't apparent, Ashte is a very, very, involved love goddess. Enough that the answer to "Can I have slept with her in the past" is preemptively yes, with as much potential awkwardness as that implies. :P
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Since nearly everyone already posted, as soon as @Martian posts I'll update.
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Gonna get a post in when I get off work. So somewhere between 5 and 8 tonight.
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That would be more useful if I had a clue what your timezone was. xD
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@Raineh Daze Yeah sorry for not clarifying that. Work ran late, so I'm exhausted mentally. If you guys want to go ahead and skip me you can. I'll try and get something out tomorrow.
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@VitaVitaAR

Is the simple white dress in the picture all that the priestess is wearing, or are there any other potentially identifying features on her attire?

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@Click This: She's just wearing the dress, though if one were to look at her upper back just beneath the dress they would find a stylized lily mark.
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I got a post out before work. Its a little rushed so If I made any mistakes let me know and I'll correct it when I get off.
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