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Interested in this as well. The character I had in mind was a pro athlete who was secretly using the force to have an unfair advantage, until someone recognizes that he is using the force and is banned from the sport. Things get worse when criminals who lost money because of his cheating start going after him. It would only by joining the Jedi that he would find a more peaceful existence. Give me a day or two and I'll create a sheet for him.
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After reading it there are some problems like you are going to have to explain how Darth Hadris managed to stay low and not be detected by the empire and by Darth Sidious. Along with how he came to be a Sith and a Darth at that, and start a Sith Academy without anyone knowing about it. I think a rouge Inquisitor would fit more.



Being a New Republic deserter in the New Jedi Order will cause problems, mainly the relationship between the Order and the New Republic. You can say she left the New Republic after the Valdont. That and there being a legion of sith apprentices is very unlikely, so how about removing that bit?

Interested in this as well. The character I had in mind was a pro athlete who was secretly using the force to have an unfair advantage, until someone recognizes that he is using the force and is banned from the sport. Things get worse when criminals who lost money because of his cheating start going after him. It would only by joining the Jedi that he would find a more peaceful existence. Give me a day or two and I'll create a sheet for him.


I am not sure that he would be that skilled with the force on his own and with no training to do stuff like that. Perhaps he was a cheater or would seem lucky because he was using the force without knowing it and after making some risky bets. His luck ran out and he owned bad people credits. So he fled and either managed to run into a jedi or was captured and was later saved by a jedi would be dealing with the criminal that imprisoned him?

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After reading it there are some problems like you are going to have to explain how Darth Hadris managed to stay low and not be detected by the empire and by Darth Sidious. Along with how he came to be a Sith and a Darth at that, and start a Sith Academy without anyone knowing about it. I think a rouge Inquisitor would fit more.

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Being a New Republic deserter in the New Jedi Order will cause problems, mainly the relationship between the Order and the New Republic. You can say she left the New Republic after the Valdont. That and there being a legion of sith apprentices is very unlikely, so how about removing that bit?

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I am not sure that he would be that skilled with the force on his own and with no training to do stuff like that. Perhaps he was a cheater or would seem lucky because he was using the force without knowing it and after making some risky bets. His luck ran out and he owned bad people credits. So he fled and either managed to run into a jedi or was captured and was later saved by a jedi would be dealing with the criminal that imprisoned him?


I can change that, no problem. A rogue inquisitor who thought he was hot shit and bit off more than he could chew with the students. Him being a Sith Lord in particular isn’t important to the story, just that Hadris was a certified Bad Person mainly.
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Being a New Republic deserter in the New Jedi Order will cause problems, mainly the relationship between the Order and the New Republic. You can say she left the New Republic after the Valdont. That and there being a legion of sith apprentices is very unlikely, so how about removing that bit?


Lol yeah I definitely got hyperbolic there with the legion, how about like... A Sith lord and their apprentice? Basically just need an excuse for her to hate the Sith, something for her to overcome in training. Totally down with deleting any metion of Sith tho. Also, removed the deserting aspect!

As an aside, you mentioned they should have the core Force abilities, but which ones are included in this? Not entirely sure, thanks!
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I can change that, no problem. A rogue inquisitor who thought he was hot shit and bit off more than he could chew with the students. Him being a Sith Lord in particular isn’t important to the story, just that Hadris was a certified Bad Person mainly.


Okay, good to hear.

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Lol yeah I definitely got hyperbolic there with the legion, how about like... A Sith lord and their apprentice? Basically just need an excuse for her to hate the Sith, something for her to overcome in training. Totally down with deleting any metion of Sith tho. Also, removed the deserting aspect!

As an aside, you mentioned they should have the core Force abilities, but which ones are included in this? Not entirely sure, thanks!


I got an idea for what she would hate the Sith. The thing the stormtroopers were guarding was some kind of Sithspawn that was being housed at the site for experimentation and was released as a last resort and your char would find out what it was in the aftermath and how it relates to the Sith. How does that sound?

Yeah the wiki used to have a list of force powers and now it is gone for some reason and you have to dig to find stuff. The core your should have is telekinesis, force speed, force sense, force jump, I think force healing. I might be missing one but, these your char should have.
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Hadris is now an Inquisitor who felt like doing his own thing in secret on Korriban. If there's anything else needing to be changed lmk
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I got an idea for what she would hate the Sith. The thing the stormtroopers were guarding was some kind of Sithspawn that was being housed at the site for experimentation and was released as a last resort and your char would find out what it was in the aftermath and how it relates to the Sith. How does that sound?

Yeah the wiki used to have a list of force powers and now it is gone for some reason and you have to dig to find stuff. The core your should have is telekinesis, force speed, force sense, force jump, I think force healing. I might be missing one but, these your char should have.


Ooh I like that a lot, good idea! And yeah, I remember the wiki being laid out differently when it came to the force powers, very weird change. Also, I just finished my character sheet, let me know if there are any other issues, thanks!

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Okay, the edits look good, and I am just going to wait a bit more to see if the rp can get more people and I will probably launch it soon.
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Sounds good.

Are you gonna make a discord?
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Sounds good.

Are you gonna make a discord?


Yeah, when I launch the rp I will make a discord.
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Sorry about the delay in the character sheet. I kept flip flopping over some creative decisions. Let me know if anything needs changing.

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Sorry about the delay in the character sheet. I kept flip flopping over some creative decisions. Let me know if anything needs changing.



Just some things, when Zelt's was outed as a force user and it being posted all over the Holonet. Luke or a jedi would come for him sooner since he is a well known force user now, apparently. Sensing through the force to determine he is a force user would not be necessary at that point.

His drug addiction I am not sure how he is going to maintain that since there would not be drugs in the academy, and there is not going to be a dealer there, so just wondering how he gets his supply and how he can hide it.

So just answers these, and we will go from there.

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So I am going to launch the rp tomorrow, and those with completed cs, just post them as you normally would in the thread.
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Absolutely gonna throw my interest in here. Big Star Wars fan and I'm super curious to explore all this and tell everyone's stories.
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Absolutely gonna throw my interest in here. Big Star Wars fan and I'm super curious to explore all this and tell everyone's stories.


I am sorry, but the rp is full at the moment. But, I can save you a spot if anyone drops.
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I am sorry, but the rp is full at the moment. But, I can save you a spot if anyone drops.


I appreciate it thanks for the update
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