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Down in Middle Earth, a rare Elven race have lived peacefully within Fangorn Forest under the rule of Lady Hermia and King Lavendar. With their benevolent alliance with the Dwarves of Erebor, these beings have shared their smithcraft, guardianship, and unbreakable wisdom with the line of Durin's Folk for centuries.

In tradition of Dwarven royalty, each Elf is chosen as a blessed godparent to any dwarf that has come to birth under the royal line, and their duty was to keep the child alive to the break of death. After King Thrain's only daughter, Dis, gave birth to two Dwarven boys, the choosing of an Elven godparent was decided: the Fangorn leaders' only daughter, Saeril. As soon as she was chosen, she feels that there was no point to approach. She just didn't feel ready...

As the Dwarven siblings grew close in the Blue Mountains, Saeril, now knowing their names as Kili and Fili, has watched their every move in the shadows, while never having the instinct to approach them in personal. The two brothers, mostly the youngest, Kili, felt her shadowy presence watching over them, and Kili tried to communicate with her, but Saeril did not personally make herself known. Instead, she sent them gifts from nature and letters to stay in communication. Believing that she was just a spirit, they called her "Delva", meaning "endearment" in Khuzdul.

Years passed even more, and Saeril was nowhere in sight, but after Smaug the Terrible forced the Dwarves of Erebor to go into exile, the Elves of Fangorn lost their will to live longer. All, except for one. After Saeril was unknowingly captured by Sauron the Deceiver, the dark spirit deformed the pure elf into having huge wings on her back, curled horns on her head, along with sharp nails and molars, while also corrupting her mind to strike chaos and fear across Middle-Earth, resulting the people to call the winged-being "Maleficent", aka "malevolence".

With her mind in corruption, Saeril sent Orc general, Azog, to cause destruction upon the Dwarven kingdom of Moria, unknowingly sending a bounty upon the line of Durin. During the battle, she mercilessly killed Thrain, and left the remaining dwarves defenseless under the hands of Azog. However, the Orc army retreated, giving Thorin and his kin their victory. Before she could make her full escape, Saeril was confronted by Gandalf the Grey; he dissipated her insanity, and took her into his care for sanctuary.

Fierce and dangerous she was claimed to be, Saeril became a threat to all races, despite the fact that it was all unintentional. All except for the youngest of Durin's Folk: Fili and Kili. They never forgot about "Delva", and they were determined to see her in person. Afraid to approach them, due to her deformity, Saeril kept herself hidden, until Gandalf advised her to approach them if she means to redeem herself for her past mistakes: by guiding their exiled kin back to the mountain of Erebor.

Will she fade her curse?
Or return to her dark and dangerous ways?


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Hi! So I have a few questions regarding Kili -- how well would he know her?
Would he recognize her from appearance or name? Or does he just have like a feeling that she is their protector?
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Well, he hasn't physically seen her before, but he was determined to. However, he and Fili know her as their personal guardian "Delva", since he and Fili called her that during their years of communicating with her through letters and gifts of nature. That is where their "love" for her, grew. From there, they admired her ever since.

In the post, she's wondering if he saw, or heard of her as "Maleficent". Or if he knows that she is "Delva". Either is fine.

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Perfect, thank you! Perhaps he's heard a bit here and there. I'll write up a response.
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Alright-y! I'll be waiting :)
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For Thorin, should he know of what had happened in regards to her being guilty of killing Thrain? Or should he find that out later? I'm trying to decide what his reaction would be.
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@Polarize

He will find out later, probably sometime around the Battle of the Five Armies, during the trade at Erebor's gate. It slips out of Thorin during his mad rage, and that will also be the time where Kili and Fili learn about it for the first time.

This won't shock them, but it will be a lot to take in. However, both of them, especially Kili will begin to pull himself away from her after she stole the White Gems for Thranduil. He might be yelling things like "you will never be our godmother!", "you deceived us!", "leave this mountain! Don't come back!", etc. The guilt will be so powerful, Saeril flees. Except, after she flees, she feels the pain due to the loss of Fili, eventually saving Kili from falling into the same fate.

Oh, the feels! :)
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I love it! Thank you, just needed to clarify. Aghhh that is so sad!! T^T
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We made it to page 6! :D
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We made it movie two! :D

Any ideas for this? To be honest, I am not a fan of Tauriel and I do not ship her at all with Kili. .__. I always felt that this aspect ruined many key moments that could have and (should have) happened. :/
It really took away from the brotherhood and it was just...ugh. Idk. I also feel like it'd rob Saeril of her godson quite a bit!

So, do we write her out or keep her? You're the GM so I won't protest too much (lol) I just figured I'd mention it to see your opinion.
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To be honest, I'm not a fan of Tauriel either, and I don't exactly ship her with Kili. So, we are kinda on the same page here. I liked her on-screen chemistry with Legolas, though :)

As far as the story goes, we won't be putting them together in this. Plus, the focus is on Saeril, and the sons of Durin; the key relationship between Kili and his godmother. Of course, between parent and child :)

So, the concluding point? We keep Tauriel in the story, but not being shipped with anyone that is not Legolas.

I'll explain the rest of my ideas as we get further into the trilogy :)

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That's so weird that you say that, because I do like Tauriel with Legolas. Their relationship would make way more sense. Honestly, if PJ had gone with that route, I think I would have accepted her in the films. Just stay away from Kili.

Sounds great!
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Thank you! :D

Hope you like the new story picture :)
A little disappointed that it turned out blurry :(
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kiiblade how sad...

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Just got onto my computer so I could see (my phone doesn't load images very well). I love it! On my monitor, it's not so blurry; kind of adds to the effect, if you ask me. ^~^ What program do you use?
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Merry Christmas!!

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XD LoL!!! Thanks for the Christmas present! The new picture that I recently uploaded yesterday is your Christmas gift :)
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Actually, the new tribute videos on the OOC page is your gift! Enjoy them!
(Note: I didn't make them. I just found them awesome!)
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Thank you so much!! Those were awesome! :D I love Imagine Dragons!

My sister has made videos like those! You may like these ones she's made, I know I do. :D

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I will subscribe immediately! Those were amazing! She deserves the praise! :)
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aw thank you so much!! :D I will ask her to make more! :)
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