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Eh, probably shouldn't have posted again so soon but I was bored and I had the opportunity to do so, so there it is.
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Were you referring to Elliot in your post or eddie? Also sorry for lack of posting. Will begin writing something as soon as I get this answered.

Both. Abigail told Elliot to go and guard the ship.
Also, it's no problem. I kind of thought you were busy so that's why I had her send him to take care of the ship :)
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This is a bit more free-form than most RPs I've seen, for the most part I'm okay with you creating details, adding to the environment as long as its not excessive and what not, and beating up mooks. If I introduce a named enemy you'll write your actions against him/her as attempts rather than successes (Tried to punch in the face VS punched in the face). If you have a question on something cause you're unsure what side of the line it falls onto feel free to PM or in thread.

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Eh let me just review my description. Giant stone block suspended by chains above a crater-like thing filled with water and ocean monsters with a seemingly flimsy wooden bridge leading to it. Around the crater at the same vertical level the center prison is are several other small buildings that seem mostly inconsequential. Does that clear it up?
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This is a bit more free-form than most RPs I've seen, for the most part I'm okay with you creating details, adding to the environment as long as its not excessive and what not, and beating up mooks. If I introduce a named enemy you'll write your actions against him/her as attempts rather than successes (Tried to punch in the face VS punched in the face). If you have a question on something cause you're unsure what side of the line it falls onto feel free to PM or in thread.

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Eh let me just review my description. Giant stone block suspended by chains above a crater-like thing filled with water and ocean monsters with a seemingly flimsy wooden bridge leading to it. Around the crater at the same vertical level the center prison is are several other small buildings that seem mostly inconsequential. Does that clear it up?


Kind of, but it still did seem a bit confusing. The way I saw it was if there was a front for Hunter to go to then there would have to be a back, and for every 'back' as far as military complexes went, there was a wall. So I figured if the rear area the others went to wasn't specifically described it was automatically walled in. My apologies ^_^

Uhhh. I'm not sure how to fix it though seeing as there's already been a few posts since then @_@
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"I have... an ability. Apparently me brain processes information quicker than everyone around me. At least, that's what the marines told me parents. I can tell a person's history from a glance, and they wanted to use that as a weapon.


I would prefer you don't add things like this that aren't in your character sheet, at the very least without asking.

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Kind of, but it still did seem a bit confusing. The way I saw it was if there was a front for Hunter to go to then there would have to be a back, and for every 'back' as far as military complexes went, there was a wall. So I figured if the rear area the others went to wasn't specifically described it was automatically walled in. My apologies ^_^

Uhhh. I'm not sure how to fix it though seeing as there's already been a few posts since then @_@


As for this, technically there would be a backside to the prison I suppose, that is to say the side opposite the bridge. If one were to cross the chain that is there they would arrive at the back of the prison and be met with a wall and want to get on top of it. I'll go with that.
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@Eklispe sorry, edited it to fit with the CS.
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Posted. Kinda crappy and slightly rushed sorry. Also I just kept going with the wall theme since it was already established, no point changing it now.
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What Dead Eye, Capra, and Abigail look like right now.

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@NachoBachoPacho Who is who? :P
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@LostDestiny Good question. I'll leave that up to interpretation.

But Capra's probably the puppet.
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Was getting ready to respond, but I noticed something. Correct me if I'm wrong, but wasn't Juliette on the Crimson's Fist's ship during the time Elliot was looking around it?
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@jynmi88 I'm not entirely sure? Juliette and Silver would have been on deck if he ran back after I posted? But idk if he maybe missed my intro?
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@PM@jynmi88 Indeed I missed the introduction, maybe we can handwave it as if he checked for people sloppily since he wanted to get back as soon as possible and didn't notice them?
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I'm down for that idea if everyone else is cool. Mistakes happen, lol. It'll be funny if someone points out later than he missed a giant eagle on the mast. (;
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Sounds good to me.
I'll get a post up after work tomorrow :)
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Update up today.
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So caught up on reading and...

kicked the goat man to the floor with what seemed to be pure adrenaline


None of this please. That's pretty blatant god-modding. When writing actions involving other people's characters you need to write your actions as attempts, not certainties.

EX: Seemingly fueled by pure adrenaline Hunter tried to kick the goat man to the floor before turning and walking away.
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@Eklispe Sorry. Edited it.
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@NachoBachoPacho You can go ahead and post. I am not sure what the others will do to interact with the situation. I am bored and impatient. :P
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@LostDestiny Alright, sounds good. I was waiting just in case someone else wanted to react to Capra jumping good, but i'm getting bored too, so i'll start typing.
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