[OOC] Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of the Void

[Lugia]

This RP sure moved to the fourth page quickly.

[KaBling]

busy doing nothing productive

will post tomorrow lads

[Chapatrap]

Here's my brat:

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action tiem

Name: Corrigan

Species: Mankey.

Gender: Male

Moves:
- Low Kick
- Covet
- Karate Chop
- Fury Swipes

Bio:

Whelped into a litter of three by a Primeape mother and a Chatot father (don't ask), Corrigan, from a young age, was destined for a career in fame. He developed his fathers famous charisma and his mothers famous fighting skill as he grew up and seemed destined for greatness. That is, until the accident. As he was approaching the age to leave his parents and make his own way in the world, a season of heavy storms hit the tiny village that he lived in. One evening, the storms grew so powerful that roofs were ripped from homes, entire families were blown away and the village collapsed in on itself. Corrigan's entire home collapsed in on itself, injuring him. Sheltered under the rubble, he did not see the storm blow his family away and awoke several days later alone and with a broken leg.

Corrigan's life was ripped out from underneath him by a fight between Thundurus and Tornadus. The two had fought for days above the village, uncaring to the consequences. Thundurus, too tired to continue, descended on the abandoned village and took refuge within an abandoned home. Corrigan pulled himself from the rubble and watched the legendary Force of Nature lick it's wounds while it's brother, Tornadus, gloated and bragged above him. In his concussed mind, Corrigan realised it was the fault of these legendarys that his family was blown away and his village was destroyed. He swore vengeance on the Forces of Nature but they only ignored him with a flick of their hands, sending him flying.

That was five years ago and he is yet to exact his revenge. Five years on, he has found himself in Allure Town and has been based there for several months. Corrigan works as an independent explorer and has become somewhat known around the local region for his friendly personality and worldly knowledge about legendary Pokemon (he's been doing his research). All the while, he is keeping his ear to the ground on word about his family (mother, father and two sisters) and the Forces of Nature duo - leads have pulled him across the Pokemon world but to no avail. Perhaps, however, these rumours of stirring legendarys might lead somewhere...

Appearance:
Corrigan, for all intents and purposes, is a regular Mankey. He has a rather rough-and-tumble, messy look due to spending many the night under the stars or fighting. He wraps a red bandanna tightly around his head and usually carries a small satchel for his possessions. He is usually found with a smile on his face, which has led to him becoming one of the more approachable explorers from the town. He possesses no power differences to other Mankey (he's not a dual-type).

[Lugia]

I'm sorry to say this, but... NOT POSSIBLE. Mankey/Primeape are in the field egg group, while Chatot is in the flying egg group. There's no way a chatot and a primeape can be directly related.

[Chapatrap]

So you claim a Chatot and a Primeape can't have an egg but a Wailord and a Skitty can?

Is it the egg move? Is that what the problem here is or is it the actual bio?

[Lugia]

The problem here is that the two parents aren't in the same egg group. If you had a Smeargle father, then I'll check egg moves.

[Chapatrap]

Aight, how about this:

major plot point i didn't want to reveal yet

Corrigans father is a Ditto who often disguises himself as a Chatot but Corrigan himself doesn't know that his Dad is a Ditto. I'll get rid of Hyper Voice too.

[Lugia]

response to the spoiler

Fine, fine, but you will have to remove Hyper Voice, due to the fact that, technically, the only move your character's father knows is Transform, and Mankey can't get that as an egg move. Sorry, I kinda have to use some game logic here, but yeah, that's how it works in the games. Alternatively, you could use 'Differences' if you still want him to have the move 'Hyper Voice'.

[Lugia]

Uh... hello? Someone? Who are we waiting on, anyways? Oh, and, by the way, Kabling said he wanted to skip his turn, this time.

[Anlu]

...xD I'm confused.
So it's not permissable unless it's acknowledged as different and listed there?

[Lugia]

Pretty much, yes.

[Anlu]

So more accurately, there isn't a rule against it at all, it's just a formatting snaffoo.

[Lugia]

Pretty much.

[Anlu]

I have this random urge to build a minecraft version of the guilds and surrounding villages.

[Lugia]

Odd, considering me, and most of this group migrated here from the Minecraft Forums, lol.

[Flood]

May I join?

Name: Cobalt

Species: Beldum

Gender: -

Moves: Take Down, Metal Claw, Bullet Punch, Confusion

Bio: When Cobalt first emerged from his egg, he quickly learned a harsh truth of the world. Death doesn't care how much money you have, if you have a family, or how strong you are. Death comes for all. He looked at the corpses of his parents and he wept. He found a note from his parents stating a great many things. However he couldn't read so he simply left it alone. He lived in his cave alone and learned to care for himself very quickly.

After that Cobalt lived a fairly average life. He got up, ate his normal breakfast of berries, went and hunted for more, and then went back to sleep. That changed when he stumbled across the gold. He had no idea what to do with it as he had lived by himself in isolation and all he knew was that these rocks were very shiny. There was also a lot of the rocks as well. So he decided to begin taking them home.

It took him two weeks to bring all of the gold to his cave and when he was done he was significantly stronger. He became enamored by their shinyness and he began searching for more. He was obsessed with these shiny rocks and he needed more. He began to sleep less, he forgot to eat sometimes, the ever growing need to get these shiny rocks became consuming.

One day he was on his hunt for gold when he stumbled into the Crystal Chasm Mystery Dungeon. He became lost for a entire week. Even then though he continued to hunt for gold. He found none so he instead grabbed the next shiny thing he could find which was crystals. He found berries and Gummies to live off of until he could find his way out. He was slowly going feral as he continued to hoard crystals. He slowly began to give up on ever escaping as he found more and more crystals. He was attacked by a group of Sableeye as he grew tired and hungry near the end of the week. They had been angered by his theft of crystals and wanted them back. He was saved at the last minute by another rescue team which had been searching for a client. They defeated the Sableye and took him to the guild with them. He learned to communicate with them after a few months but when asked where he lived he never answered. He had forgotten where he stashed all of his gold.

Appearance: Cobalt has a blue eye instead of red eyes.

Differences: He has three moves that he shouldn't have learned yet due to his intense physical training. He is also more intelligent then he should he due to his diet of Gummies while he was stuck in the Crystal Chasm.

[Lugia]

Hm... there are two issues with your application...
1.) Beldum are a genderless species, listing either male or female in this field is pointless. Please mark the 'gender' field with a '-' sign. I'm fine with you referring to your character as a 'he', but 'he' isn't technically male.

2.) Most mystery dungeons in this RP don't have floors. Crystal chasm is, ironically, a single-floor dungeon. The reason for this is simply due to the fact that it's a beginner dungeon, and said cave has three exits all of which are at ground level. (One that exits out near Scale City via hidden passageway, one that exits out into the distant desert, and one that's usually used as an entrance)
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I'd also prefer if you added some more to your bio, but unless Kabling yells at you, it's not necessary.

[Flood]

I fixed it up some. I feel stupid putting a Beldum as male, I should've know they don't have gender. (Mega Metagross is my physical sweeper in my main team.)

[Lugia]

Hm... I think Take Down is too OP, sorry, and I know Beldum doesn't get it by level up...
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Hider

JUST KIDDING, as long as Kabling can't find anything wrong with it, you're in.

[KaBling]

I'd go with a longer bio.

And post in the characters tab.