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And it is done, anything else you can think of?
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Not off the top of my head. Once I've finished dinner (waiting for the pasta to boil right now) I'll give it a look. And if there's anything more you'll hear from me. Same to you, Monochromatic :)
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Monochromatic, I can't find anything that's wrong per se. There's just a bit of the background you missed.
At seventeen, she was doing much the same thing, right up until she woke up one morning in the workshop, with the aluminum she’d been working on when she fell asleep a molten puddle on the floor.


This is still there. That's about it... I'd say it's approved :) So is yours, Eldritch.
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kapuchu said
Not off the top of my head. Once I've finished dinner (waiting for the pasta to boil right now) I'll give it a look. And if there's anything more you'll hear from me. Same to you, Monochromatic :)


Not to harass you further, but I noticed that one of the other characters appeared to have been allowed a gun (with limited ammunition, I see.)?
I'm guessing this is just an exception to the rule, and one can't have had a knife of some sort on their person when they... eh, shifted worlds?

EDIT: Fixed the background, she now burned an innocent worktable instead.
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Okay, edited and updated my character a little. Hopefully it will meet peoples standards this time.
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Monochromatic Rainbow said
Not to harass you further, but I noticed that one of the other characters appeared to have been allowed a gun (with limited ammunition, I see.)?I'm guessing this is just an exception to the rule, and one can't have had a knife of some sort on their person when they... eh, shifted worlds?EDIT: Fixed the background, she now burned an innocent worktable instead.


It is stated that you can have a few "odds and ends", so having a knife or something like that is fine. I'd just like to avoid further guns as, like you say, this was an exception based on the fact that he is the sort of coward character that would use one to hide behind.

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Okay, edited and updated my character a little. Hopefully it will meet peoples standards this time.



It was no surprise to anyone when Thule dedicated himself to be a survival nature guide, learning how to survive in a wide range of environments (Often times by visiting them himself) and showing others how to avoid becoming just another one of those people who vanished into the wilderness and was never heard from again. Even before the incident that claimed his family he loved going out into the wild and afterwards he would often flee to places were he could be close to nature whenever he was frightened or just felt the need to get away from everyone else.

I would like it if you could flesh this out more, but it's just a minor thing. He's approved as it is, but I'd be happy if you could expand that to also tell a bit about some of his exploits, perhaps. I'd especially like it if you wrote how he learned about it. Did he find a teacher, what was his name, how did he find him. How was he taught? Something like that so it doesn't feel like it's just thrown on the CS :)
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Monochromatic Rainbow said
Not to harass you further, but I noticed that one of the other characters appeared to have been allowed a gun (with limited ammunition, I see.)?I'm guessing this is just an exception to the rule, and one can't have had a knife of some sort on their person when they... eh, shifted worlds?EDIT: Fixed the background, she now burned an innocent worktable instead.


You should really go read his character profile. The one with the gun.
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You should really go read his character profile. The one with the gun.


Hmm, thought I did. Must've accidentally skimmed over something.

EDIT: And all done with stuff. Should I go ahead and try to post something now/soon-ish?
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You just go ahead ^^ Same goes for everyone. Aeon and the rest of the guys are welcome to post as well. I do think we can skip the "line of progression" or whatever this one time xP
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Hey Kap, would you be too fussed if my dude woke up on a warm boulder just next to Lily and Liza and asked some questions?
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Where and how you wake up is completely up to you. You could wake up in a tree and subsequently fall flat on your face on the ground if you wanted to. So him asking questions is perfectly alright, but you may want to wait for Liza/Frenetic to post, then.
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Welcome to the team guys/gals :D
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Aeonumbra said
Welcome to the team guys/gals :D


If we're on a team, do we get call-signs?
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Expect a finished post from me tomorrow.
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Monochromatic Rainbow said
If we're on a team, do we get call-signs?


No, be we do have cookies.
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Actually... no. You don't. You don't even know if there's flour or sugar in this world :P
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Thule's in a good mood at least. He at least knows for certain that there is something he can eat nearby. :P
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That Golden Object... Fiance. Same area.

...Dude. Thule is nuts/mental/insane/not-right-in-the-head.

That was an engagement ring xD
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kapuchu said
Actually... no. You don't. You don't even know if there's flour or sugar in this world :P


The cookies are stored in your browser. Bahaha join the nerd side we have Pie.

Read both the posts. Kapu maybe I should be a leader :) having nightmares is way more fun than your hippie-trance XD
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Yet your guy is the one doing the hoppie-trance ;)
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