@NobleArchangel: I'm really sorry about making you wait, I'll at least give you the story on Lethienvel/The Veil of Tears shortly so you know what to do. Sorry again.
@Darcs: Okay, um, my only remaining issue is that some of these seem a little "video-gamey"? Mostly Concussion, Jinx, Voodoo, Wrath, though Hex a little too. If you can figure out a way to make these sound more like they fit into a world rather then a video game then they're fine.
@Darcs: Okay, um, my only remaining issue is that some of these seem a little "video-gamey"? Mostly Concussion, Jinx, Voodoo, Wrath, though Hex a little too. If you can figure out a way to make these sound more like they fit into a world rather then a video game then they're fine.