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Anastasia Vivian LeBrouche



Age

Ten and Eight years of age
Plus seven months, three days, nine hours, seven minutes and approximately thirty-two seconds

Size

Five foot, three inches
, one centimeter and three militeters.
One hundred and twenty Pounds
Actually, it’s one hundred and nineteen point seven-eight, pounds.

Physical Shape

Before the beginning of the end, Anastasia was small and thin, with little real muscle to speak of and for the most part she has retained the same mass with little fluxuation. She has little body fat after the span of time and has gained just enough muscle in her arms and legs for the constant activity that she finds herself in every day. She has a flat stomach and slight curves that are still in the process of developing; long limbs and a medium length torso, long fingers. She has a slight limp as well, from breaking her leg and it not healing quite right.
I can run and jump just like everyone else, just don’t ask me to do it a whole bunch or I’ll end up dead like them. Then where would you be without the living Encyclopedia?

Personality

It’s clear to say that Anastasia is a bit of a smart-alec and a huge know-it-all. She’s spent every waking moment of her life gathering an extensive collection of knowledge inside of her head and she’s very proud of it, even if she doesn’t know exactly what to do with that knowledge half of the time. She’s a thinker, and will often rather spend her time puzzling over a problem than jumping into the action like many others do; instead she finds the best way to go about it first – before getting someone else to do it. Anna likes to play yhr back row and remain unnoticed by others until it’s a time when she can shine and put forth what she knows and put it to good use – she has demonstrated this before. Regardless of her love of learning she is never satisfied with what she knows and constantly goes on the search for something new to set her sights on, sometimes leading herself into dangerous areas and rumours, she is also shy and tends to refrain from greatly impacting her own emotions with the bonds of humanity. Unfortunately, she gets attached to those she likes and never wants to let them go either. She is capable of great compassion and loyalty, if one does earn her trust, and often spends her time in groups tending to the injured or avoiding confrontation all together.

Occupation

Librarian’s Assistant and Medical Student

Equipment


Inventory: Everyone starts off with a backpack, that doesn't mean you have unlimited carrying capacity though. And the heavier the objects the slower you are. I advice you to really think about what you have with you. Not just food, water, clothes. Maybe you have family pictures? A book or two? Toothpaste and a toothbrush to keep some personal hygiene. Deoderant, your cellphone. A wallet with its contents. Maybe even that precious coin collection you could not bear to leave behind.
Weapons: If you have a gun, keep in mind that unless you have detailed background of firearm use you will most likely not be a very good shot. A running target is quite difficult to hit, especially if you have to hit it in the head to kill it. I also encourage melee weapons to get worn down and possibly even break over time.
Background: Tell something about your character and his or her history and life up to this point. It doesn't have to be too elaborate, but you're free to go nuts.
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@ViolentViolet Looking good so far, the ''Ten and eight years'' confused me a little bit but I assume it's eighteen years old. :P
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Lol of course. It's just the old way of saying numbered ages lol. Old like Middle Ages :)Yes, she's eighteen.
I'll get to work on her again today and see if I can finish her up a bit.
Oh and I have a question that you might need to PM the answer of to me. I was planning on her being an information broker, since she has few survival skills on her own, and was wondering if there's anything that only she would now right off the bat?
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Lol of course. It's just the old way of saying numbered ages lol. Old like Middle Ages :)Yes, she's eighteen.
I'll get to work on her again today and see if I can finish her up a bit.
Oh and I have a question that you might need to PM the answer of to me. I was planning on her being an information broker, since she has few survival skills on her own, and was wondering if there's anything that only she would now right off the bat?


I don't think she would have any specific information on the infected that others do not know, but she can use her high intelligence to fool others, much like Eugene did. But I suppose, seeing as she was a medical student she would have more extensive knowledge on that area by nature.

At the moment I can't envision something specific she might know, but if you have an idea then you're free to send me a private message of your own. :)
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Sorry could I have the CS skeleton without the hider? The laptop I'm on wont open it and can't see raw. Thanks!
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@Pripovednik Here you go. :)

Appearance: No anime pictures, a picture of a real person is preferred. A description is also acceptable.
Size: Your height and weight go here.
Physical Shape: How your body currently looks, whether you're skinny, average or musculair. Each comes with their own advantages and disadvantages. If you're overly musculair or fit for example, you need more calories and you require regular workouts to stay in shape.
Name:
Age:
Personality: Don't be a hero, is what they say. Is your character really that tough that he will enter a dark building without lights on? Will your character be brave enough to face multiple infected at once? Your personality is for you to decide, try to really get into character. Maybe you'd rather skip a certain building because there are to many infected inside. Maybe you choose to help yourself rather then your friends in a though situation. That is up to you to decide.
Occupation: Your job or study before the outbreak.
Equipment: Can be as simple as the current clothes you're wearing but can get more elaborate as the roleplay goes on, think a kevlar vest, helmets or things like that.
Inventory: Everyone starts off with a backpack, that doesn't mean you have unlimited carrying capacity though. And the heavier the objects the slower you are. I advice you to really think about what you have with you. Not just food, water, clothes. Maybe you have family pictures? A book or two? Toothpaste and a toothbrush to keep some personal hygiene. Deoderant, your cellphone. A wallet with its contents. Maybe even that precious coin collection you could not bear to leave behind.
Weapons: If you have a gun, keep in mind that unless you have detailed background of firearm use you will most likely not be a very good shot. A running target is quite difficult to hit, especially if you have to hit it in the head to kill it. I also encourage melee weapons to get worn down and possibly even break over time.
Background: Tell something about your character and his or her history and life up to this point. It doesn't have to be too elaborate, but you're free to go nuts.
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@Sven the SilentCheers dude.
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@Sven the Silent
Alright. I shall send you a PM in a moment. I did indeed have some ideas of things that the others may not know right away.
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@ViolentViolet You have your reply, sorry for the late response.

I am currently working on my own character and will thus be some what distracted.
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That's alright. I'm trying to do three things at the same time lol
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Appearance:
Size: 5'10", 140
Physical Shape: Athletic. Brian isn't fat, but he isn't skinny either. While he is muscular he isn't bulky, nor is he in anyway top heavy(infact he has more lower body strength). After years of running from trouble, navigating through alleys and across roofs, he has developed the perfect flexible body for parkour style movement and the occasional gymnastic feat of luck.
Name:Brian Whisdell
Age:27
Personality: Prefering to keep things low key Brian hates any kind of bully. He doesnt get overly emotional about much, except seeing others get hurt in which case he will usually drop all sense of logic to try and help. Always approaching zombies with patience and precision Brian has a tendency to take his time, making sure to be as quiet as possible.For example: if there was a building to clear Brian would go in from the roof first, climbing the fire escape to the top and slowly making his way down room by room. This way only he was in danger. He likes to think of himself as a good samaritan - a gentleman.
Occupation: Criminal, Brian was a small time thief who stole from rich families homes and gave the money/valuables to the kids of the orphanage he grew up in. He was in prison when it began, a guard he had come to be friends with set him free.
Equipment:
Sweats and trainers.[hider]

Semi-elastic long sleeve shirt.[hider]

Grey hoodie [hider]

Pocket bandolier around left side chest [hider]



Inventory:
Water proof Sleeping Bag strapped to back-pack.
One small cooking pan, two 1/2litre water bottles, spare clothes and a hatchet.
A Map of the city and a few packets of food (imperishable).
A toothbrush and towel.Crystaline anti-perspirent.
A wallet with a no money in it, only an old picture of himself and friends.
Assortment of various stolen jewelry.
Weapons:
Pistol with 3 extra magazines.
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Improvised spear.
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Concealed flip knife
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Background: Growing up an orphan was hard for Brian. While he made some close friends he was also bullied persistantly at his school which would lead to fights. This went on for years until one day (after he heard that his friend had just been adopted) Brian had had enough and didnt even give the bullies a chance to throw their first insult before he threw his first punch. After knocking one clean out and leaving the other two bruised and bloody Brian was given a weeks detention, which gave him time to 'think' and to heal his own wounds.

Realising the system was against him already, he set out to balance the odds, and began to find other bullies from other schools - teaching them a lesson. Finding that the rich were too rich, Brian would steal from various houses around his area, minor things at first. All through his life he moved from place to place stealing as he went. He fell into a dark circle for a few years, a group of less than kind men, who didnt just steal but killed. Brian has nothing to thank them for except a generally good knowledge of fire arms and blades.

With that behind him Brian had returned to his home, settling down in a hotel room which he kept modest and clean, paying his rent on time so as not to be suspicious; giving what he didn't need to the orphanage he had grown up in. When he was pulling a second job on the first house he had ever hit, (thinking they were still as easy a target as they were) turns out the sneaky shits had installed a fancy security system. After a close escape and an over-roofs chase Brian had no where else to run, so snuck the jewelry he had stolen into the hidden section of his bag and gave himself up.

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@Sven the Silent Thoughts??
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@Pripovednik I appreciate the effort you put in to making your character, but I feel as though you're not quite on the level of roleplay experience that i'm looking for at the moment. I would advice taking a look at the characters currently in circulation and those already accepted, they should help you along. :)
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@Sven the Silent What exactly is wrong?...
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@Pripovednik It seems like you neglected the Pyshical shape and personality section some what. I understand the latter though, it can be difficult to write down a personality properly. Hence I suggested you take a look at what others have created so far. :)

I also personally, find all the pictures of clothing a bit overkill and off putting. (But that's not a reason for not being accepted yet.)

Your background also contradicts itself a few times, mentioning you stole from multiple houses but that you got caught stealing on your first ever house. Things like ''Paying rent- stealing shit'' comes across as uninterested to the reader.

Please do not be offended, I find it very difficult to offer criticism to others because I do not like hurting other people. I suggest taking your time and polishing your character sheet up a bit. :) (If you're still interested that is.)

Edit: A homemade spear is not impossible but seems to me very impractical in its use. You also mention being set free, but from there on there isn't anything else about what happened then. (Assuming you got set free at the start of the outbreak, or a few days in.)
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@Sven the Silent He gets caught when he goes back to the house in which he first stole? Not when he stole for the first time. Also his physical can't really be extended without literally just stretching out the same thing. Hes athletic, so hes generally fit not fat, muscular but not bulky. Like an athlete

Didnt realise you'd want a big personality, thought I'd add to it as the RP progressed. But I'll edit if need.

I'll change the the 'stealing shit' if its that bad...

Also the laptop I'm on, like I said; is pretty bad. So i cant put those clothes or weapons onto a hider for ease of access (which was my intention).
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@Pripovednik Ah, yes. I see that I didn't read that quite right. ''Hes athletic, so hes generally fit not fat, muscular but not bulky. Like an athlete.'' That's more descriptive already, without you even having to put in effort.

As for personality, it gives a nice insight to your character. You can read that of others and think, with him i'll get along, or that guy and me are going to be at odds. It's just nice to have on hand.

You're free to describe the clothing rather then use the pictures if you like, it would look more organised and makes up for your lack of being able to employ hiders.
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Sorry about this, but I've bitten off more than I could chew in the amount of rps i signed up for,
Apologies, and good luck since this rp is great.
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@Inertia That's a shame, if you happen to reconsider then you're more then welcome here.
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@Sven the Silent re-edited?
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