[OOC] The Alternate World, Charlotte: Welcome to Star Ocean Academy (Superpowers, School RP)

[Angel Eyes]

@Aristo Ooooooooh, liking the image. Don't wanna spoil myself wit anything else though. Let me know when its done and I'll review it.

[Angel Eyes]

A couple of points here. @Card Captor

1. I think you could add a bit more detail to his description. I think you would know your character best, so I think you should put a little more depth into his description. Some more wouldn't hurt right? lol I also think his personality could use a bit more detail, but I guess I'll let it slide, though it couldnt hurt to add more there either.

2. His blood type cant just be O. There isn't such a thing as O blood. It is either O+ or O-, pick one. I missed it, but same thing goes for @WhiteStar19, AB alone isnt a blood type. Is it AB neg or AB pos? Please choose one and change it in ur character sheet accordingly :)

3. But the biggest thing im concerned about is his power. It seems like Orihime's(from Bleach) ability. Is it like a temporal rewind? Or a biological rewind?

Point A.) Could you give me an example or two of this?----->(or turning chemical changes and complex objects back into their raw parts. When putting something back together, it does this by having the separated pieces fly together violently)<----And could u explain this for me, cause that sounds more like a temporal rewind. He isn't really healing, and is more so just reversing time around an object to revert it back to its original state. Right? I ask because if the pieces fly together violently, can he reverse time around a ball to make it fly back where it came from, or can he reverse a flower back to when it was a seedling? I need some clarity on how it works, cause a power like this needs a bit more detail and explanation of its logistics.

Point B.) Also, the Imperfections you have said aren't actually imperfections. An Imperfection is a FLAW in the ability. A hiccup. Being in a bad mood is a circumstance. When and if he gets in a bad mood, his powers go out of wack. That isn't inherent nor is it an imperfection. Its not the power thats flawed, its his mood. And seeing as your character is on super friendly juice, the probability of him being in a bad mood is very fickle.

Secondly, "him having to touch something before he can use his power on it is a pre-requisite. It doesn't make the power imperfect or flawed. Okay, he touches something and can then use the power perfectly. No. lol A pre-requisite isn't a flaw, its just the formality for activating his ability. That's it. I mean, im not saying you can't keep those for what they are, but they arent imperfections.

(He can not restore life to a living being, and he can not use his powers on himself)<-------Hmmmm...this could potentially be his flaw, but it also just feels like a limitation. His power still works perfectly, he just cant restore life and self regenerate. But I suppose for a power like this, its hard to find a very logical flaw or imperfection. Might be easier to find once you describe Point A for me.

[Urbanliner]

Guess I'll drop a WIP character sheet too.

WIP

Mizuki Misaki

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"I'm always ready for an "action"! "

A surprisingly athletic and good looking self-admitted light novel fan of Japanese origin, Mizuki is 172cm (5'7.7") high and weighs 59kg (130lb) and is somewhat thin and muscular, making him somewhat taller and lighter than average 15 years old boys of his race and height. He sometimes wears a red-framed glass, although it is not required for his eyesight. His hair is short-cut and is jet black, coupled to eyebrows of the same color and sharp purple eyes.

In front of the girls he is attracted to, Mizuki seems to be unable to do anything without sounding like he is attempting to seduce the girl in one way or another, even in fights. However, his actions change somewhat dramatically if he is not near any girls, as in rejecting those who he does not trust. Despite the fact, he is always an active person even if he is near someone whom he doesn't trust.

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Codename: Alcyone

House: The Whales

Grade: 10th

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Sexuality: Heterosexual

Birthday: April 26th

Blood Type: A-

Nationality: Japanese
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Hobbies: As many or as little as wanted.

• Reading light novels
• Watching anime
• Exercising
• Cosplaying

Personality:
Most people's first impression on Mizuki would differ depending on the gender of the person who sees him.
For most girls, they'd see him as a very flirty person considering his behavior, which involves actively attempting to seduce the person he is talking to, hoping he could gain a harem around him just like in light novels he reads.
For all boys, they'd see him as a very repulsive guy unlike how he would act in front of girls, as he doesn't trust boys from events that happened in his life, some of them involving bullying.
However, some boys who managed to interact with him for a long enough time despite his attempts to reject them would see his brighter side, which tries to bring smiles to the boy who he trusts, mostly like how he would interact with girls without any romantic feelings whatsoever.

However, Mizuki is always an active person, regardless of the fact if he can trust the people around him, always moving his body when the situation is appropriate. What Mizuki definitely hates is bullying; He ended up acting this way because most bullies seemed to be boys and not girls, and he will attempt to always charge into an instance of bullying and stop it at all costs, no matter the method used.

History:Mizuki was born in a surprisingly caring family, consisting of himself, his father and his mother, with both being of Japanese origin. Mizuki was raised happily without any abuse from his parents. His activeness was already showing up when he was 5 years old, as he spent his free time actively roaming around the house with a plane toy even if he couldn't go to a park. The situation only got better when people in the elementary school he was enrolled in adored him for being athletic and active.

However, it all changed when Mizuki was enrolled to a junior high school as the third semester of the first grade began with bullying against him, using the fact he tripped in an ekiden relay racing which costed the team the victory as an excuse. Some of the boys that were friends with him joined the bullies while others simply couldn't do anything while some of the girls surprisingly protected him, with the bullies unable to act against them as they claimed any sort of violence against girls is bad, making the bullied boy trust boys less and trust girls more, eventually inventing a tactic to make girls fall for him.

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Current Classification: Starborn

Special Ability:
Mizuki is capable of negating other's abilities by directly touching the manifestation of the ability or the object directly influenced by the ability. In addition, he cannot be influenced with any abilities.
Limitation:
Mizuki cannot negate objects indirectly influenced by the ability, such as an object thrown at him with an ability that enhances the user's strength.
Imperfection:
Mizuki cannot de-activate the ability at his own will, disallowing positive powers from affecting him too. In addition to it, Mizuki cannot fully negate the ability if it continually regenerates via one way or another.
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School Clubs: As many or as little as wanted.

• Anime club
• Boy's basketball team

Character Relations:

• Character Name: N/A
• Character Name: N/A
• Character Name: N/A

Other: I'm not a native English user and I'll try my best, but please don't expect me to use perfect English.

[Amaralyn]

My WIP for now :3 Will continue working on it this afternoon or evening.

Hamasaki Elisa (WIP)

Hamasaki Elisa

_{(Note: I used the Japanese format for names.)}

"A little persistence goes a long way."

A general description of the character goes here. 1-3 paragraphs.

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Codename: Altair

House: The Whales

Grade: 12th

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Sexuality: Heterosexual

Birthday: May 6

Blood Type: O-

Nationality: Japanese, with roots in Europe, hence the European first name.
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Hobbies:

• Drawing
• Listening to music
• Going outdoors, mostly by cycling
• Experimenting (this includes cooking, drawing styles, music genres, tea flavors...)

Personality: At least two paragraphs.

History: At least a paragraph.
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Current Classification: Pre-star

Special Ability:
Shapeshifting. When fully mastered one can become anything they want, at any time they want: a creature (bear, dragon, amoeba, plant), a person (imitating someone, including their power, however not to the level of said person), an object (a sword, a chair to blend into a room, a body of water). Elisa is only a beginner though, and can only turn into a small selection of animals, and can imitate her sister since the two look and sound quite alike.

Imperfection:
As described before, she can't become anything she wants to yet. A prerequisite seems to be that she has to have actually observed the subject in real life, rather than seeing it on a picture or reading about it. If she tries to shift into a dragon for example, which she has only seen in fantasy books, she will just shift into a picture of a dragon, rather than the real deal. How well she manages to shift into something depends on how well she knows the subject or how many times she has observed it. For example, she is perfectly fine at shifting into small birds and rodents, okay at shifting into a bear or deer, but sucks at shifting into rare animals such as a crane. When she tries to shift into something she has observed only once or twice it will be a very imperfect copy of the animal, having traits of other animals, some parts being too large or too small, or some parts still remaining human. Moreover, she can't control the timing too well yet: her power often comes out when she's emotional, for example turning into a bird when she's feeling down. The only form over which she has full control is that of an imaginative animal (or misfit, however you want to view it), which looks mostly like an overgrown hamster, though it also shows some similarities with a bear and makes guinea pig noises. Basically it's a useless form, but Elisa tends to (mis)use it when she doesn't want to talk to people or when she wants get out of certain situations. She also sometimes (mis)uses her ability to get pampered and pet.
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School Clubs:

• Arts club

She sometimes joins in on the Music club to listen, but never participates since she can’t play an instrument. (Or at least not well enough to play along.)

Character Relations:

• [Will be updated later]
• [Will be updated later]
• [Will be updated later]

Other:
She wears a pendant which represents both a snowflake and a flower. She bought it mostly for the simple reason that she found it pretty, but also partially because she feels it represents her well: the snowflake standing for the first impression most people get of her, while the flower shows the side of her that people will know her for after they've grown to her.

Theme Song: Imagine Dragons - Shots

When the imaginary animal part is too much I can change it into a normal animal.

[GummyCat]

nvm, i flipped a table and my interest went crashing to the ground with it. I died from doing too much thinking into this xDDD

[WhiteStar19]

@Angel Eyes Changed it. I can't believe I forgot. xD

Also, when will we know if we have the Orion spot?

[Angel Eyes]

@WhiteStar19: Thanks whiteSTAAAARRRRR! :P

Well, when or if more people joined I was going to decide. lol But I'm optimistic it wont be long.

@Urbanliner I feel like Mizuki is trying to seduce someone and kill them at the same time. LOL Is he trying to be sexy in that picture?

@Amaralyn Elisa is soooo fucking cute. OH! And Imagine Dragons FTW! One of my favorite bands!

Looking forward to you guys finished product.

@GummyCat I didn't realize you were interested seeing as you never expressed it to begin with. lol How did you put too much thinking into it?

[Shin Ghost Note]

@Card Captor I see Jojo references.

[Card Captor]

@Card Captor I see Jojo references.

@Mr Allen J

Thank god someone does

@Angel Eyes

Edited my CS

[Angel Eyes]

@Card Captor Alright amigo, hes accepted. You can go ahead and move him into the character tab! :)

[Card Captor]

@Angel Eyes

Thanks

[Angel Eyes]

@Angel Eyes

Thanks

@Card Captor

Your welcome!

[Dead Cruiser]

Alright, so, flaws seem to be a point of difficulty from what I can tell.

Let me run something by you: would a high propensity for collateral damage be considered a flaw? More specifically, the power being easily able to set off a destructive chain reaction if not used within specific parameters?

[Angel Eyes]

Alright, so, flaws seem to be a point of difficulty from what I can tell.

Let me run something by you: would a high propensity for collateral damage be considered a flaw? More specifically, the power being easily able to set off a destructive chain reaction if not used within specific parameters?

@Dead Cruiser

Not necessarily a point of difficulty, but more so an internal fluke, an imperfection that makes the power. Like in the show, for example. One of the characters has the ability to teleport to any point in his line of sight, but its portrayed as his body literally moving super fast in one direction. And the flaw/imperfection is that when he teleports he cannot fully control where he stops so hes always crashing into things(per hurting himself and causing collateral damage).

But, the power has to be inherently flawed, not sometimes due to parameters or circumstances. For setting off a destructive chain reaction to be the flaw, that would ALWAYS have to be the case when he uses the power, not just sometimes if not used within a specific parameter. But whats the power though? Hard to know the flaw if i dont know the power.

[Dead Cruiser]

Well, for the "difficulty" part, I meant that players were having difficulty designing it. It's hard to make a power with an intentional glaring flaw.

In any case, my planned power is Ionokinesis, or Plasma Manipulation.

[Angel Eyes]

Well, for the "difficulty" part, I meant that players were having difficulty designing it. It's hard to make a power with an intentional glaring flaw.

In any case, my planned power is Ionokinesis, or Plasma Manipulation.

@Dead Cruiser

Oh I here wat ur saying.I don't think anyone has expressed any difficulty making a flaw so far. But I can see why u could feel that way depending on the power. Certain powers require a little more thought. But that's how powers work in the actual anime, I didn't just make it up. they are inherently imperfect.

But if majority of the people are unsatisfied with the idea of an imperfect power, I might be willing to get rid of that aspect.

[Amaralyn]

Finally done with my CS!

Hamasaki Elisa

Hamasaki Elisa

_{(Note: I used the Japanese format for names.)}

"I regret the things I haven't done more than the things I did wrong."

Elisa is of Japanese-French blood. Inheriting most of her mother’s traits, she looks more European than Asian. With a height of 5’ 3” (1.60m) she is of average height considering her nationality. She is slightly less slim than most girls as she enjoys cooking, but she doesn't deviate an extraordinary amount. (Let’s just say she has a bit more curves than most Japanese girls – some of which in the right places...) Her smooth brown hair is cut in a short fashion. The color of her irises are a mishmash of blue, green and grey, of which the ratio of colors seems to alter a bit each day; they can most simply be described as being sea-green. There seems to be a certain sadness to her voice at times, but in general it is warm and chiming.

Her most prominent character trait would have to be her dreaminess, wandering off in her imaginative mind. Elisa is quiet, but stiff rather than shy. Those who get to know her for longer however will very likely discover her warm side who easily cares for people and likes helping them. Besides this she can be quite playful, especially having pleasure in teasing her sister Rina at times.
She is also curious and studious, and although she gets desperate at times, she does not give up easily.

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Codename: Altair

House: The Whales

Grade: 12th

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Sexuality: Heterosexual

Birthday: May 6

Blood Type: O+

Nationality: Japanese, with roots in Europe, hence the European first name.

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Hobbies:

• Drawing
• Listening to music
• Going outdoors, mostly by cycling
• Experimenting (this includes cooking, drawing styles, music genres, tea flavors...)

Personality:
Elisa is quiet and dreamy, and may come off as cold and distant at first approach. Those who have grown on her over time though, know her to be a kind and playful person who loves to help people. She often compares herself to a shy animal, who first needs to grow accustomed to those around her in order to show her true self.
Curious at heart and creative, she loves studying and experimenting with lots of things: trying out drawing styles, listening to different music genres, and sometimes practicing her cooking skills.

Her social skills however are rather weak. Most people that don’t get to experience her for a longer period find her awkward to talk to. While she has been able to shake off most of the shyness she experienced during her childhood, part of her still doesn't dare to speak up although she will always stand up for her rights. In group situations she will keep quiet unless directly addressed. She is also terrible at getting a conversation going.

This lack of social handiness has given her a low self-image over time and has often been the cause of periods of breakdown, leaving her quite depressed at times. She doesn't like to show this side, rather bottling it up.

Quite obviously she is not someone who loves to go out and party: too much people she doesn’t know or barely knows. Instead, she can mostly be found in her room studying, or passing her time drawing or browsing the web. Other than in her room she can also be found outside, relaxing and enjoying the scene, feeding her dreamy side and curious mind by watching birds and other wild life.

History:
Elisa grew up in a loving family, consisting of mother, father, and a one-year younger sister Rina.
Her mother was of French origin, who once agreed to go on a family trip to Japan. Here she met Elisa’s father who worked at a local restaurant. The two got along very well and the two developed romantic feelings towards each other. When it was time for Elisa’s mother to go back home to France, she promised Elisa’s father she would return as soon as she had completed her nurse training. She kept her promise, and after a few years the two rejoined and slowly started building up their life together. Elisa was their first child, after which soon followed her sister Rina. With the addition to the family, their father decided to quit his job to care for the children, while their mother continued to work as a nurse.

Already at a young age it became evident Elisa had a calm and quiet nature, preferring to spend her time either alone or with her sister. The two of them could often be found playing outside, letting their creative minds on the loose.
Elisa did well in school, but the teachers always worried a bit about her since she seemed to seclude herself from the other kids. It made them wonder whether she was being bullied but such was not the case; she simply preferred her peace and on top of that was very shy.

Her excellent academic skills allowed Elisa to go to one of Japan’s best high schools. Here she still remained at the top of the class. Although she received C’s in geography and history, she excelled in both the natural sciences and languages. This was partially due to some giftedness, as she likes to refer to it, but also because the subjects interested her greatly, investing quite some time in them.

It was also here that her shyness slowly started to wear off, but due to the lack of social experience, she acted and still acts stiff. This lead to awkward situations on several occasions. It drove Elisa into despair, thinking she would never be able to change for the better. It made her wish she had been born as something else. The wind perhaps, so she could move across the land noticed yet unseen, or as a bird so she could simply fly away.

One day when these thoughts crossed her mind, a weird shiver went down her entire body, making her sick to the stomach. She shut her eyes, clenching her fists as her head went dizzy. This was not so strange as her body had just altered dramatically. When she came to, her beak dropped open when she saw her reflection in the mirror: not that of a fifteen year old schoolgirl, but that of a silver seagull.

Elisa immediately realized this was out of the ordinary and after overthinking what had happened, she carefully confronted her parents with it. They were not quite as shocked as the girl had expected them to be. They explained there were more teenagers just like her who suddenly discovered their hidden potential.

Because Elisa had such a wide interest and because of the new found ability, Elisa’s parents deemed it a good idea to send her to Ocean Star Academy on the age of sixteen. This way Elisa would be able to focus fine-tuning her ability and give her some time to think about her future plans.

Having spent one year training, Elisa has now gained a little more control over her power and does no longer experience any discomfort when she changes form. She still hopes to overcome her social awkwardness and throw off her shell to show her true bubbly self at first encounter.

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Current Classification: Pre-star

Special Ability:
Shapeshifting. When fully mastered one can become anything they want, at any time they want: a creature (bear, dragon, amoeba, plant), a person (imitating someone, including their power, however not to the level of said person), an object (a sword, a chair to blend into a room, a body of water). Elisa is only a beginner though, and can only turn into a small selection of animals, and can imitate her sister since the two look and sound quite alike.

Imperfection:
As described before, Elisa can't become anything she wants to yet. A prerequisite seems to be that she has to have actually observed the subject in real life, rather than seeing it on a picture or reading about it. If she tries to shift into a dragon for example, which she has only seen in fantasy books, she will just shift into a picture of a dragon, rather than the real deal. How well she manages to shift into something depends on how well she knows the subject or how many times she has observed it. For example, she is perfectly fine at shifting into small birds and rodents, okay at shifting into a bear or deer, but sucks at shifting into rare animals such as a crane. When she tries to shift into something she has observed only once or twice it will be a very imperfect copy of the animal, having traits of other animals, some parts being too large or too small, or some parts still remaining human.

Moreover, Elisa can't control the timing too well yet: her power often comes out when she's emotional, for example turning into a bird when she's feeling down.

The only form over which she has full control is that of an imaginary animal (or misfit, however you want to view it), which looks mostly like an overgrown hamster, though it also shows some similarities with a bear and makes guinea pig noises. Basically it's a useless form, but Elisa tends to (mis)use it when she doesn't want to talk to people or when she wants get out of certain situations. She also sometimes (mis)uses her ability to get pampered and pet.

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School Clubs:

• Arts club

Elisa sometimes joins in on the Music club to listen, but never participates since she can’t play an instrument. (Or at least not well enough to play along.)

Character Relations:

• [Will be updated later]
• [Will be updated later]
• [Will be updated later]

Other:
Elisa wears a pendant which represents both a snowflake and a flower. She bought it mostly for the simple reason that she found it pretty, but also partially because she feels it represents her well: the snowflake impersonating the first impression most people get of her, while the flower expresses the side of her that people will know her for when they get to know her better.

Theme Song: Imagine Dragons - Shots

[TaliPaendrag]

@Angel EyesI'm still working on a cs, but how does this sound for an imperfection of telekinesis?

Imperfection

Can only push or pull objects. Also, it follows Newton’s Third Law, which is a simple way of saying that the weight of the object matters. If she’s attempting to push an object that’s heavier than she is, she’ll move instead of the object unless she’s also pushing on an even heavier object. Likewise, if she attempts to pull an object that’s heavier than she is, she’ll end up moving toward it instead.

I understand that, with enough training, my character would be able to use their power in such a way that it seemed to be just normal telekinesis, but I'm not sure if that's okay or not. If it isn't, I have a back-up power planned, so it's really no big deal. :D

[Angel Eyes]

@Talipaendrag

That actually sounds like a really viable imperfection for telekinesis. I like it! ^_^

@Amaralyn

She is too cute. Haha/ I will review her in a bit.

[Amaralyn]

[@Tailpaendrag]

That actually sounds like a really viable imperfection for telekinesis. I like it! ^_^

@Amaralyn

She is too cute. Haha/ I will review her in a bit.

@Angel Eyes

Thank you > w < Can't wait for your judgment.
I made one last edit just now: I changed her quote.