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If I understand this correctly, we're allowed to play as heroes, villains and anything in between? The line "You may choose any character appearing in DC Comics." does seem to make it clear, but I'd figure I'd ask anyway considering I've never been part of one of these RP's and all the applications so far, unless I've missed something, have been for heroes.

Given that I'm asking, I guess it's evident that I'm thinking about writing an app for something other than a straight up hero.
Need an RSVP if you (IC) will be in King's Landing for the opening sequence.


Not playing a house, but my character will be in King's Landing.
Hello @Ruby, @Sini, and everyone else from last time. At least I think there was a last time? I do remember something like this.

I don't suppose I could re-apply using the same house as the previous, House Hightower? Otto the Younger wants to prove himself.


There's been quite a few "last times"! From my experience, that's usually not problem, as long as the sheet is updated to fit the new setting.

Best wait for the GM, though!

I think my single character sell-sword is complete.
I just need to hitch a ride with someone or find someone willing to pay for his services.
(If he gets approved)


Looking at your bio, Dagmer Cleftjaw hadn't even been born at the time this RP is set. You also might also wanna lengthen the bio, as you say here that Vallen is a sellsword yet there's no mention of it in the bio.
Fucking A, I've been waiting for one of these to pop up again. Let's hope it gets off the ground this time. In order to try and help along with the aforementioned DAUNTING task, I've gone ahead and created a single character rather than an entire house this time, as it's easier to get off the ground.

Posted the sheet in the CS part of the thread (still getting used to this new (for me) forum format, hope I was supposed to post it there?). It's WIP in the sense that I'm not sure if it fits with canon definitions, specifically in the case of Lys. I hope it does, but if it doesn't I'll obviously fix and rewrite it accordingly. Other than that, it's complete.

EDIT: Also, hi Vanq. Where you've been, woman?!

James Milliner


Somewhere along the Las Palmas Strip

The air was cool, but not cold. It was a pleasant morning, as far as mornings go. James glanced at his wrist watch. It was far too early to walk about the city. Hell, it was far too early to be awake at all. The Strip was different this time of day. The traffic was about as heavy as usual, but no cars were stopping or parking. They were merely passing through. After all, nearly all of the businesses in the area were closed this time of day. Accordingly, the sidewalk James was traveling on was far from crowded, with maybe twenty feet separating the pedestrians, on average.

Reaching inside the chest pocket of his black shirt, James pulled out a brass cigarette case. He thought they were a nuisance, considering how few cancer sticks they held. But Alex had been adamant about his personnel appearing 'classy', and James obliged. He pulled one out and lit it while stopping at a red light. He hadn't exactly been surprised by the call he'd received last night, given that Max had asked for it just a few days ago, but he was curious what the girl was doing. Maxine Carter was the step daughter of Hank Smith, an old Iron Cross acquaintance of James'. Smith had been picked up by NEST agents a few months ago, and if it hadn't been for the obviously strained relationship he had with his step daughter, James might've thought Max was intending to spring the man. Because that much she had made clear over the phone; she'd asked if James still had his "night job". Max clearly wanted to break in somewhere, and given that she'd reached out to James - who was merely a passing acquaintance, James had assumed it was something serious - or that the girl was desperate. Regardless, James owed Smith a favor and figured this might be the time to repay it. After all, how difficult a score could a 19-year-old rave chick ever conjure up?

Accordingly, James had suggested they'd meet the following night, but Max had wanted to meet even sooner. And it was because of this James now found himself tiredly tagging along the Strip at a quarter to nine in the morning. Stifling a yawn, James patiently waited for the green light even though the middle-aged couple beside him already hurriedly started to cross the road while there was a gap in traffic. As the light switched, James walked on and put the cigarette back in his mouth. Why are you even bothering with this, James? You should've just said no. You got enough on your plate as it is. You need to figure out what to do about the Children - and fucking Simon - not do some shit heist with a chick barely out of high school. Hell, she was probably a drop-out.

As he saw the white and red sign read out "The Maple Café", James abandoned his thoughts and stepped inside. Max wasn't here yet. He ordered some pancakes and took a seat facing the entrance and leaned back.
@cider I'd suggest that you wait for the timeskip. It should be coming within the next 48 hours, so it won't be that long a wait.


Not a problem, I'll do that.

EDIT: If I may offer @Blackmist16 a piece of advice; try reading the opening OOC posts thoroughly and a couple of the accepted sheets before writing your own, to help get a sense of what kind of what style and quality of writing the RP is looking for. As of now, aside from what others have mentioned, you have a large number of grammatical errors that really shouldn't be present in the Advanced section. Do you check your post in Word (or similar word processor)? If not, I'd recommend it. Sure helps me. Perhaps most importantly; make sure a character's personality isn't self-contradicting (or contradicting the history of said character), and rather a natural evolution of the character's experiences and surroundings (as well as throwing in some deeply rooted, highly personal traits). It's perhaps a more challenging process, but much more rewarding as well.
I'm thinking I'll chill with my first IC post until after the timeskip. Right/wrong?
Dynamics untouched as of yet (this outta be discussed with other participants, no?), otherwise I think the CS is ready to be scrutinized.

Assuming it is here I should post, and not PM? Oh well, it's done.

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