@Cruallassar@Terminal SURE why not. Cru may have one of my three lives. <3 That puts me downs to two (one to give away, assuming I can do that with a life I was given by someone else). Good luck!
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They say it's about the journey, not the destination. This is true of many things. Pizza delivery is not one of them.
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TFW you know what you want to happen but the words aren't cooperating. Why is plot suddenly so much harder to write?
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I am an adult, though I don't usually act like it. I'm a voracious reader, and not overly picky about books. I am artistic in a variety of areas, including music, drawing, writing, and sculpting. I have a minor obsession with dragons, and love the color violet. Fantasy is my preferred genre, be it past, future, urban...as long as it has a fantasy flavor to it. I also like scifi, mystery, and some horror. I am crazy, and I like tormenting my characters. But I don't bite...much. ^.~
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@PlatinumSkink I'd go with "that", not "this" -- "this", to me, implies it's something present or fairly immediate, and it feels more like a tense/perspective error than anything else, but it doesn't seem particularly egregious. I would accept "this" here, as a stylistic choice. I don't remember the specifics of when you use which, but it does make sense. "This"/"that" is specific, and emphasizes something more than just an "it". "It" is just a fairly generic sort of word, and if you want to highlight the death, I wouldn't use "it". In terms of replacement, you should be replacing "that"s, not "this"es, @Terminal.
I am going to surprise you, but I'm not telling you how this will happen.
Put that in past tense:
I was going to surprise you, but I didn't tell you how this would happen.
...Actually, maybe it should be a matter of correcting "was going" to "would"? Honestly English is rather flexible, and there's always half a dozen ways to say anything and any one of them might not feel quite right to someone but fine to others.
@Cruallassar How many do you have right now?
I am going to surprise you, but I'm not telling you how this will happen.
Put that in past tense:
I was going to surprise you, but I didn't tell you how this would happen.
...Actually, maybe it should be a matter of correcting "was going" to "would"? Honestly English is rather flexible, and there's always half a dozen ways to say anything and any one of them might not feel quite right to someone but fine to others.
@Cruallassar How many do you have right now?
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Though he's not been online in two weeks, so iunno.
@Mogtaki will do~ maybe tonight, maybe ni the morning. <3
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@ayzrules I remember they've been referred to as twins a few times, thogh I can't recall where else, or by whom. It's not an unreasonable assumption, given how they behave. The twin stereotype has a closer bond than most siblings. ^.^ No worries~
@Mogtaki can I just get a rough idea of how Kensen reacts to being thanked? Does he introduce himself back before leaving?
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Huzzah a post!
As a note, it's fine if people think they're twins, but Izkry is actually younger than Belasy by a couple years.
As a note, it's fine if people think they're twins, but Izkry is actually younger than Belasy by a couple years.
@Stern Algorithm Ah, understandable. I'll do my best to keep you up to date, then.
Right now, the idea is to get things moving. ^.^
Right now, the idea is to get things moving. ^.^
@Terminal Not you. Persuasion from people who want lives. You don't need any more. *swats* =P
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