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Just posted something for interaction of the other character.
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I just realized your avatar is from Mirror's Edge. I never got to finish that game, but I loved it while I was playing it.

I gotta sleep, 3am snuck up on me. Night!
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So... how does he know who she is?
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In the past he served as a bodyguard at certain points when the king visited other kingdoms. More or less he's seen her once or twice and knows her trickery.
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Okay. Next time put that in the post itself... These details are important.
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Sorry. It was kinda rushed.
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No rush necessary, Swordfish. We have plenty of time.

Jin didn't hear Korlash's warning about Alice. She was asleep. Add to that the fact that she's never seen a human woman wield a weapon before, and she's a sitting duck.
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An explanation of how the army can't get in



The village is a rather open area, covered by an extreme density of trees, with only one opening available(Not counting the secret lake exit Korlash has.)
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Are the trees very tightly packed? I mean, Jin is small... I was thinking she'd squeeze through once the village was safe.
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they are pretty tightly packed, but not enough to where she can't squeeze through.
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Do you have any ideas of how to continue the story after the invasion?
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The king does something (poison, magic curse?) that ensures that even if the elves don't die today, they will in a very short number of years. Korlash feels responsible for bringing trouble, so he offers to go seek a way out. (Rare antidote, countercurse...) Jin, of course, is right behind him.
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I love it. Gives me a chance to extend the land out even more, use a little creativity.
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cool. i'll post tomorrow afternoon. just looking at the empty box is overwhelming atm.

also, can we throw in a trip to the ocean and some merpeople?
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yep. whatever you like.

Also, yeah, sometimes coming up with something to write is pretty annoying. writer's block.
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it's the fight scenes that throw me. i'm just not that good at them anymore.
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Understandable. Fighting scenes are easier for me because I enjoy action stuff.
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Okay so quick idea bounce. What about instead of the elves dying, how about the forest?
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*nod* That makes sense too. It'd scatter the remaining people everywhere, and force them to live in a world they haven't been part of before. Korlash was lucky enough that he was young and adaptable when he got banished. Some of the elders will not be so fortunate.
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If you want, we can lay off the action scenes for a little while and have more social development.
(I have made it a little too actiony from the get go.)
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