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What Do I Stand For? - A Galactic Civil War Story

Date: 0 BBY, before Completion of the first Death Star

Plot: In 0 BBY, Utapau was predominantly governed by the wealthy Fey family, and there was some Rebel influence on the remote world. Garnak Fey was the head of the Fey family and the CEO of the Silica Tab production lines, which were the main source of income for the family-owned organization. Although Utapau was enslaved by the Empire and remained Imperial aligned with only a light presence of secret Imperial storehouses, Garnak Fey had remained neutral during the Galactic Civil War focusing on his family and his company. Both the Alliance to Restore the Republic and the Galactic Empire sent representatives to influence Garnak Fey to join their cause...

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I like the intro :) Do you wish to write the first IC post, or shall I?
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Rules
1 keep it within Star Wars canon
2 don't kill Garnak Fey
3 have fun

Okay, now I'm ready. I'll get a post up
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Oh come on, I wanted to kill him! How am I supposed to complete my mission now?

Wait a minute... :P
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Sorry for the delay, my computer acted up last night. IC intro post up.
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No problems, I was asleep then.
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Is the post approved? :)
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Canon error - Grand Moff Tarkin was busy overseeing the Death Star Project at this time he would be aboard the nearly complete battle station, also Tarkin had no connections to ISB in fact the ISB had their eyes on him because he was damn near God when it came to the Death Star and if the rebels hadn't blown the Death Star, who's to say he wouldn't have blown Coruscant?

Other than that, I liked your post.
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Rewrite my post then? And if so, who is to take his place?
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You know who Inquisitors are? ISB agents were known to report to them, or higher ranking ISB officers.
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Only heard of them through Star Wars: The Old Republic. I'll do some reading and try to find something appropriate.
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There, changed Doran's superior to Colonel Wullf Yularen. Better?
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There, changed Doran's superior to Colonel Wullf Yularen. Better?


Much better, sorry don't mean to be an asshole, but when you mention canon characters, I try to keep this as close as I can and that's the reason why I usually create my own characters.
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I'll try to not think of you as one, but as you already know I am not a walking encyclopaedia about the Star Wars universe.
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I'll try to not think of you as one, but as you already know I am not a walking encyclopaedia about the Star Wars universe.


Thanks! =)

I know, I don't expect you to, just wanted the Tarkin thing corrected, thank you btw. =) I'll get a post up soon.
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Okay, looking forward to reading it :)
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I'm a little stuck on how to proceed with my post, mind if I ask for some help?
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I didn't mean to leave you hanging, let's see you could be still talking, flirting, arguing, with the receptionist... Reem is back in the room now you can engage her. You can snoop around, act casual whatever, or talk to one of the other Fey family members to sniff out the Imperial loyalists maybe you already know who they are and they set a meeting with you?
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Now I feel like I'm the one leaving you hanging. Thank you, I'll get to writing when I decide what is best :)
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I can't say that post was all too good, so sorry in advance for some hard reading.
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