(Anyone Interested? owo )

Seems interesting. Sort of like how nothing is explained in too much detail, make it a bit more favorable. :/

> Seems interesting. > Sort of like how nothing is explained in too much detail, make it a bit more favorable. :/ Here I added more INFO =w= and fought with the computer to do so.. - **Genre: Mystery, Action and a few more I don't feel like listing.** - **Year: 1850 - Planet: Hiyora - Location: A small village called Saraki - Description Of Planet: Hiyora is one of the five planets that could only produce life. It does produce life but not for only Humans for other beings as well.** - **_Story Description: Having a few different species living on one planet was kind of weird.The species had made a treaty years ago so all could live together peacefully. Though some still didn't get along. Girls and boys of all ages in the village were disappearing recently. It was only this village and No one really did anything about it since No one exactly knows why, they just up and disappear. No one knows if any of them survived and they couldn't put any charges out on a person that they had no information on. When It came to the elderly our city does their best to keep an eye on them. There were only 2 elderly men left.The Village had considered everyone that was 25-30 years of age Elderly because of the survival and disappearance rate. Every one did their best not to talk about what was going on. Bringing talk about it would only bring more worry and pain through the community. It would also only scare the children and make bad news spread through out the county. They needed to blame someone so they blamed the Country's Mafia. Which they were used to getting blamed from all the crime they had committed. Though the Country didn't do much to stop them since they didn't have a military they needed some sort ofprotection. The Mafia was lead by a Human._** - **_Species: Ware-Wolf, Neko Kitten, Neko Fox,Human NOTE: Leader of Village Is a Ware-Wolf - ( Try to make it even for each group, if you see Example : 2 neko Fox, 3 Ware-Wolf, 4 Vampire, 0 Neko Kitten Choose the one that has the least.)_** - Ages- You must choose a reasonable age, can not be lower then the Human age 18, For Elderly No Older then the age of 30. ( So thats the start, let me know if your interested, what you think and I might set up an actual role play )

> > Seems interesting. > > Sort of like how nothing is explained in too much detail, make it a bit more favorable. :/ > > Here I added more INFO =w= and fought with the computer to do so.. > > - **Genre: Mystery, Action and a few more I don't feel like listing.** > - **Year: 1850 > - Planet: Hiyora > - Location: A small village called Saraki > - Description Of Planet: Hiyora is one of the five planets that could only produce life. It does produce life but not for only Humans for other beings as well.** > - **_Story Description: Having a few different species living on one planet was kind of weird.The species had made a treaty years ago so all could live together peacefully. Though some still didn't get along. Girls and boys of all ages in the village were disappearing recently. It was only this village and No one really did anything about it since No one exactly knows why, they just up and disappear. No one knows if any of them survived and they couldn't put any charges out on a person that they had no information on. When It came to the elderly our city does their best to keep an eye on them. There were only 2 elderly men left.The Village had considered everyone that was 25-30 years of age Elderly because of the survival and disappearance rate. Every one did their best not to talk about what was going on. Bringing talk about it would only bring more worry and pain through the community. It would also only scare the children and make bad news spread through out the county. They needed to blame someone so they blamed the Country's Mafia. Which they were used to getting blamed from all the crime they had committed. Though the Country didn't do much to stop them since they didn't have a military they needed some sort ofprotection. The Mafia was lead by a Human._** > > - **_Species: Ware-Wolf, Neko Kitten, Neko Fox,Human > NOTE: Leader of Village Is a Ware-Wolf > - ( Try to make it even for each group, if you see Example : 2 neko Fox, 3 Ware-Wolf, 4 Vampire, 0 Neko Kitten Choose the one that has the least.)_** > > - Ages- You must choose a reasonable age, can not be lower then the Human age 18, For Elderly No Older then the age of 30. > > ( So thats the start, let me know if your interested, what you think and I might set up an actual role play ) Seems like a good basis to start on. I'd say it could reel in a few people. Now to wait...

( I hope so...)

What section would you put this in? The story is pretty lackluster. It needs more details, the village, country, and mafia need actual names. You haven't really explained anything about Hiyora or why the different species signed treaties or anything about the other species at all. Before people can be interested in this, there has to be more to be interested in, not just a story, a year, and a planet. You should probably also explain how advanced society and technology are on Hiyora, lest people get confused and wear clothes that aren't period appropriate.

> What section would you put this in? > > The story is pretty lackluster. It needs more details, the village, country, and mafia need actual names. You haven't really explained anything about Hiyora or why the different species signed treaties or anything about the other species at all. Before people can be interested in this, there has to be more to be interested in, not just a story, a year, and a planet. You should probably also explain how advanced society and technology are on Hiyora, lest people get confused and wear clothes that aren't period appropriate. =w= ill add more when people get interested. I am not fighting with this computer again. If you want more info now then message me.

REPOSTING SO THAT EVERYONE CAN SEE!~ ALSO IF YOU WANT MORE INFO RIGHT AWAY MESSAGE ME! Genre: Mystery, Action and a few more I don't feel like listing. Year: 1850 Planet: Hiyora Location: A small village called Saraki Description Of Planet: Hiyora is one of the five planets that could only produce life. It does produce life but not for only Humans for other beings as well. -Story Description: Having a few different species living on one planet was kind of weird.The species had made a treaty years ago so all could live together peacefully. Though some still didn't get along. Girls and boys of all ages in the village were disappearing recently. It was only this village and No one really did anything about it since No one exactly knows why, they just up and disappear. No one knows if any of them survived and they couldn't put any charges out on a person that they had no information on. When It came to the elderly our city does their best to keep an eye on them. There were only 2 elderly men left.The Village had considered everyone that was 25-30 years of age Elderly because of the survival and disappearance rate. Every one did their best not to talk about what was going on. Bringing talk about it would only bring more worry and pain through the community. It would also only scare the children and make bad news spread through out the county. They needed to blame someone so they blamed the Country's Mafia. Which they were used to getting blamed from all the crime they had committed. Though the Country didn't do much to stop them since they didn't have a military they needed some sort of protection. The Mafia was lead by a Human. Species: Ware-Wolf, Neko Kitten, Neko Fox,Human NOTE: Leader of Village Is a Ware-Wolf ( Try to make it even for each group, if you see Example : 2 neko Fox, 3 Ware-Wolf, 4 Vampire, 0 Neko Kitten Choose the one that has the least.) The Mafia is known as Silent Shadows. Ages- You must choose a reasonable age, can not be lower then the Human age 18, For Elderly No Older then the age of 30. ( So thats the start, let me know if your interested, what you think and I might set up an actual role play )