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Sorry that it's a little short, but I got a post up. :3
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Sorry that it's a little short, but I got a post up. :3


Yeah, I'm not too concerned about post length.
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hey I just saw this Rp and was really interested, is there still room? I wanted to incorporate some electricity power, but as I saw that seemed to be already taken. Is fire manipulation still available if there is space?
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hey I just saw this Rp and was really interested, is there still room? I wanted to incorporate some electricity power, but as I saw that seemed to be already taken. Is fire manipulation still available if there is space?


Yes, yes, there is still space. I have claimed Fire Manipulation for Diego Bellasquez... buuut, I don't really care if there's a second person with the same power long as they're not the same character, ya' dig?
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The GM has a character who has a fire spirit... bonded to his soul or something which grants him fire abilities. So he might be fine with it but you'd have to ask.
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Oh btw, I hereby reserve all superpowers involving the sea cucumber and/or the honey badger.
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Oh btw, I hereby reserve all superpowers involving the sea cucumber and/or the honey badger.


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No.


HEY! You said my honey badger power was cool!
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HEY! You said my honey badger power was cool!


No power is cool except for the ones I make.

Fool.
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@Wintergrey Hmmm.... My main gripe with Astrid at the moment is that she seems pretty one-dimensional at the moment. I mean, I'm not asking for too much, but this sheet is pretty barebones. I would like a bit more detail in the personality and backstory sections. This site can help you. Of course, if you need ideas, I (And someone else) can certainly help you.

I also think there should have been greater repercussions for burning down an entire business. NEST probably offers a "first one" deal for first manisfestors, but they'll probably place her in a special holding place for burning down a building. Not to mention this could open her up to one hell of a lawsuit. lol

Also, can you, uh, rewrite her power section so that's it's a paragraph like the other sheets instead of a list? That list just looks weird.

And please change that last name. It be making me cringe.

You're not rejected, Astrid just needs a little work.
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alright, ill get to work on it tomorrow
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Is this RP still accepting? If so, are there any primary elements that haven't been claimed yet? Or if I were to make a character that was more along the lines of information gathering and support?

Read all the lore and such and this RP interests me.
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alright, ill get to work on it tomorrow


That's the spirit. =)

Is this RP still accepting? If so, are there any primary elements that haven't been claimed yet? Or if I were to make a character that was more along the lines of information gathering and support?

Read all the lore and such and this RP interests me.


Yup. As for the primary elements... I'm gonna assume you're talking about the Elemental types. Off the top of my head, we have Fire, Water, I can't believe it's not Plasma!â„¢, Electricity... and I think another element. Gotta check.

Information types are neato too.

Edit: Stars. Stars are the last element.
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Really? Huh. I would've thought at least one person would have made an edgy dark element character or something. There's always at least one from my experience. Good to know.

I'll see if I can get to making my character either tonight, or tomorrow.

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Really? Huh. I would've thought at least one person would have made an edgy dark element character or something. There's always at least one from my experience. Good to know.


I'm going to be honest here: we all hate that character type. lol
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And done. Lemme know what you think.

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@RPGSlime Well, I have to say that he's somewhat interesting. I do like his bavkstory and power. Just a... few things I have to note.

- When coding the sheet, you're supposed to put the information in between the infdent tags. That's how it gets indented. lol

- What kind of gold we talking about here? Pure or mixed? Because, pure gold is soft. If he made a knife and tried to stab someone, it wouldn't do too good. Same with armor. Though, you could say it's magically mixed with other metals when he does his thing.

- Gold is also pretty heavy. You could add that as a weakness or something. But that scene where Nicholas threw the golden grass wouldn't work unless the NEST agents were pretty close. Or he was pretty strong.

- The kickboxing feels a little tacked on. Sorry, but most people on this site use martial arts as a "I know martial arts, that means I win all fights!"

- It also feels a little weird that they'd send him to the Academy before he gets powers. Thooooough... I get a feeling you're going somewhere with this.
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Edited and all that good stuff.
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@RPGSlime You missed the attire section - it needs the indent. And just cut the "and all gold produced by Ivan will be of an almost indestructible quality" part, and he's accepted.
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