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Had some really hair tearing moments with using the hiders but I managed to pull through!
Now I just need to add my centaur abilities,weaknesses and my opinions on others.
@NarcissisticPotatoTelion's First day of being disowned from house Velkfur and already a marriage proposal(no matter how shallow)? He should run away from his household name more often.
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Had some really hair tearing moments with using the hiders but I managed to pull through!
Now I just need to add my centaur abilities,weaknesses and my opinions on others.
@NarcissisticPotatoTelion's First day of being disowned from house Velkfur and already a marriage proposal(no matter how shallow)? He should run away from his household name more often.


XD I don't think Elia every really wants to get married but she did really want to talk to him and marriage proposals seem like the only way to get things done around here! But yeah, the guy got pretty lucky with it! :P
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@NarcissisticPotato Super impressive! Well done!! //applause
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@NarcissisticPotato Wowzah! That's all I got... Interesting take with the whole diary thing, truly inspired!
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@NarcissisticPotato Wowzah! That's all I got... Interesting take with the whole diary thing, truly inspired!


Thanks! ^.^ Hope you didn't mind me adding a little backstory between the characters?
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Thanks! ^.^ Hope you didn't mind me adding a little backstory between the characters?


Not at all! I quite enjoyed seeing our characters meeting. Should make for some interesting RP!
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Not at all! I quite enjoyed seeing our characters meeting. Should make for some interesting RP!


Good to hear! It should be quite interesting to see them meet if he knew about the prospects of a marriage as well!
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@NarcissisticPotato Hoska Dorr wasn't a man who kept secrets! :P So he probably found out at some point what could have been.
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I should also add that Telion is now now disowned from the Velkfur family now. Just want to clear that up in case someone wants to use the Velkfur family for story reasons.
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[@Narcissistic Potato] A girl tries not to go on a tangent with her CS and here you are tempting me to flesh out Linta's backstory further. XD I like it, nicely done.

I would point out, however, that Linta is the oldest child of two. I also intend to add some things in her CS (I don't think she really deserves that leg, do you?) but I'll let the OOC know if anything important changes.

In any case, I like her! Now to 'bravely' face the 'opinions' section...
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[@Narcissistic Potato] A girl tries not to go on a tangent with her CS and here you are tempting me to flesh out Linta's backstory further. XD I like it, nicely done.

I would point out, however, that Linta is the oldest child of two. I also intend to add some things in her CS (I don't think she really deserves that leg, do you?) but I'll let the OOC know if anything important changes.

In any case, I like her! Now to 'bravely' face the 'opinions' section...


Apologies, m'lady! T'was not my intentions to force you to flesh out her backstory! :P



Ok, thanks, I'll change that part of it! Also, I wasn't trying to imply that Linta is bad but mainly that Elia really doesn't like her. After all, if Linta was told by her father to ask the King to have Elia arrested then she would more than likely put all effort into it. Plus, she's from a military background so she wouldn't hold a peace-lover like Elia in overly high regards (probably)!
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Apologies, m'lady! T'was not my intentions to force you to flesh out her backstory! :P



Ok, thanks, I'll change that part of it! Also, I wasn't trying to imply that Linta is bad but mainly that Elia really doesn't like her. After all, if Linta was told by her father to ask the King to have Elia arrested then she would more than likely put all effort into it. Plus, she's from a military background so she wouldn't hold a peace-lover like Elia in overly high regards (probably)!


Oh no, I thought your story was fitting! She was raised to follow orders, after all. Besides, I'll flesh her views out a little more in the next hour or so so her motivations will make more sense ^_^

***EDIT Also, do you mind if I use your diary idea for the opinion section? I can't think of a better way to do it, you trendsetter you.
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Oh no, I thought your story was fitting! She was raised to follow orders, after all. Besides, I'll flesh her views out a little more in the next hour or so so her motivations will make more sense ^_^

***EDIT Also, do you mind if I use your diary idea for the opinion section? I can't think of a better way to do it, you trendsetter you.


Sure, go for it! You don't really have to ask me, though; it's just a small idea I had to show her character a little better!

Also, that's just how I roll, setting trends 9-5!

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Oh, as well, I added to Linta's background. Added something pretty important, I recommend giving it a once-over. ^_^
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Oh, as well, I added to Linta's background. Added something pretty important, I recommend giving it a once-over. ^_^


Oh dayum! Nice work, Obscene!
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@NarcissisticPotato *reads Elia's opinion of Gwen* Well, that's not really what I had in mind for her, but wow do I really like that version of her, so it's settled.
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Oh dayum! Nice work, Obscene!


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Omg! Obscene-Senpai quoted me!

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@NarcissisticPotato
your character looks good :) I loved the opinion pieces. Made me laugh :p

@Obscene Symphony
They are "free" to go home to keep up their appearances, but they will be less able to control the monster within. They will begin to want to be "close" to Lord Nixus as they will feel more in control of the monster.
So some may choose to stay after giving some excuse to their family
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