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Just to piss off everyone, I'll do my review in blue.



I don't really have any issues with this character. Seems fun, doesn't seem broken. Her ninjutsu game is pretty strong for someone who isn't a heavy hitter but not so much as to be unacceptable. It also mentions she uses lots of kunai but you omitted the weapons section. A small thing, but I'd like it if you fixed that.

All in all I give her a pass. Just be sure to address the small things before I go full on anal retentive about it.
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thanks ^^

Also, do you plan to make a Skype group or something related? I know some bigger RPs have some alternate form of quick communication other than to post in the OOC and wait for a response that might get lost among the pages. I know myself I am more reliable to respond faster on Skype than in the OOC. Just curious.
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skype n shit


Yeah, all three of us GMs have Skype and use it regularly. We will set up a chatroom that can be used by anyone in the RP with Skype. Just give us your usernames if you want in.

Or satisfy your Tsundere dreams and don't.
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thanks ^^

Also, do you plan to make a Skype group or something related? I know some bigger RPs have some alternate form of quick communication other than to post in the OOC and wait for a response that might get lost among the pages. I know myself I am more reliable to respond faster on Skype than in the OOC. Just curious.


I was waiting for more people to come in (especially some veterans that said they would) but if you want feel free to add me on skype under Vurige_Vos to get that skype group going.
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<Snipped quote by OneWayOut>

I was waiting for more people to come in (especially some veterans that said they would) but if you want feel free to add me on skype under Vurige_Vos to get that skype group going.


well actually, funny thing is @j8cob and I go way back so I already have him added in Skype. ^^

I remember he taught my character how to walk like a lady once. And whacked her with a bamboo stick when she couldn't focus properly.
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@OneWayOut Ah right, I'll let J8 add you then.
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@OneWayOut Ah right, I'll let J8 add you then.


Betcha 10 virtual bucks he has no idea what I'm talking about. ^^
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He does. I just asked him but he was being American (and thus stupid) and was actually getting a drink instead.
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1x Laugh Laugh
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I can't even deny as an American that we're dumb. Cause we are. XD
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you have no proof you remember!
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I can't even deny as an American that we're dumb. Cause we are. XD


I know. In the skype chat Americans get ridiculed a lot. Weird enough though, we have a lot of Americans too.
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@GrafRoy Zeppeli Char is good, gracing you from turning her into a meme a well. Got my seal of approval.
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I agree. Nothing wrong with it.
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Here goes!

~cs ported to cs section~
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Here goes!



Review in red.
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I made some edits, reworded the custom jutsu and added more to the story, though I'm a bit unsure, I didn't want to, y'know, 'play the red sages' in a way, so I purposely avoided pointing directly how he joined them and kept it vague (also because I have no idea of how to do it, hehe)

Doton - Iwayado Kuzushi
Only really useful in a cave, it's not that useful but it's a cool technique. Maybe you should make this into a custom adapted technique that is the same, except it is also possible to create small earth slides with this and cave in the ground beneath a battlefield, it might be more useful. Cause I don't know how much caves we'll be visiting.


I only included this jutsu because of the fact it's somewhat bread 'n' butter for Iwagakure nin in general (at least, it was). I wouldn't mind it not being used unless we're in cave, because baby, once in a cave it'd be shooooowtime.

I've added another B jutsu though, just to give him more destructive power.
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@Nero I don't care how he joins them or you 'playing them' because I don't even know myself for the most part. Organisation is probably very loose anyway, rebels are not that good at getting effective infrastructure.
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@Nero can you give a range on the earthquake? Also I doubt it'd be strong enough to destroy a village at a B rank technique - that's like S-rank shit. If you can give it a range then I accept it and you can place it in the character sheet area.

Good character though, I like it a lot.
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@Nero can you give a range on the earthquake? Also I doubt it'd be strong enough to destroy a village at a B rank technique - that's like S-rank shit. If you can give it a range then I accept it and you can place it in the character sheet area.

Good character though, I like it a lot.


Done, I also reworded it so it sounds less S-ish.

Thanks! I went ahead and threw it there, now with the range added.
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