Hidden 8 yrs ago Post by Pair of Hearts
Raw
OP
Avatar of Pair of Hearts

Pair of Hearts Seen Three Much

Member Seen 7 yrs ago

Okay, so I was doing a bit of quick writing to oil my rusty gears back into business by doing several random scenes in my head. Then I realised, what if other roleplayers were to write the same scene? How would they pack the punch?

This isn't a competitive thread, but rather, one to help us all learn and grow from others' strengths.

Before sending in a new scene, make sure to specify the most pivotal points in the scene itself. Any unspecified details will be choice of the author to modify. If it's a rewrite, tag/mention the last person who did that scene.

Keep all criticisms objective and constructive. Don't be a jackass by being crude and personal.

I'll post one first. Feel free to rewrite, or add a different scenario. (All genre welcome!!)



Point: It's raining, a guy gets home, and he's in for an unpleasant surprise.

2x Like Like
Hidden 8 yrs ago 8 yrs ago Post by Luminosa
Raw
Avatar of Luminosa

Luminosa

Member Seen 8 yrs ago

@Pair of Hearts

Good idea, I'll try!

Hidden 8 yrs ago Post by Pair of Hearts
Raw
OP
Avatar of Pair of Hearts

Pair of Hearts Seen Three Much

Member Seen 7 yrs ago

Point: Someone important to a young boy is leaving.

↑ Top
© 2007-2024
BBCode Cheatsheet